Premanition vs C-Bo
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
3-0 KO
first to 4 votes win
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-04-05 at 04:02 PM

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C-Bo has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 04:02 PM.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:46 PM.

it was P's idea to battle...and guess whos bout to be staralized...
it's P and his verbally 'trippin lip' like your 'mouth is paralized'...
damn...sorry P...I didn't mean to murder u with the first lines...
of absurd rhymes...horrible at math...but I bet I can work 9's!...
i asked for someone to battle...so perhaps ur askin fo beef...
have him 'twitchin his leg' in defeat like watchin a 'rabbit in heat'...
I'll tarnish ya soul...keep talkin and i'll throw a dart in ya throat...
Pre rhymes always fall back like a car being parked on a slope...
MAB left u...no back-up...u will lose and there isnt a choice...
i'll shove a 'pencil' thru ya hand to make sure you gettin da point...

This Kid Comes Here Grinnin, So I Gotta ‘Crack a Smile’…
Turned To ‘Bitin’ Cos No-One Liked That C-Bo Style…(*)
Mum Shud’ve Got Stomach-Knots Wen Undergoin That Caesarean…
Research?…
Got Sent To Da Mental Hospital 4 Someone To Compare Him To…
At Least You’ll Die Where You Came ‘From’, It’ll Only Take A Minute…
Cos Bitch, Only Time You In The ‘Hood’, Is When I Suffocate You In It…
Bringin This ‘Bully’ To Justice, It’ll Be Nice To See You Fall…
Battlin ‘Premanition’, ‘Don’t Try To Walk Before You Crawl’…
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Didn’t Need 10….Blah
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(*) – Accused Of Biting All The Time, Most Recently Against Weedex
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Match Me

Voted For: C-Bo

okay........battle was kind of wun sided 2 me...no hate so if i dont vote 4 u dont take it personal....prem u had about 1 good line and dat was da personal other than dat nothin else a few of lines didn't ryhme n ya ryhme scheme was trash...cbo nice verse good punchlines i dont know if u bite or not im just votin da pencil n point line is kind of played....

opener-pre..good personal
structure-c-bo
punchlines-c-bo
wordplay-nun
multis-c-bo
creativity-c-bo
finisher-c-bo kind of played like i said but was betta than his
enjoyed-c-bo.....look like prem under estimated da kidd...

links r in da sig..return it ya'll..n my vote is explained 1

Voted For: Premanition

This Kid Comes Here Grinnin, So I Gotta ‘Crack a Smile’…
Turned To ‘Bitin’ Cos No-One Liked That C-Bo Style…(*)
tight personal, gd flow to it, gd opening punch -9/10
Mum Shud’ve Got Stomach-Knots Wen Undergoin That Caesarean…
Research?…
Got Sent To Da Mental Hospital 4 Someone To Compare Him To…
dis didnt really flow, original punch tho -7/10
At Least You’ll Die Where You Came ‘From’, It’ll Only Take A Minute…
Cos Bitch, Only Time You In The ‘Hood’, Is When I Suffocate You In It…
diss,flowed well, gd wordplay,original-7.5/10
Bringin This ‘Bully’ To Justice, It’ll Be Nice To See You Fall…
Battlin ‘Premanition’, ‘Don’t Try To Walk Before You Crawl’
put the nigga in his place wid tha closer, gd flow, gd solid punch -8.5/10


it was P's idea to battle...and guess whos bout to be staralized...
it's P and his verbally 'trippin lip' like your 'mouth is paralized'...
gd mult, gd flow, vocab jus not a punch tho -7/10
damn...sorry P...I didn't mean to murder u with the first lines...
of absurd rhymes...horrible at math...but I bet I can work 9's!...
mad wordplay, 1st line self-glorification :nono: no punch tho -7/10
i asked for someone to battle...so perhaps ur askin fo beef...
have him 'twitchin his leg' in defeat like watchin a 'rabbit in heat'...
errm basically..no..werent feelin the concept or the delivery ...no punch again - 6/10
I'll tarnish ya soul...keep talkin and i'll throw a dart in ya throat...
Pre rhymes always fall back like a car being parked on a slope...
ok decent bar, original - 7.5/10
MAB left u...no back-up...u will lose and there isnt a choice...
i'll shove a 'pencil' thru ya hand to make sure you gettin da point...
ok closer, gd personal, but last line aint a punch tho 7.5/10

ok battle Prem got it overall

RTF -links in sig

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This was feedback posted for C-Bo
 

Shit I wrote this and dont have enough posts. It will have to be feedback:

good battle. I enjoyed this. Good to read and entertainng from both.

C-Bo: It was a good opener and you knew it. I think you probaly thought of it and was quite happy, hence mentioning it tn the next line. Good use of metas and the personals were good. The hard hitting punches clinched it tho. They were on another level. "have him 'twitchin his leg' in defeat like watchin a 'rabbit in heat'..." -This was my fabourite line, it was totally mad. If it was some of the cats i seen on this site, you would have beaten them with just that line.

Preminition: I liked your opener aswell, hard hitting and personal to the core. This battle had some great openers and i couldnt say whos was better. The close was good aswel but to be honest i wasnt feelin the middle as much as the open and close and that was why i thought you lost cos C-Bo's middle was really good and yours was mediocre. No hate to you tho fam, i just think you came out a little weaker and C-Bo is good anyway, we have seen this a lot.

This was feedback posted for C-Bo
 

this was a good battle to both, but i can't vote because i don't have over 100 posts.

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pz

Voted For: Premanition

gotta go wit prem....this battle was dumb close.....but prems punches was better...most of c-bo's punches were played...and i dont like that....prems punches were alright...couldve came harder wit them tho...but still it was str8.....but i would have to say ur opener is what cought it for me...it was nice....real close tho.........

\V/-Prem

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Voted For: C-Bo

vote has 2 go 2 c-bo GOOD shit homie,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, good drop....................

it was P's idea to battle...and guess whos bout to be staralized...
it's P and his verbally 'trippin lip' like your 'mouth is paralized'...
damn...sorry P...I didn't mean to murder u with the first lines...
of absurd rhymes...horrible at math...but I bet I can work 9's!...
i asked for someone to battle...so perhaps ur askin fo beef...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ good opena lol hahah good shit preminiton no beef good shit,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wuznt feelin ur rhymes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,anywayz yo c-bo good punches phat structure and flow retur nthe favour in the battles below......aiight ,,,,,,,,return the favour

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This was feedback posted for Premanition
 

good battle to both but i cant vote - dont have enough posts

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Voted For: C-Bo

i thikn Cbo too this battle. i was feelin his flow more. i thought his punches were better n more creative. plus his structure was way better. some ight attempts at multies. Premanition needed a better flow for a win in this battle.
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This was feedback posted for C-Bo
 

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This was feedback posted for Premanition
 

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