A.K.A. vs Roy Merkem
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 120

Check in by: 01-16-05 at 06:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 06:12 PM.

Roy Merkem has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 08:08 PM.

Aight Check It

This man is no Competetion Is I been here longer just to follow
Cut ya head off replace it with a punkin So we can call you sleepy hollow

Your Flows Is wack Stop rapping just continue to sing
Slap ya head and make you have more Dreams then Martin L. King

Go Pre-Write Get ya Geek Gang and call Self a Clique
Too Good, lol AKA, Also known for sucking my Dick

Think you have a good record for beating Noobs out the Socket
Knock 10 of ya teeth out so you can leave 9 in ya pocket

Setting Up a battle like this you must be on some Crusial Crack
SO im going to be like the Terminator Kid..LOL and I'll Be back

damn i forgot about this lolol. i guess i spit some shit right quick

man damn nothing................................ lolol

look dude you need to stop bagging about your self
cause doing that shit around me it'll indanger your health
you lying to yourself if you think i can't hurt ya
yo you need to stop rapping cause roy roger could merk ya
ratting on you crew you one of those faggot ass snitches
and i'll have you trying to find nemo when you sleep wit the fishes
u talking og shit but you just another clone
look my guns stay at cats ears like head phones
how much are you gonna be able to write wit out your hands
this dudes studio is aka the waste lands

LOL....Ok Uppin For Votes...I guess you was al'right

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Voted For: Roy Merkem

A.K.A.
look dude you need to stop bagging about your self
cause doing that shit around me it'll indanger your health
decent opener
you lying to yourself if you think i can't hurt ya
yo you need to stop rapping cause roy roger could merk ya
wasn’t feelin this 1…
ratting on you crew you one of those faggot ass snitches
and i'll have you trying to find nemo when you sleep wit the fishes
pretty decent here…punch delivered
u talking og shit but you just another clone
look my guns stay at cats ears like head phones
no…weak punch
how much are you gonna be able to write wit out your hands
this dudes studio is aka the waste lands
no…punch didn’t connect here…and the flow was equal enuff

Roy Merkem
This man is no Competetion Is I been here longer just to follow
Cut ya head off replace it with a punkin So we can call you sleepy hollow
decent opener
Your Flows Is wack Stop rapping just continue to sing
Slap ya head and make you have more Dreams then Martin L. King
nice punch here, connected but kinda played, but who cares
Go Pre-Write Get ya Geek Gang and call Self a Clique
Too Good, lol AKA, Also known for sucking my Dick
nice persona-punch
Think you have a good record for beating Noobs out the Socket
Knock 10 of ya teeth out so you can leave 9 in ya pocket
decent
Setting Up a battle like this you must be on some Crusial Crack
SO im going to be like the Terminator Kid..LOL and I'll Be back
pretty decent closer here, kind of a weak punch

Overall

Roy Merkem took this one though…punches were
Hard hittin…but A.K.A. yo punches weren’t hard enuff
To get the win in this battle though…no hate to both
Though

RTF Roy

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172258

i see something strange. how is roy's old name voting for roy?

metaskriptz = regular skriptz

strobe gave me the wrong name i asked for

Hmm...Thats Strange, Right when I ask sytrobe to Change my name to back to Metaskriptz.. he gets back to you first,..Well Then im changing my Name Back to Skriptz Then..Uppin

Voted For: Roy Merkem

ratting on you crew you one of those faggot ass snitches
and i'll have you trying to find nemo when you sleep wit the fishes

Did you fuckin bite that? I read a line just like that like a week ago. =/

ANYWAYS...
Roy I thought you were better than this. >:o Still, Roy wins for having punches through his verse, no matter how weak they were. AKA thos shits aint punches, just talking, elevate yo. Both of yall came weak as fuck to me so just keep goin at it. Roy stop separting ya shit, its not couplets, its a verse.
v-Roy

Holla.

