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Old 01-06-05, 02:30 PM   #1
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~Babylon~ vs Tha Sickness

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Old 01-06-05, 02:32 PM   #2
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Tha Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 02:32 PM.
 
Old 01-06-05, 02:33 PM   #3
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~Babylon~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 02:33 PM.
 
Old 01-06-05, 03:02 PM   #4
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sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches
but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness
kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest
wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath
its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got
but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not

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Old 01-06-05, 04:36 PM   #5
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just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/*
tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/
ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/
electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/
electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/
only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/

*Hanging Gardens of Babylon - check ya history books
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Old 01-06-05, 09:25 PM   #6
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uuupppppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnn....................... ............. VOTE NIGGAAA!!!!!
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Old 01-08-05, 09:49 AM   #7
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Tha Sickness

just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/*
tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/
^okay okay, good opener

ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/
electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/
^uhm, nah, doesn't do the trick

electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/
only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/
^weak closer

Your first line was real nice but what was up with the rest of them? Just try to get more hardhitting punches and personals in there to bring this cat down. Vocab,structure and flow were aight though but i didn't really find anything bold in your verse. But you got potential,keep on dropping and read other battles...no hate...

~Babylon~

sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches
but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness
^decent opener

kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest
wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath
^haha,liked last line,first one was bleh...

its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got
but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not
^weak closer

You didn't really try at all but you had two nice punches in there. Vocab,structure and flow were straight on too. I've seen better from you and you're lucky the other cat didn't come harder cause you didn't really put any effort in it i think but my vote still goes to you for more hardhitting material...
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Old 01-08-05, 10:00 AM   #8
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Voted For: ~Babylon~

sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches
but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness
haha...nice
kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest
wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath
haha nice
its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got
but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not
ok finisher
breakdown...that was a tyght verse real short i hate that...but nice


just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/*
tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/
nice
ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/
electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/
ok
electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/
only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/
ok

breakdown...your verse was medicocre....not enuff to edge in this battle...your punches weren't hittin as hard as babs...


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Old 01-09-05, 03:36 PM   #9
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checking the pollz.........................................
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Old 01-09-05, 07:50 PM   #10
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UPPIN' FOR THESE BATTLECATS!!!

nice shit crhymie. you got this. oner.

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Old 01-09-05, 09:04 PM   #11
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Voted For: Tha Sickness

winner-tha sickness

flow-tie
punches-sickness
finisher-sickness by a little bit

both verses were good
can yall vote on my battles plz
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Old 01-12-05, 04:50 AM   #12
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upps.............................................. ......................
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Old 01-12-05, 05:03 AM   #13
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Voted For: ~Babylon~

umm battle was kind if weak...nothin really stood out from both of you but i gotta go with babs cuzz he had a betta ryhme scheme n wasn't sayin no dumb shit...sickness nobody wanna check a history book da get ya punchline u should explained it...but theres not much 2 explain on dis wun..

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Old 01-13-05, 12:13 PM   #14
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Old 01-14-05, 07:42 PM   #15
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Voted For: ~Babylon~

sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches
but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness
nice punch here
kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest
wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath
kinda weak though, but it landed
its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got
but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not
decent closer


just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/*
tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/
weak punch here
ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/
electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/
nah, played concept here kid
electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/
only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/
nope…self-glorification here…

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