Battle Rules:

8 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

No Dickriders

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-20-04 at 10:44 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:14 PM.

This Geek Bites Off Everi Thang Including Zeke..
He Tries His Best In Rappin But Iss Truly Weak..
No Chance Of Beatin Me Like Glen Rice Being Tha Star Of Tha Rockets..
All These Biblicle Names And He's Still Not A Phrophet?
Im Confused Why Is This Church Boy Acting Bad...
This Pussies Identity Gets Changed More Than Maxi Pads..
4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
This Iss Like Vanilla Ice Beatin Cass In A Battle..
In Prison, His Gluteuos Maximus Wass Auctioned Off Like A Raffle..
I Was Close Ta Merkin Zeke Until Galieth Showed Up..
Like A Vaccum He Picks Up,Suck Then He Folds Up..
I'll Make His Rappin Carrier Fade Like A Bowl Cut..
Ya Personals Horrible And Ya Punches Suck..
U A Earl Boykins Me Shaq So Im Not Punkin Up..
This Kid Is More Of A Nut Than Eminem..
His Onli Intercourse Came 4rm Bisexual Gentleman..
If Iverson Wass His Dad He Wouldnt Be Tha Answer..
Hes More Pussy Than A Group Of Female Exotic Dancers..
His Chances Of Surving Iss Slim Like A Victim 4rm Cancer..


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..Galieth.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 10:33 PM.

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Voted For: ..Galieth..

My vote goes to Galieth for better punches and multis as well plus had the better overall verse....he had creativty and stuck with personal for most of the rhyme....not only that but the wordplay was there..or at least an attempt at it....u had everything else pretty much and it seemed to come out better than Exponents...the flow was about the sam here but everything else i have to give to Galieth....i'm fair voting so peaceezy....

and please hit up the battles in my sig and return tha fava vvv

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Voted For: ..Galieth..

*yawn* easy vote

punches- Gali, overall u kept em comin, not all hard hittin, but still good. ET, u self glorified, and weak punches in the end.
personals- Gali, good personals. ET, started out good, but fell off at the end.
metas- Gali, had better ones overall. ET, u had more, but in this case quality beat out quanity.
multis- Gali, becuz u had em.
word play- Gali, overall not the best wordplay, so work on it. ET, i dont even see wordplay.
structure- Tie, both structures werent that great, but i could read em.
humor- Gali, blah.
flow- Gali, really not the greatest flow, it fell of a lot in one line, but it wuz aight overall. ET, fell off too much, little at a time.

Gali, work on your word play, and also on your vocab. Kinda weak at those points, other than that pretty good.

ET, u self glorified, played punches, need to work on word play and multis, and also work on personals, cuz he wuz a prophet.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/..Galieth..

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

yo muh vote goes 2 ..exponent.. dude held it down from metaphor 2 flo he wuz tha best

return tha favor..vote on muh battle vs. Jim Crow

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this wuz one a tha best battles i read in a while on here

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

i think exponent got dis in da bag. his punches were a lot betta in dis battle and his vocab, he used his wordplayto perfection. dalieth u been stned by david.........lol. ur vocab was not as sharp
v/exponent

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