(x) CeEd vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines...go ova n get dqed
No Crew or hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


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Check in by: 12-29-04 at 06:16 AM

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(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 04:11 PM.

MIC CHEK
Kid's stupid...acts like hes won nothin' except The Miss World,
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH...shit we just found out that Marv's a Girl,
No Worries MaRVJay>>>>> Just turn your name to MaRV's Gay
now your allowed to join the Saturday mornin' Gay Parade,
now MaRV mite attack me for me bein' a Kiwi..................
MArVs wack, hes like the Herman without the PEE-WEE,
But no Beef MArV, you have dope lines and some good flow,
You can pick up guy's now, like they were your blonde hoes,
has "1009" at the end of his name,kid's old.... i own this game
I will roll him like i wuz rollin a dice.. Christ, your like the Obie
without the TRICE

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-04 11:53 PM.

uh!.......

dont tell u'll get da lead if u snitch,im so far a head of u bitch!
"x" ya name off rv's top mc's nobody eva "ceed" u was sick*..
like "virgins in a row" my "lines is tight",but y u aint ryhmin rite
ya team only "tuff on a keyboard" they not da "voilent-type"..
fam ya rappin is wack,act up stupid ima start clappin da mac..
he gon need a "dr." not "seus" if slugs hit dis "cat in the hat"
i saw footage of dis lame,dat 45 trust me i'll put it 2 ya brain
like takin a "pic of a throwback" u'll have "bullets in ya frame"
dis fag be lyin 2 da labels talkin his flow n bars is oustandin...
ceo's thro away his demo go in they office n leave him out-standin
he told u u hott? pleez ur a reject datz not spittin fire....
im tho ask each vet! di ceed like "afta recess" dis "kid is tired"

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

x came ass, wack concepts...bad punches...all you talked about was him being gay, which is gay. Nothing was really good at all.

Marv had the violent type line, and the cat in the hat line...which were decent. Didnt like anything else really.

so v/Marv

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This was a aight battle...Structure goes to MarvJay...Punches came weak from marv and Ceed came harda with that subject...Flow goes to Marv though.I couldunderstand what he was sayin since his structure was good...Vocab was a tie..Personals was a tie...Multis go to Ceed but Meta go to Marv

Close battle
v/MarvJay1009

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yo good shit marv god shit....uppin this peepz......

yeah dunn...uppin 4 some more votes....

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

I gave this to my man Marv.... He got it by the extravagant wordplay... that's my new word by the way lol... I seen some punches not that hard hittin'.... ya verse makes you think so that's why I enjoyed it... not too much personals here but enough to get the job done.. feel me? to speak on X ceed's flow... it seemed like it wasn't ya style like you tried to copy Marv'z swagger... and you didn't (x) ceed lol...

oh yea... (x) ceed.... uh ya sig... those lines u quoted were WRONG...

Born 2 brew up storms stir up shit kick up dust CUSS till I slurr up spit

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

ok my vote goes to jay man elevate u had decent punches but yo verse was kinda borin n da otha cat i just wasnt feelin your verse i wasnt good at all stucture was shitty both of yall need to elevae

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin polls....glad to hear that u joining mindz kollide marv......

lawless shut the fuck up drop a vote or fuck outta this site

Voted For: (x) CeEd

OK breakdown....

(x) CeEd:

MIC CHEK
^^^get rid of this
Kid's stupid...acts like hes won nothin' except The Miss World,
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH...shit we just found out that Marv's a Girl,
^^^^^NO.... wack flow.. wack punch... WACK concept
No Worries MaRVJay>>>>> Just turn your name to MaRV's Gay
now your allowed to join the Saturday mornin' Gay Parade,
^^^first line... lol... but wack... second line... very weak
now MaRV mite attack me for me bein' a Kiwi..................
MArVs wack, hes like the Herman without the PEE-WEE,
first line.... NO... second... an aight concept... not bad
But no Beef MArV, you have dope lines and some good flow,
You can pick up guy's now, like they were your blonde hoes,
omg.... ^^^1st lines... this is a battle... dont stick up for your opponent.... second line... give it a rest with this gay shit
has "1009" at the end of his name,kid's old.... i own this game
I will roll him like i wuz rollin a dice.. Christ, your like the Obie
without the TRICE
^^^the 1009 thingy.... YOU FUCKED THAT UP... that was a concept which could have been a god personal... but nooo... ...I own this game.... you went into self glorifyand the last line... was just fucking gay.... so really you fucked this verse.... it was wack flow... that was no personals... punches were weak... you ended up saying good shit bout your oppenent.... and the verse was newbeish..
....nuff said...

ok.... marv..... im not even gonna break down your verse... its was soo fucking newbeish..... get them fucking " things out of your fucking verse... they insult the fucking readers... your verse was crap.... they was not structure in it... your multies were wack.... the personals made no fucking sense at all... basically just shut the fuck up... its was a pathetic verse... you got a problem with me saying this shit then pm me and we'll battle.....
your both newbs.... elevate

lol^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ my man 4fil hahahah fuk up lol uppin...................

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

LOL I like this battle but heres how i feel

Ceed
You did great mayne you always elevating and thats wat I Like bout you but Still Marv came Harder And Thatz why i Gotta go on his side ..................IU didnt see anything wrong wit ya verse xcept like yo structure all Those Punct. Marks make it look ugly remember that mayne ........now

Marv
I Like ya verse it was a perfect example of what I Verse should be ...............Except Ya Structure mayne leave all Those Marks out if ppl dont know how to read a Rap verse then thats They Ass Thats why ppl state That If you dont understand then You dont Vote ......so There keep up the good work Both Of You

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