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Notorious Verses vs Flamin Barz
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Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 02:02 AM.
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Flamin Barz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 02:45 AM.
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This nigga must be a mirror the way he fuckin copy's my style
groupie hoe knows, so he puts in'a "Flamin" like he's been wylde Idenity Theft? nigga you were never a super dooper all you droppin is shit, seizure patient holdin a pooper scooper Another battle? say the third time's a charm but i aint harmed I mean when elton john see's you, it's settin off his gay alarm Want fame? as you go up hope's creek, aint got ya paddle wet claim that i stack losses, when you aint even won a battle yet...lol This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves Im out-lappin you the fastest, you movin slow like chilled molasses Flow's lame, cant get the picture, so u leave nerds without dey glasses Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair Got more fingers on one hand, than you do in ya whole battle-log Simply no potential, like a gun-shy hunting dog Take a good look at this vet...i been set, check to da left im from "da bricks" C'mon i don like clits but anyday I'll eat this prick! |
i'll peel ya top - without givin a fuck if you're even ill or not-
ur like a hotel in vegas-n your crews only there to fill the slots- you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin- n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit- ur just full of wackness - n you'll die thinkin i wouldnt blast the tech- u could be a doctor to animals - n still wouldnt have the status of a vet- fuck u and your threats - man nothings changed since ur back- infact - i actually covered my fuckin eyes n still saw u were wack- what round is it? - i think its time for me to ground this bitch- almost got my dik hard cuz u smell like mo pussy than a pound of fish- i jus wanted to bury you 6 feet - but you're penetratin too far- shoulda stayed 'reppin alcatraz' cuz you aint never 'escapin my bars'- heres some an advice - use ya mouse to click the elevation thread- cause i spit lyrical leprosy - leave you with black dots like raisin bread- |
Voted For: Flamin Barz
this was a close battle but i give it to flamin Opener-Notorious Flow- Flamin Structure-Flamin Multis- Notorious Punches- Flamin Personals- Flamin Like i said pretty close but flamin u pulled it off good Quote:
^^^Thas a dope ass line |
hmmm.......uppin fo mo votes. yo son i don understand how flamin got personals, because he coulda took dat ryhme off anotha site. cuz he didnt adress my name once, but wat eva!
uppin ^^^^ |
This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
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Voted For: Notorious Verses
Notorious Verses - Good spit, it flowed well and your punches were hitten hard. Best Line - Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair Worst Line - Got more fingers on one hand, than you do in ya whole battle-log Simply no potential, like a gun-shy hunting dog Flamin Barz - Iight spit, your flow was not to bad, and you had good multi's and some decent punches. Best Line - ur just full of wackness - n you'll die thinkin i wouldnt blast the tech- u could be a doctor to animals - n still wouldnt have the status of a vet- Worst Line - you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin- n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit- OVERALL - Good battle here, both flowed well and brought hard punches. I think NV won this battle though. His punches were harder and his flow was better. Barz, just throw harder punches next time and maybe personals. Vote - Notorious Verses Return The Fav http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=169298 |
yo ummm......uppin dis battle^^^^^^^
1-1 tie, break it! |
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Voted For: Notorious Verses
Good Battle Pretty Hard Decision But Hea It Is.. Openor=Tie,Both Ok Punch But Flamin's Line Had Self Glory Strukture=Tie,Both Easy Ta Read Punches=Nv,His Hit Harder And They Got Strait Ta Tha Point Multis=None Vokab=None Up Ya Vokab Wordplay=Flamin,His Words Went With Everi Thing In His Bar Personals=None Up Yall Personals Closer=Tie Both Ended Tha Verse Good....... Iight Nv Took This Cus Of His Punches His Punches Wass Harder And They Wass Strait Foward..He 1 This Onli Cus Of His Punches /V Notorious Verses.................. |
Voted For: Flamin Barz
Flamin Barz i'll peel ya top - without givin a fuck if you're even ill or not- ur like a hotel in vegas-n your crews only there to fill the slots- nice opener you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin- n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit- this was aight ur just full of wackness - n you'll die thinkin i wouldnt blast the tech- u could be a doctor to animals - n still wouldnt have the status of a vet- coo fuck u and your threats - man nothings changed since ur back- infact - i actually covered my fuckin eyes n still saw u were wack- lol....kinda funny but this was coo what round is it? - i think its time for me to ground this bitch- almost got my dik hard cuz u smell like mo pussy than a pound of fish- lol...nice i jus wanted to bury you 6 feet - but you're penetratin too far- shoulda stayed 'reppin alcatraz' cuz you aint never 'escapin my bars'- kinda played heres some an advice - use ya mouse to click the elevation thread- cause i spit lyrical leprosy - leave you with black dots like raisin bread- coo closer 8.0/10...you had a coo verse cuz...some coo punches in there...flow was coo too...your multies was aight but i think u need to work on them a little more Notorious Verses This nigga must be a mirror the way he fuckin copy's my style groupie hoe knows, so he puts in'a "Flamin" like he's been wylde aight Idenity Theft? nigga you were never a super dooper all you droppin is shit, seizure patient holdin a pooper scooper lol...coo Another battle? say the third time's a charm but i aint harmed I mean when elton john see's you, it's settin off