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Skriptz vs Hip Hop
Battle Rules:
8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 01-15-05 at 07:37 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 07:08 PM.
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Hip Hop has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 07:09 PM.
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Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes
Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes* Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses** Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures*** *Bush Collecting Taxes, I'm Sure You Heard Of It, The Poor Little Rich Thing **2 Inchees Away With Three Inch Glasses, That's Like An Negative Inch Shit's Like Closer The Close To Me ***Give Him The PassWord To My Account So He Could See What I Wrote Before He Posts ****Yall Know That Pre School Kids Can't Paint And There Painted Pictures And Ish..Yea If You Don't Understand Do Not Vote |
Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat
It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec... ............................................but it still means your wack* Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat… ......................got a 0 chance of having me beat No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown... .................................................w ith no heat *His other names are Zeke & I.D. |
Voted For: Skriptz
Wass Thiss Even A Battle??? Skriptz Came Way Harder Than Hip Hop Openor=Skriptz Good Punch Structure=Skriptz,Hip Hops Wass Weak Punches=Skriptz,Shit Wass Decent All Togetha Personals=Hip Hop Aint Have None So Skriptz Closer=Skriptz Decent Punch Good Closer Hip Hop Yours Wass Trash Structure Wass Weak Tha Punches Didn't Make Sence That Picture And Disney Skripturez Line Iss Played You Used It B4..... /V Skriptz................ |
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Voted For: Skriptz
skriptz show them how u do my man lol u killed this hiphop dude u killed him bettrer flow punches and personals that matters alot so u killed him elavate hiphop show him how u dos ome other day caus ehe killed u good battle skriptz took this Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Hip Hop
Hip Hop took this easy.....nice punches.....everything was good except structure.....horrible structure man work on that but you too this easy over all.....i think i nevery catecgory except structure Skriptz you need to elevate.....that was a bad verse....it was good in a beginner way......no hate v/ Hip Hop Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Skriptz
Hip Hop...................... Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes* ehh decent....ok opener...didnt hit too well in my opinion Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses** Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access decent.....hit pretty hard......pretty good bar here Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious decent personal here........ Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures*** pretty good play off of name......good closer Skriptz........... Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back lol nice personal...good opener I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking decent...kind of self glory....... This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec... ............................................but it still means your wack* good personal...............hit good Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat… ......................got a 0 chance of having me beat No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown... .................................................w ith no heat good concept....ok closer... opener-skriptz personals- skriptz closer-pretty close...i think hip hop got it though punches- skriptz overall better verse- skriptz skriptz just had the more consistent verse |
Voted For: Skriptz
Ehhhh nobody had any quotables to me. Skriptz I swear to God listen to me...You need to flip your lines into punches. They are weak as fuck. Example: This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec... ............................................but it still means your wack That was gay. All you did was call him whack very simply. Say something like.... First he said he's retired, then all of a sudden hes back Making new names for high records...and they're all WHACK Eh that was quick but you get the idea. Get more complex and stop being so straight forward. Hip you need to read more battles and just elvate completely cuz that shit was garbo. v-skriptz |
Voted For: Hip Hop
Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back Umm..Not that GOod of An Opener, But good for a start I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking Pretty Good, Decent Punch and alright for a hit This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec... Kindof Played But still Useable I suppose ............................................but it still means your wack* Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat… ......................got a 0 chance of having me beat No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown... .................................................w ith no heat Its a good Punch But Not Decent for a closure Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes* Nice punch But still Not useful for an opener Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses** Decent and Nice..Me Like Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access Hmm.. Not To Bad.. Could have used better Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious Decent..Would be Better if yall was acctually Battlin in Real Life Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures*** Nice..Good Balance Both Was kindof Alright But I have to Say Hip Hop Took this one. Sorry Meta But you was close to him but he fitted in with last minute punches and it came in to doing fine. I say Both Did good and Close Battle v/Hip Hop |
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Voted For: Skriptz
hmmmmmm... close battle, both of your had good structure and flow... but in my opinion meta had better punches... opener: hip hop: great opener and a hard punch closure: meta: that was some funny shizzle :thumbup: metas: hip hop multes: meta punches meta personals: meta and that pretty much sums it up... return the favour links in the sig... no hate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Skriptz
hate dat structure it hard to read both of yall stuff hip hop stop addin all dat extra shit in your verse but skript punches hit harder den hiphop good battle but skriptz verse was more complex and his flow stayed on point most of the time felt his verse betta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wackass Zeke removin votes...
