Quit Bittin' People Shit
 

yo yo yo

I've been on Rv's for a while every sence it was Rap Battles
I'm known as a vet. you known as a baby playin wit rattles,
An you wanna wild pic an chooze ova my ol' shit an repose it
man you like tha rest of tha thieves on here a sta-tis-tic,
A non-rappin non-writtin bittin ass nigga
somebody who kan't fin fa hisself like baby Moses on tha Nile Riva(river),
I suggest you stop bittin an reposen other peoples threads
cuz spam ain't gonna be able to protect tha virus dat'll get put in yo computer head,
On tha real learn how ta write yo on shit
or get yo ass diss on every week by my clique,
(Then I'll come bac around an stikk a fork in ya bitch I'm done)



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

yo up some feedbac an I'll return tha favor

That was hot, nice wordplay. and good punches


Can i get a witness


*throws up gangs signs*

I'll put down a honest vote in your battle


i'll appreciate if you do the same


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167724

Thanx bra...........all tha tyme

shits pretty dope homeboy, i like the way u use your rhymes, kinda witty, if u wanna collab then get at me dogg

thanx.................I'll keep tha collab in mind

Fo real'z if ya wanna callab Uknown, holla at me fam. Pm me the topic and the number of lines. Check my recent freestyle's open mics in my sig, if you dont think i qualify. Peace.

bet dat's kool..................

its straight man some good flow and like the wordplay, not my style but you can bringin' it, keep spittin

thanx C.S.
I'll return ta favor soon I hope

yo gimme some feedbac I'll return tha favor on anything u want

it was pretty good coulda been a little longer but that's ok otherwise i loved it and i appriciate u leavin tips and thoughts that shit really helps when i'm creating my next song and when u get the chance post on one of my threads with an example of bar spacing then i'll for sure know what u mean

hmmm its decent....vocabs eehhh a lil played..its overall bouta 7/10.....it wasn't too basic...but it wasn't too complex.....so yea...good drop..keep um coming...

Thanx yall


keep given me some feed an I'll return tha favor

gimme some feed an I'll return tha favor

Your rhyming was actually decent, and you kept an ok structure together. Your flow was not to bad, and you got your point across.

Now read this, click the links, and laugh at a herb, for what you wrote just fit in amazingly well to what your about to see.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=166416&page=2

That's the om I dropped.

Below is an incredibly retarded persons response. Dont' worry keep reading yes, it gets better.



Now it may look like I have bit it, but OH NO! I actually wrote it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=Insect+Society

I'm Given Light off rb, and he bit my om, for his battle. If you need proof look at the dates. I DROPPED my verse in august.
His THREAD was OPENED in september.

So instead of Giving feedback, make fun of this fucking retarded herb for accusing me of biting. When he bit off me, than trys to bust my ass for it.

Damn bra dats fuked up

I know it really pissed me off.

hell yeah well the him to come an read my shit maybe he'll get an idea

gimme mo feedbac I'll return tha favor

come on yallllllll uppppppppppppin feedbac

hot shit home boy

thanx Explizit........................uppin

yo son dat shyt wuz wack, cuzoo, first of all i wuz baq thurr at RAPBATTLES, and i'm vet i don't even need to steel ya shyt niggga, i wuz juss sayin', cauze i gotz a hook lyke dat on ma song/ demo dat i juss made, me and ma bwoyz made dat shyt up igght cuz, i lyke ya diss, itz sick but yo i'm not gonn' diss cauze i kno i didnot bite shyt, ya heard peace nigggga

Bra I wasn't even talkin bout u I talkin but tha other cat called Young Twista

I like it

It has a Nice wordplay It was very Original ........................except You first Bar Was weak i jus hade to Tell you that But the rest was great

keep up the Good work

Thanx king.............................

Mo feedbac yall I'll return tha favor

come on people do Unknown a favor give him some more feedback

wtf was that...lmao

ok first of all your vocab was played and weak...there wasent realy anything creative about your lines you spat.....most of your lines were forced and i jsut pretty much didnt understand at all....and please dont say im a newbie cuz i would str8 werk you...but sry man thats what i feel...pz...3/10

-parallel

cuz its cool but u couldn't do shit to me in a battle NEWBIE

u have 24 hours to drop a link or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

i thought this was wack it had alot of emotion thats the good i can say about it
but other than that the wrod play was horrid i would have merked that topic
but ne ways yeah u need to read more to broaden your horizons maybe that way u wont have to curse ever other word just the whole post was not hip hop at all
elevate

omg you called me a newbie...fuck you...i would trash you

this cats a dick rider...^ the only reason he wins and the only reason he loses is cuz he ducks...and shit its the truth

Yo yall slow but hey fuk it I got my point across 3pages shit I'm cool so I don't give a fuk about tha 2 feeds before da last one so close dis shit I'm through