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"Metal Mulisha"
[[Intro]] March 23, 2004: 9:00 PM On Hott 93.7 Live Radio Show Buc Star (Dj): Yo Yo Yooo, Its Ya Boy Buc Keeping It Hot In CT... Today For Ya Enterainment Pleaser We Got None Other Then Ya Boy... Abstrakt!!! Abstrakt: Ayooo, Whaddup Fam... Its Ya Boy 860 Repping Back To My Home... CT One Love. Buc Star:Ya Ya Yeeeeah, Thats Right Never Forget The Home Town. So Wha-Whadup, You Gone Spit For Us Or Whaaaaat Man???. Abstrakt:Haha Of Cooourse No Worries I Got This... Gimmy A Beat I'll Tear It Up Before We Get Into The Interviews. Buc Star:Aiight Here Ya Go, Sawl You Play Boy. Abstrakt:Aaaw Shit, Straight Beat I Got This... What, What... Ayo, Abstrakt One Mic One Track To Lite Blaze To Suns Path... Coincide The Broke Glass My Life Whole In Tact? Ya Never Was That... Strickly Av's Beef Weed Tounge Quick When I Stand Like Deph On His Knees... So Many Fake And These Street Take To Kids Like Him, Pleeeeeease... Realest Ever Since 03, Know Me, Whole Preach... Like My Words Demo Faggots The Way I Ride I.D... Buc Star:Ooooooh Shit, Oh Mayn Abby Got It Go Off Now. Ayo So Who's Ideph? Fill Us In Whats Goin Down Homie? Abstrakt:Haha Was Waiting For That One... __________________________________________________ ___________ May 10, 2004: 8:30 PM On 1075 WGCI Doug(DJ):aight you listen to 1075 WGCI..the hottest for hiphop and R&B,we got the hottest artist this year,Indeph in the building wassup Indeph:whats good Doug..waddup Chi-Town,waddup TC Doug:I'm coo man,but it don't seem too good with you,I hear you and Ab got some shit goin on,is it all rap or do you feel hatred for the dude Indeph:that nigga a bitch..go to barbershops for panty lining.. skateboarders aren't rappers..a baords the only way abby grinding Doug:OOOOOOO..Indeph getting on the flow now.. Indeph:you already in it abby..we cant settle now.. cuz even beefing with you if bringing my level down fuck you..fuck your life..I hope you die..eyes open and all This not wax..I'ma crush you faggot..I'm focused and all. I'm out this shit Regular Text = Abstrakt Bold Brown Text = Indeph [[Verse One]] War Of Word Strechin Verse To Girth Of More... Weapons In Store Stressing Yet In Steps For Support... Under Oath Now My Brothers Mutter Anthems Of Coast Out... Prevoked Towns To Cities In These Sounds We Stand To Hold Down... Marching with support signs..to nails in baseball bats..and city's nation backed with bulls jersey's,and red bandanas.. wrapped around there wrist..with fuck Conneticit Bannas..Chanting for there leader.. recording the event with digital cameras In Fallow In Rage With All Of The Wethered Community Cuts... Like Imunity Up Fucked Is Not A Stage We'll Alow, Opportunity's Up... Days Ours For Taking Our Pacients Ageing To Scars... Art Making Our Greatest Have Tastes For Layin Crews Chared... both sides listen to there leaders lyrics.. for motivation..ready for prison neither fearin..any of the other cases..left side chants Indeph,right side yells abstract.. while both leaders just laugh at it..like what are they mad at [[Chorus]] New Head Hit The Studio Split Led To A Name Unknown... Rise Threw Ranks As Infalls The Same Unknown... Now Its Coastal, Chi-Town To War With All-a CT... Toy Soldiers On Wax As Heat Lets The Metal Mulisha Breath Free... [[Verse Two]] Final Strech Breath Hard Ech My Side Full Of Rep... Enemies Eyes Full Of Spark Our Hearts Sun The Stress... Ready, Steady Let Me Speak Final Words Rally The Birth... Give Way To Agressions Levy Ease The Burn n Gladly Gun First... mele weapons release..guns drawn..from handguns..cannons.. as a moment of silence.surprises by.shots fired at random those hiding under cars..as those shoot the gas pump.. both hesitate..sure silece..as neithr side stands up Just Then I See Deph Run As I Flea Left To Cetch Up... Speed Up n Jump, My Arms Around His Knees As I Get Struck... surprises and baffled..confused as I adjust,and I see stract got one hit to his jawbone..quickly intensly he hit me back Caught Him Wita Right My Left Off, Missed The Strike, "SHIT!"