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MaRVJay1009 vs TheWackestMC
IP: B52C 6258
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 01-14-05 at 04:06 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
yo why u make da time limit like 3 days??...well check in fam
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IP: B52C 6258
TheWackestMC has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 10:33 PM.
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IP: 3240 794D
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 05:11 AM.
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
look.....
its a easy win dis lame should just 4-fit,i aint gonna force shit. but all u do is "pop-shit" like u took ya "gun & aimed at a toilet" whut u know bout breakin da law bitch,you taken a lose quick u tried out 4 enternal illness i saw da roster & ya name wasn't on it* i know u panacin dogg,marvjay u wanna c da man get a lose.. my crew fukked ya girl her cunt like ya "avatar" we all "ran up dem walls"** u aint seein marv datz it!,cuzz im speakin hard facts dick!..... dude is really THEWaCKESTMC rv he's not bein sarcastic...... i live it 4real,when im grippin da steel i'll put a clipp in ya grill why would i spit unlimted lines vs a nigga who got limited skill me? ofcourse-sick...n you? a soft-bitch,u make me nauses.... and all ya punchlines like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "force-it" u suck why be madd cuzz ppl on rv dont read your shit...... u from "MARYLAND" so whut im from ny & i "B-MORE" sick*** ya bars i read em n stop but tryin bein a cop join da force..... i'll have da put ya "fingers in a church" 4 u da get ay "point-a-cross" u dont wanna war fam i just bought a nice clean dez eagle ....................i'll run in ya crib murda ya family cops a be sayin whut da "kid from da 6th sense said" i SEE DEaD PPL take ya 3 days da pre write go jot ryhmes,it wont top mine ya verses r like "miss cleo" cuzz u dont have "no -hott-lines".. nuff said explainations..... *he tried out 4 enternal illness & intesify effect showed me da roster his name wasn't on it... **u know how girls pussy has walls...and look at his avatar unda his name u'll get it ***he's from maryland which is where baltimore is at they call it b-more..so i meant i "be more" sicka than u
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IP: B52C 6258
its that wack nigga back again
lets get into it im hungry for MC's, off this bout i'll b feedin treat ya like Artest, ya punches get u kicked out for the season dog its no doubt you'll be screamin or you would b if ya didnt have a damn mouth full of semen son, i'll make ya blood bubble up like ya pourin soda and ya girl give me brain, as if she an organ donor u should cut to the chase, u got nuts in ya face from hangin wit those male sluts that he chase this pansy, is just a snitch to the cops in general only time dude go BAM! is when h'es watchin Emeril nigga this ya final days, cuz my primal rage make me throw punches that detach ya spinal cage u could try to stay,.. but u should fly away cuz if u dont ya career is gon die today any notion that i hear jay's dope is absurd cuz from the looks of yo shit, i really dont concur ima choke this bird, this Jay gon b Blue when he lose nigga couldnt find a win wit Sherlock and too many clues!...1 |
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IP: 195A DE06
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay1009 had this. I liked his first 4 lines. Reall dope. its a easy win dis lame should just 4-fit,i aint gonna force shit. but all u do is "pop-shit" like u took ya "gun & aimed at a toilet" whut u know bout breakin da law bitch,you taken a lose quick u tried out 4 enternal illness i saw da roster & ya name wasn't on it* Nice ^^^ Your flow was off and structure was weak. Work on that you will always get props like me. lol. If i had to rate your verse I would rate it 8/10 You didn't come that hard but you were still flowing better. TWMC you were simple. Try not to say im hungry for MC's, off this bout i'll b feedin treat ya like Artest, ya punches get u kicked out for the season dog its no doubt you'll be screamin or you would b if ya didnt have a damn mouth full of semen That was a weak opener and your closer was worst. You don't really got a dope style of rhyming and hitting properly with punches. But you'll elevate. lol. if i was to rate your verse i would rate it 4/10 So I guess MaRVJay1009 gets this. ![]() RTV in my muh fucking sig.
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 28AD 5545
goodlookin fam uppin 4 more votes ppl
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Gone
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IP: 6258 5D0D
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Ok Battle 2 Much Readin Ta Do.... Openor=Marv,Otha Kids Wass Self Gloryfin Strukture-Twmc,Marv Had Stretched Lines Punches=Marv Had Stronger Punches Personals=Marv And He Explained His Personals Vokab=Tie Both Had Some Vokab Closer=Marv,Good Personals Punch And Closer Marv Took This Cus He Came Harder Wasn't Bein Self Glorified Like Twmc Wass Tha 1st Line Or So..Marv Also Had Consictency Through Out His Entire Verse.Onli Thing His Strukture Wass Off In Some Places Keep Ya Strukture Ta Getha Dont Stretch Ya Lines...............
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin 4 some more votes
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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM. This thread has been automatically closed." ^^he's scared.lol |
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin 4 some more votes ppl
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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM. This thread has been automatically closed." ^^he's scared.lol |
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