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01-03-05, 12:05 AM
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I walk & walk over you
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Love In First Sight Ft.black Queen
IP: 56B1 4C65
GIRL POINT OF VIEW.................
Im lookin in your eyes you're lookin mine
i just met you but I feel like this love can last a life time maybe its because of all of the butterflies kept inside arranged myself to see a different perspective in life I burn out all memories, and all that used to be is gone, Because you're a good man and this relationship is gonna be long you're my king and im your queen, but you need much more than a crown you need the whole world, for everything that you keep doing to my mine Im always down for you and the things you want to do, When the times right i might make you mines and call you my boo, BOY POINT OF VIEW.................. Girl I felt my stomach turning butter flies, I couldn’t explain why I’ve felt this way, I guess? Yea, I think it was love in first sight Girl when I looked at your face, it was worth a thousands of words More words than the dictionary, this is one love sickness that couldn’t be cured In my mind, I was thinking we can have an moonlight dinner at the beach Or me and you could be at my place, making love on the bed, messing up the sheets Damn I think the only way I can get close to you Is in a dream, can we make this an reality? I don’t want to make an flaw relationship, I wanna trust you, but are you trust worthy? ya beauty is like an 200k diamond, its shaped and its gleaming. Damn my eyes getting watery My lungs are getting tighten, damn I guess I have to let you go, hope one day I can call u my babe
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01-03-05, 12:22 AM
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Gone
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IP: D890 FA2C
Wow Nice Piece 4rm Tha Both Of You Shit Wass Hott All I Can Say 10/10 Dope..................
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01-03-05, 12:23 AM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: DB6F A83E
ay i'm feelin dis drop.......not only tha flow n lyrics but like tha way u had it organized n set up........gotta say dis gon b a 1 of tha best drops in January. big ups.......1
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01-03-05, 12:33 AM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 56B1 4C65
Damn, thanks for the feedback. I never thought it would be this "hot". lol. uppin
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01-03-05, 12:36 AM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: DB6F A83E
aiyo return da favor mayne i got a new drop called Eternally.
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01-03-05, 12:54 AM
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IP: 56B1 4C65
^^ O alright let me get at that fam...................peace
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01-03-05, 12:57 AM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 56B1 4C65
Links
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1868451 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1868458
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Last edited by MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ : 01-03-05 at 01:00 AM. |
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01-03-05, 06:55 PM
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IP: 057B 81F6
Alright Thanks For The Feedbacks. Uppin For More.....
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01-05-05, 05:25 PM
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Classic
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin fo feedback
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01-07-05, 02:59 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: D25C B392
queen:
came very well good stucture and you were pretty creative in there..used some very nice flowing and you were so creative with the lines it was like wordplay  it was actually..lmao..but you also used a few of multis...idk you jsut came very creative not really any good vocabulary but the rest was good...8.1/10Mista: shit you gettin better even tho this wasent the best ive seen from you it was alright try using vocab more same with queen...if you used vocab it would be more emotional...you know...but your stucture was good tell the end it kinda fucked same with queens...but the flow was good and your were creartive and emotional about it...good job..8.2/10 return the favour in the sig...pz -Parallel |
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01-08-05, 11:27 AM
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Classic
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IP: 28AD 5545
thx man fo da feedback
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