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Kordozar vs Skriptz
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 01-08-05 at 10:49 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 10:27 PM.
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 10:28 PM.
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[Center]This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire...
Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire... He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined.. 1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men... Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group.. He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop.. Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz".... His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss.. Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs.. .........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle? Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread...... Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread...... ********** Troop Koed Him He 4rm 213 Like Snoop Left Legendary Mc's B4 Cuts And He Posts In Tha Why Thread Alot |
Uppin Skriptz Verse.......................
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No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected
The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected The More I Read Your Lines, Seems The More They Got Worse Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse Ya Battles Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Flow, Its Terrible This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere Dont Get Tha Punches Or Personals? Dont Vote Then Hoes... |
Good Luck Mayn....Just A Friendly Battle Though :)
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Voted For: Skriptz
Kordozar: This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire... Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire... Eh, decent opener He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined.. 1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men... Opener was played, punch was weak Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group.. He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop.. Decent personal in 1st line, 2nd line was weak Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz".... His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss.. Wack setup, punch was aight Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs.. .........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle? Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread...... Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread... Wtf? Is that 3 lines or 4? Skriptz: No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected Setup was decent, but punch delivered. Good opener The More I Read Your Lines, Seems The More They Got Worse Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse Good punch, link made it harder because it proves he's wack Ya Battles Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Flow, Its Terrible This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel Weak Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself Decent You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat Decent bar overall, punch didn't hit that hard though Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere Decent closer Winner: Skriptz, with harder punches. Although you kinda over did it on the links. They were all there for one concept, and just one link would've sufficed. Kordozar, your personals fell short, and wouldn't made sense for shit unless you had the explanations. RTF @ a link in my sig, honest, explained votes only. :thumbup: |
Voted For: Skriptz
ok.............. skriptz-i thought you had a good verse overall..........multeis were there and in good use didnt over do it.........good rhyme scheme structer...........punches were hard hittin........and consistant kordozar- i thought your verse was all over the map with all puctuation...........................punches were ok not any killers........structer was iffy..........but ok verse overall..... v/skriptz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Thanks...
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Uppin..............
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Voted For: Skriptz
he posts in tha why thread alot? whats wrong with that, i made that thread...lol...nah, but i wouldnt feel right votin on this battle, seeing how i made kordozar co-leader of NOK. this was a good battle. now i dont have second thoughts about him being co-leader. yall got skillz. i was guna RTF for this battle skriptz, but u guna haf'to gime another battle. if u got any battles open right now, i'll get those, otha wise i'll wait til u do....but i was feelin ur punches, and personals in this..i think kordozar came harder with tha punches part, but u got tha personals category. some of ur lines were stretched too...i dunno who won this...good battle both yall...............1............... Removed |
oops...in tha back of my mind, i kept tellin myself to post feedback, but i accidently clicked tha wrong one. i meant to click feedbac. i'll get that vote removed for yall....sry bout tha mixup....no HATE, but i cant vote on this.....
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Oops Meant Ta Press Feedback Plus He In Mih Crew!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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i PM'd strobe to have my vote taken off......111111111..................
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up..............
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Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz..Lol My old name Skriptz-You was decent. Nice Opener and Closure and Nice Puzzlty. All of it came together in a balance. Nice Vocab and no mistakes. Flow was good and Some Punches were alright but not to Good. But structure was decent and I say 6/10 Kordozar-Structure was kindof waste. Not to good opener but decent Closure. I though Baked bread was hard and dough was soft. mess up right their. balance was stabled and no Multies to much and flow was going and going and it was just wreckin me 5.9/10 v/Skriptz For Decent Verse |
Voted For: Skriptz
nice flow.you merked this kid KOR: i thought you where good becuz fonyur record...but your the prime example of "record dont mean shit"...your verse was hella sorry....and your structure was fucked up...your personals hwere lame aswell as oyur punches....just take m ore time to elevate....battle more vets..its the only way to elevate..... SKRItPZ: you killed with your strucure..with your punches and with your personals...in my opinion your personals kuiled him the most....i wasnt feeling the end but it was good enough to get the win...stay up.....keep elevating........i know oyu got an alias.....lol vote=skriptz |
aight thanks...uppin
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Voted For: Skriptz
kinda mediocre battle, but it was still pretty close but i think skriptz edged this one out. i was feelin is flow n strcuture more. plus i thought his punches hit a lil harder his verse was just more enjoyable to read holla at me wit honest opinions http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171803 |
aight i'll hit that up when i can lata though.....
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aye yo...can you hit up one of my most major slept topical battles with flow intellectual.....sorry no link but its right below this one
uppin this battle |
good match Kordozar, :cool: uppin
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172703 forgot to say return the favor... And then I will return one of yours and it can be like a chain vote
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Uppin this old-battle
good battle Kordozar, much respect to you :thumbup: |
uppin.............
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Voted For: Skriptz
This Fello"Solja"Got Merked By A "Troop",But It Wasnt A Friendly Fire... Usin A Pottasium And Drop Of Water Kid Still Wouldnt Catch Fire... decent punch liked the personals 9/10 He Wass Fired 4rm "Subway"So His Chance Of W"rapping"Wass Ruined.. 1 Of A Kind Kid,First Ever Ta Be Concealed 4rm 2 Men... okay decent diss personal all good 8/10 Be4 Legendary Mc's Made Cuts He Left Out Tha Group.. He Wants Ta Be A G So He Bit His Location Off Of Snoop.. Okay good personal wordplay is iight 7/10 Kids Not Made 4rm Rappin Like Poetry "Skriptz".... His Bars Are Streched Than Tha Ladies Gap 4rm Floetry Iss.. Okay diss hear nice punch 8/10 Tried Ta Elivate,But Fell Down Like Pepl With Amputated Legs.. .........Why Should Skriptz Verse Even Go In This Battle? Theas A Question You Post In Tha Thread...... Soulja42o? But Kids Softer Than Baked Bread...... okay closer liked the simile so its a 8/10 Overall: 40/50 No Punches, It’d Be A Miracle, Even If Kordozar’s Hans Were Connected The Difference Is, I Rise To The Occasion, You Just Stand Corrected Good opener I liked it 9/10 The More I Seems The More They Got Worse Looks Like You Got A Lot Of Bad Mistakes, Not Including Your Verse Okay wasn’t as good I would give u 6/10 Ya Kid Are Wack, Not To Mention Your Its Terrible This Kid Thinks He's Underground, Cause He's In A Toxic Waste Barrel Nice punch deserves a 10/10 Said You Stopped Battling, Well You Should've Stayed On The Shelf Those Versus You Made, Were Bad, You've Got Permission To Hate Yourself Okay that was like a filler but it was okay 7/10 You Think You Hard Kid? Ya Head Will Explode, You'll Be Retarded In Fact I'm Enlarging The Wack, And Your The Biggesy Opponent To Harbor The Stat Okay nice punch I gotta say like the multi’z I’ll give you a 10/10 Got A Repelant For Herbs, Good Thing This Is Internet, Kord Can't get Near He Thinks His Future Is Bright, Cause He Got His Head In Tha Sphere Nice closer dawg shit was nice give you a 9/10 Overall: 51/60 Vote to skripts |
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