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The Fuck Kid, You Want To Start SomeThing??? I Aint Bin On Since I Droped This Battle So How I Removing Votes
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Stop Lyin Homo Ass Nigga You Always On You Jus Put Dat Invisible Shit On So Nobodi Can C You Fukin Prik Ass Pussi..................
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Lmao...Kid Stop Flapping Your Gums I Aint Bin On, Aks Anybody I'm Cool With On Here Why The Fuck You Think I Aint Bin Posting Dumb Ass, I Aint Dumb Either Kordozar Aka Exponent
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^Lol...dont think u have been exposed too d/a...
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Don't Matter Kid, My Name's Zeke Uhm Him EyeDentity And I.D.
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Old Ass Sht I Siad I Was Exponent Way Bak Aha You Pissed And You Got A Ugli Ass Girlfriend................
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Voted For: Hip Hop
Normal Punches-Hip Hop, you got this, but barely. Penis punch? Dawg you are better than that. Work on better material for your punches. Skriptz, you punches were weaker and that was why you lost this. I felt you stayed at the same level, but it wasn't as strong as Hip Hop's. Personal Punches-Skriptz, got this. Not the best one, better out there. Everyone knows his old names, so not that hard hitting. HipHop, only had one personal, and rather weak. Using names is bad because some kids could consider the kid dope. Metaphors-Hip Hop, not the best out there, but not bad either. Work on your material. Skriptz, not that many there, and the ones you used were rather weak in my opinion. Multiple Rhymes-Skriptz, you had them. Ok multis, but felt forced to me, but that's just me. Hip Hop, no multis. Structure-[b]Hip Hop, barely got this, but you didn't have all the ......... Skriptz, fell off horribly. I hate the .............. fillers. [b]Flow-Hip Hop, ok flow. Fell off a little bit in the middle, but overall the punches helped it keep going. Skriptz, good until the end. Just fell off too much. Word Play-Hip Hop, had it. Skriptz, no wordplay. Hip Hop, not your best verse, that's for sure. Overall use more personals and throw some multis in as well. Put more wordplay in your verses too. Skriptz, not a bad verse, but punches weren't as strong as Hip Hop. Work on your personals and your punches. Your pink shirt punch was weak because a lot of people said straight pics. Throw in some wordplay as well. No Hate Just An Honest Voter. v/Hip Hop 1 Vote, 1 Battle, 1 Win. |
Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz: well you had very limited wordplay here... but you're flow was good and structure was also which was refreshing since so many people have streched lines it hurts me to read them... speaking of streched lines.. Hiphop... yo man,you gotta make ur shit flow!!! pleeeeaaaaase your wordplay was played like...wordplay ^that was less played lol...fix your flow please it really killed tthis battle for you..elivate a bit go to cyphers and such... but skriptz..win |
Voted For: Skriptz
Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes* ^^decent punch....coulda directed it to him more Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses** Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access ^^didnt have end rhyme....weak punch Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious ^^good punch and personal Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures*** ^^lil self glorify but 2nd line brought it up some aight you had a pretty decent verse.....your structure wasnt too great...some of your lines were stretched...........you had better vocab than skriptz.....but your punches weren't really too directed at skriptz......should work on that....you flow was good...saw some multi's... Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back ^^decent punch I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking ^^nice wordplay.....good punch This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec... ............................................but it still means your wack* ^^good personal/punch Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat… ......................got a 0 chance of having me beat No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown... .................................................w ith no heat ^^lil humor in this punch......good punch you had a pretty solid drop........your punches were good......you had good personals........your vocab coulda been better........but you added wordplay and had some multis.......which made you flow better.......your lines weren't stretched.......and you had better structure.... v/skriptz |
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