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

This man is no Competetion Is I been here longer just to follow
Cut ya head off replace it with a punkin So we can call you sleepy hollow
ok
Your Flows Is wack Stop rapping just continue to sing
Slap ya head and make you have more Dreams then Martin L. King
dope
Go Pre-Write Get ya Geek Gang and call Self a Clique
Too Good, lol AKA, Also known for sucking my Dick
i didnt like it
Think you have a good record for beating Noobs out the Socket
Knock 10 of ya teeth out so you can leave 9 in ya pocket
weak
Setting Up a battle like this you must be on some Crusial Crack
SO im going to be like the Terminator Kid..LOL and I'll Be back
wasnt a diss

look dude you need to stop bagging about your self
cause doing that shit around me it'll indanger your health
no punch
you lying to yourself if you think i can't hurt ya
yo you need to stop rapping cause roy roger could merk ya
weak
ratting on you crew you one of those faggot ass snitches
and i'll have you trying to find nemo when you sleep wit the fishes
dope
u talking og shit but you just another clone
look my guns stay at cats ears like head phones
ok
how much are you gonna be able to write wit out your hands
this dudes studio is aka the waste lands
wack man

vote aka..i felt he had more hard hitting lines than roy so he gets my vote

lol hmm ok uppin..........^^......^^......^^......

Voted For: Roy Merkem

This man is no Competetion Is I been here longer just to follow
Cut ya head off replace it with a punkin So we can call you sleepy hollow

Your Flows Is wack Stop rapping just continue to sing
Slap ya head and make you have more Dreams then Martin L. King

Go Pre-Write Get ya Geek Gang and call Self a Clique
Too Good, lol AKA, Also known for sucking my Dick

Think you have a good record for beating Noobs out the Socket
Knock 10 of ya teeth out so you can leave 9 in ya pocket

Setting Up a battle like this you must be on some Crusial Crack
SO im going to be like the Terminator Kid..LOL and I'll Be back
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Nice punches, good flow. I gots to tell you, those punches were funny and decent fam, very creative. Had some decent personals in there.



look dude you need to stop bagging about your self
cause doing that shit around me it'll indanger your health
you lying to yourself if you think i can't hurt ya
yo you need to stop rapping cause roy roger could merk ya
ratting on you crew you one of those faggot ass snitches
and i'll have you trying to find nemo when you sleep wit the fishes
u talking og shit but you just another clone
look my guns stay at cats ears like head phones
how much are you gonna be able to write wit out your hands
this dudes studio is aka the waste lands
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Eh, came a little weak here homie, punches werent good. Flow was good. Punhces were weak.





Overall-one-side battle, Roy threw some decent punches and some good personals, punches were really effective. AKA your punches werent good, not the usual you fam. Elevate, the flow was good. Add more personals.




peace

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Voted For: A.K.A.

i felt AKA more on this bat homes.
imagry aka
vocab tie
opener-closure aka
hits aka
personels aka
imagry tie
strucutre aka
rhyming tie
lyrics aka
overall aka gets this one homes becuase he flowed with me more you had some good flows but it took me a while to pick it up.


look dude you need to stop bagging about your self
cause doing that shit around me it'll indanger your health
you lying to yourself if you think i can't hurt ya
yo you need to stop rapping cause roy roger could merk ya
ratting on you crew you one of those faggot ass snitches
6/10
do not repeat ya twice aka just a tip hit up on my links peace!

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it ain't looking to good for me but i'll up this shit

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

checkin my boi AKA out..........

upping and i'm real happy i got 1000 post now lol.

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This was feedback posted for Roy Merkem
 

jus checkin the polls...................................

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Voted For: Roy Merkem

this battle seemed close to me. the punches were rather even and the structure for both was good. no multis so this came down to a punchline battle for me. the line that caught my eye for a.k.a was the finding nemo line. and although that was good i actually laughed out loud when i read too good, a.k.a also known for suckin my dick. so that line took it for metaskriptz. good battle yall.

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Voted For: A.K.A.

aka took this wit better more complex punches....
better wordplay and vocab....he had a better all around verse.da otha dude had decent punches but sum of dem i didnt really get like da teeth thing..ne ways

vote:aka
return da favor
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