... Legs Tripped As I Lay, Deph Above As Blood Sprays From Tite Hits... take advantage of his mistake..throw my kicks hard to his face.. slips of his lips..and I trip..we both down..with our fists made [[Chorus]] New Head Hit The Studio Split Led To A Name Unknown... Rise Threw Ranks As Infalls The Same Unknown... Now Its Coastal, Chi-Town To War With All-a CT... Toy Soldiers On Wax As Heat Lets The Metal Mulisha Breath Free... [[Verse Three]] Something Happend When Swinging,Scrapping, Attackin I Lost Red... Saw Clear Head Straight Paused n Saw This Action Was Not Best... The People That Suffered Evils Pasted They Didnt Even See Who They Smothered... All For Me Now I See Another Task Creep Hold, Stop This, Let Music Play Loves Clove... My compation for the fans and there situation..its my fault what kind of example I'm sending when even I faught?..to think people died..all there feeble lives..this is wrong and while it was goin on I didn't even mind.. I didn't even try The Fuck Is This Doing? I Gotta Get Up, Moving, Stop All This Fueding... My FANS! Shit, They're Falling Got Shot This All Just Such Shit, What Am I Doing... Stagger Up Grab The Cuff Of The First Man I See n Get Battered By Bats... NO ONE HEARS ME! FUCK! My God! A Shot Rings As Bullits Shattered My Grasp... I run outside,my awarness is all lost..one of my shoes falls off..to call off the war..that we all caused..I stand on a station waggen..yelling to save the damage..but bad aimed just happened..I get shot to the pavement rationed.. ------------------------------------------------------------ Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170655 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1877157 |
yo this shit is real ill.... it was defenatly a diffrent concept...............
i give yall b ig props best shit i seen in a while........ |
alright I liked this a lot..even though it seemed long as fuck...the whole transition from person to person made it go by quickly...imagery was really good...i could see everything that was happening...message was really dope...i liked the whole concept period...vocab was dope...flow seemed a bit off at times...but i could have been readin it wrong....regardless.....very nice piece
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one of the illest open mics i read ever 2 of the best topical writers together shits dope...
the flow was on point from both people and i never got offtrack at all through all of it and it seemed long but it really wasnt...when i first looked at it i thought it would take a while but i read it its not that long with the chorus and all i liked the intro i never seen that before a very creative idea and how everything was laid out i like the back and forth style...vocabulary was on point as well from both and everything was basically top notch really good shit props to both... if you could check out me and anxietys first collab in my sig its dope... thanks, peace |
yo at first i was helal confused like wtf in the hell is going on, but after that it was straight dope man feeling everything it sorta had a toy soldiers feel to it stay up doing ya thing big ups melv
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Mayne You Got 2 Ill Topical Writers Doing An Callab Together, And You've Got An Dope Open Mic, Nice Shit, From Both Sides. Peace.
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holy shit im surprised that was some straight dope shit...it had this style i heard on rb but it wa saudio but it was exacly like it but not audio..this was straight dope...i like how both had there thign with the flow...ight check it
abby: man you threw it down very emotional and you were very good and creative with vocabulary and i liked how you used real rank witty metas in there very nice....you used some pretty good wordplay in there and your stucture was great...nice multis...done well with the flow you did a dope job...very emotional peice form both of you...i think yall had your things...but yall was tight...NO NEED TO RATE PURE DOPENESS indeph: ight homie you as well threw this down...so dope...you love this i supose like damn your emotion is so damn rank i dont understand how you do it so well....very good with the vocab and the multis were beyond dopeness lmao...;)....but shit you were so creative with multis n all that and also your pictures both ayll created for me was good..and the wordplay indeph you were working well...both yall cats threw it down..NO NEED TO RATE PURE DOPENESS yall really threw it down an honest all around rating for yall together...9.7/10 i jsut liked how when yall would switch it would still go good together kinda like a keystyle...good job... -Parallel yo abby link in the sig thanks..indeph already droped feed so abby thank you...and good luck at life..pz |
damn, crazy shit....
real creative... i liked da beging, wit the radio interviews, those were hot and i havent seen much shit like dat before (especially liked indephs, since he did it on mah bday, lol....) ab man, vocab was insane on dis one, i was definetly feelin it... both of you had a real nice flow throughout da whole thing, real good work... props guys, some of the best stuff ive seen from both of you.... |
Nice shit brutha... Radio shit at the start was pretty creative, and it sort of made it sound more audio which is what I like.. Even though I hate text OM's, this one was pretty good..