his gay alarm this was coo Want fame? as you go up hope's creek, aint got ya paddle wet claim that i stack losses, when you aint even won a battle yet...lol lol...nice This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves coo Im out-lappin you the fastest, you movin slow like chilled molasses Flow's lame, cant get the picture, so u leave nerds without dey glasses this was coo Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair lol...funny and nice Got more fingers on one hand, than you do in ya whole battle-log Simply no potential, like a gun-shy hunting dog this was a good punch but the flow was kinda off Take a good look at this vet...i been set, check to da left im from "da bricks" C'mon i don like clits but anyday I'll eat this prick! this wasnt too good of a closer and the 1st line was kinda stretched 7.5/10...you had a pretty good verse too...some pretty good punches...but in some areas...the flow was off and a couple of lines were streched |
uppin da dam battle, come on people lets vote herrrrrr
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This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
real nice notorious was feelin yuh verse 4 real i never heard a guy use the word prick lol but you worked it in well umm my favourite line was "Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair
You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair" had me rollin on the floor laughin but ummm yeah anyways nice verse for reel...1 |
Voted For: Flamin Barz
Lololmao This Kid Had Some Decent Shit... Nver See Either Of You Before But Both Came With Some Decent Material... Here's The Quick Breakdown: Flow: Barz Punches: Tie Wordplay: Barz Personals: Torious Opener: Barz Closer: Barz Overall Enjoyment: Barz Barz Really Just Had A Better Verse In My Opinion... Even Though They Were Pretty Even Barz Took Advantage Of That Unlimited Lines... Wich Definatly Helped, And His Overall Content Was Just Stronger Aswell... Aiight And Here Are Some Highlights From The Battle: Natorious: Want fame? as you go up hope's creek, aint got ya paddle wet claim that i stack losses, when you aint even won a battle yet...lol Nothing To Special, Just A Blunt Line That Got The Point Across. I Enjoyed It Even If The First Line Was Almost A Bite From 8 Mile. This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves Lol It Made Me Laugh I Just Liked It. Maybe Its Cuz Im An Asshole And You Talked About A Cripple Haha. Barz: i'll peel ya top - without givin a fuck if you're even ill or not- ur like a hotel in vegas-n your crews only there to fill the slots- Nice Witty Line With Some Pretty Decent Wordplay. Hott Bar Overall. you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin- n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit- Lolmao, I Love When You Just Completely Make Someone Look Retarded. Nice Bar. i jus wanted to bury you 6 feet - but you're penetratin too far- shoulda stayed 'reppin alcatraz' cuz you aint never 'escapin my bars'- Eeeeh Kinda Played. But Since It Ties Into A Personal It Makes It A Dope Bar. Nice Shit. heres some an advice - use ya mouse to click the elevation thread- cause i spit lyrical leprosy - leave you with black dots like raisin bread- Lolmao Kinda Stupid But It Made Me Laugh. Again Probally Because Im Retarded But Never The Less Nice Shit Aiight, Thats It Nice Battle Both Of You... Barz Just Had A Better Overall Verse In My Opinion... Ayo If You Could Return The Favor And Check Out My New O.M.: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702 Thanks Alot I Apreciate It... Stay Up And Keep Elevating... .One. |
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Voted For: Flamin Barz
aight cool battle ya'll.....da reason i voted 4 barz is cuzz his ryhme scheme was betta n he wasn't sayin shit dat didn't ryhme rite no personals a couple of nice punches n multis.. verses...u had some okay shit but i didn't like da way u ryhmin..ya ryhme scheme look like u just stared rappin ya punchline concepts were okay but u just wasn't sayin it rite...fix dat ryhme scheme fam opener-barz structure-barz punchlines-barz creativity-a tie multis-barz wordplay-nun finisher-barz personals-verses enjoyed-barz...nuff said RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG |
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yo uppin dis battle ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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return dat favor ya'll
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Voted For: Notorious Verses
iight...yo both came dope with punches and stuff...but NV had more interesstin lines...FB ya shit was dope too but ya gatta work a lil more on ya structure...u repeated the 6 feet stuff and gave u a minus..u had multies...but to me they seemd slightly forced...NV besides the fact u gettin my vote u still gatta work on ya structure too...MAKE THEM OF THE SAME LENGTH..try rapin ya verse to ya self so u hear if it flows well and stuff...count the sylabs..iight...anyways NV gets my vote for a more interesstin series of punches/personals and a decent pack of wordplay.... keep it up both!!! return honest vote...link below...thanx |
Voted For: Notorious Verses
close battle good ass battle NV got it doe his punches hit harder den flame his verse was good also jus NV shit stood out more NV work on your structure homie otha den dat yo verse won it |
Voted For: Notorious Verses
wow i dont really peep text battles much and this one was a really good one...yall both had some nice fuckin punches...FB wit that pound of fish had me crackin for days be my hats off to you on that one...but my man NV came more consistant readin his verse line for line he had slightly more punches then you na mean ... these lines right here i think gave him the advantage... This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves Im out-lappin you the fastest, you movin slow like chilled molasses Flow's lame, cant get the picture, so u leave nerds without dey glasses Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair.... but yeah yo yall both did yall thin but... My vote is - Notorious Verses iight 1ne... |
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