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the top topical duo is here this will be one of the nominated peices ofr open mic of the month
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damn........this was one hot as fuck topical collab......this OM was very creative as well....this shit needs to be put in OM of the month
9/10 ~~~~~~~``stay up |
this was good...........its a good concept overall, almost reminds me of eminems toy soilder video.
imagery was real good......you wre both creative and had good vocab..wordplay was good just overall this is above most Om's here you guys are on another level with thsi shit |
2 ill topical heads????...mayne this is tight...no critiques from my pert just like the others cos they've said enuff...the concept was very good...the whole piece flowed very well...i really enjoyed it...gd job both of u..keep it up!!:thumbup:
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aye. this was hot no doubt...i usually dont come in these forums, but that shit made me change my mind. that was hot...for real. i was lovin tha all around flow on yall's verses, and ur styles and shit. i think tha verses really formulated well together. i was loving tha structure and tha rhyming in this. i think this could be OM of tha month......well, of course it will be to me, this is tha first one i looked at this month, but i feel aint nobody on RV gunna blaze like that. but i kinda felt tha intro was irrelevant. i wasnt really feelin it, but w/e. tha flow was nice. yall got skillz, real talk....stay up.................................1
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Good Piece,Nice Lil Intro Part With Tha Radio Broadcaster.Nice Topic Fa This Piece,Good Chorus Like How Yall Both Had A Section In Each Verse.Didnt Like How Some Parts Of Indeph's Verse Wass Stretched Otha Than That Overall Good Drop 10/10 If You Beat Me Fa Open Mic Of Tha Month Imma Kill You Lol Good Shit Yall...............
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one of da dopest collabs eva damn dis shyt was hot good shyt fellaz hope top hear more -1-
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This may have been the dopest OM I've read ever. The wordplay was unrealistic and that opener wit Abstrakt and Buc, was a ill intro. I liked it alot. Funny this was Indeph's from Illnois. I'm from CT and so is Abstrakt.. dope piece man.. just hit up my sig.. BAttle with Terror2005, been up since bout.. 2 months ago.
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this was hella dope,dope vocab and dope topical heads,werd this was dope,this should be in the rv award for the dopess open mic,good both of you,
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chea that shat wuz dope. i cood picture tha shit in my hed. it wuz dope how it went back n 4th frum indeph 2 abstract. good rymez, werd
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dope.definately dope. hot ass topic with tight ass rhymes. 9.5/10
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aight..this was a very creative drop..both yall sick wit the open mics....nothin changed here..i like the way yall both mixed into all three verses..and the concept was good..abstract..nice lines mayne..some of yall vocab was just amazin......the structure was spot on...some nice multies to make ur bars...some nice rhymes in there too..
indeph...another strong open mic..once again the structure was good...some nice lines in there...some nice vocab again...really feel yall on this one guys....yall both stayed on topic all the way through....i cnt really fault ya..all i can say is keep em comin..i enjoyed this one......keep it up..pz |
yo this one of the hottest shit i read on this site yo the flow was sick very creative and dope. yo the radio conversation and the damn vocab is sick. These are some real lyrics yaw took ya time wit it and kept it original nice concept 2
vote da battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166112 |
hell yea dats wut im talkin bout dat shit was pretty damn ill yall keep it up and stay up homies ~1~
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that was hella nice.....oh shit..................where do i begin....
deph: you was ill with the lines...none stop hot lines i couldnt stop reading...you just lack emotion..you ahve some but it osunded good becuase ABBy got mad emotion....you guys are a good couple.... STRACT: you had mad emotion...nice emotion i can hella feel everything that you where feeling.....you should do another collab like this again...i like that radio shit.... you also had the crazy ill lines but you had lots mmore emotion... all in all...the best collab i have seen thus far...the are like a perfect couple...where one lacks the other makes up for.......nice....... |
Whoooooooa...
shit was dope mayn :)... nice topic to it also, both of you did a hell of a good job on this piece ..*probably should be the OM of the month*.. ^^^dont quote that :D^^^ but anyway dope shit tho fasho 9.9/10 |
overall this wuz a nice piece.....
1st verse- the flow got off on some points....8.5/10 2nd verse-some stuff sounded too repetitive.........9/10 3rd verse-flow and structure got off on a few spots.........8/10 overall- nice piece, my favorite wuz the 2nd verse whover that wuz/i think that this piece is very good, but wwill not be able to win the award for best om, unless noone brings any hard comp......just cuz i said a lot of bad stuff about this doesnt mean that i didnt like it, its just how i am, i belive that everything can be improved no matter how good it is, im a critical person.....this was a good drop, i'd rate it.........9/10 *i wasnt feeling the chorus though* |
dis shit was goooooood I liked it this has my vote on winning it this month here is what I want it to win for right her.
Yo Yo Yooo, Its Ya Boy Buc Keeping It Hot In CT... Today For Ya Enterainment Pleaser We Got None Other Then Ya Boy... Abstrakt!!! Abstrakt: Ayooo, Whaddup Fam... Its Ya Boy 860 Repping Back To My Home... CT One Love. Buc Star:Ya Ya Yeeeeah, Thats Right Never Forget The Home Town. So Wha-Whadup, You Gone Spit For Us Or Whaaaaat Man???. Abstrakt:Haha Of Cooourse No Worries I Got This... Gimmy A Beat I'll Tear It Up Before We Get Into The Interviews. Buc Star:Aiight Here Ya Go, Sawl You Play Boy. Abstrakt:Aaaw Shit, Straight Beat I Got This... What, What... Ayo, Abstrakt One Mic One Track To Lite Blaze To Suns Path... Coincide The Broke Glass My Life Whole In Tact? Ya Never Was That... Strickly Av's Beef Weed Tounge Quick When I Stand Like Deph On His Knees... So Many Fake And These Street Take To Kids Like Him, Pleeeeeease... 99.8/100 hit up on da links peace |
damn!
This is dope. Original like wat. I had to re-read it to understand it 100%. but....... hey yo im speachless. |
this shit is nuthin but illy vanilly kids. i mean fuck if i was gettin my own record label i would sign yall.... but i dont yet but man that shit was hot.... it had some hot concepts and different styles so u didnt get bored of reading it since it is so long.... but i liked that shit for real....
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ayo that was dope still... I had to read it like two or three times to really grasp the concept but it was good!!
I like the combination of both of y'all, I dont usually read open mics(as a matter of fact I think this is my first or 2nd) but it was nice...keep it goin yo!! I dont know if I should say this is the best because I haven't read any other yet but I think it's pretty good from what everyone else is saying.. word up!! :thumbup: |
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You're damn lucky this stuff was dope because i usually hate long drops like this hehe...
I loved the intro with the radio thing, made it more real and got ya focussed right from the start in my opinion. Chorus was hot and you both attributed equally nice drops. You work well together so don't change the winning team (like ever ;)). You both described the situation in a very vivid way which gave me the feeling i was right in the middle of it all. Vocab was impressive, feeling your flow and structure was tight. Emotion and wordplay were pure dopeness like some cat above me stated already. Despite the lenght of the drop, you guys managed to keep me focussed the whole time which is quite hard to do so in my case...was very readable, enjoyed it! Keep on dropping hotness like this, i'll be looking forward to it! |
...Really great piece here guys... The wording you used in here was really good The flow was on point and the emotion was strong Topic was different then most of the pieces i see in here Keep at it and eventually you'll be as good as me:thumbup: But nah seriously this was a really solid piece i give both of you props on this Deffintly nominating it for OM of the month and yeah return favor on my poem Imperfection |
this kinda long - but this was tight man - all verses was good - good vocab and good imagination - i liked how both Ab and Indeph flowed - this here was pure dopeness - 10/10
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nice drop...Ab had some good wordplay, metas, vocab, creativity...you had a tight verse cuz...it flowed nicely also...Indeph also had some good metas, wordplay, vocab, creativity...you had a consistent flow also...both verses were interesting and enjoyable...keep droppin hot shit...10/10
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yo dope ass shit, and whoeva said that it has a Toy Soldiers feel to it
Yea it does, it reminds a lot of it BUt the Open Mic was fi-ya it was just crazy One of the best I eva read, strong shit Keep at it |
i liked this the opener was dope the way you too went @ each other that was some good imagery there...the piece doin4 lines each was nice both took off each other nicely and carried on the piece...this was a dope open mic some real originality and decent creativity in this 9/10...most def keep em comin
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Damn yall damn i liked that shit alot it was tight
ill say a 9.5/10 man ok it was mad nutz yall was on together it looked like you were the same person wrighting it and i mean that i really do all i got to say is ILLNESS on this drop |
Yo that was a hot lil' piece.
Yo Abstrakt I like the way you was flowing and you had a hot little vocab. So keep your shit up ight. Indeph same shit, flow was hot, hot lil vocab, but the way you was handlin your shit was hot too. So both yall keep your shit up and i'll catch up to all yall lata, ight niggaz. |
In ahg urry.. it was very good.. yea it seemed long..but... the oepn mic im making it a lil longer.. ehh... yea...
That radio station thing that you put up ther was dope.... Indepth... umm... yea it was dope... but i didnt like soome parts.... Abstract.... came alright in the begingi.. but it wa dope at the middle and end.... |
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