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Check in by: 01-15-05 at 07:37 PM

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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 07:08 PM.

Hip Hop has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 07:09 PM.

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With An Mind Of An Old Man Full Of Wis-Dom........

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Voted For: Skriptz

Wass Thiss Even A Battle???
Skriptz Came Way Harder Than Hip Hop
Openor=Skriptz Good Punch
Structure=Skriptz,Hip Hops Wass Weak
Punches=Skriptz,Shit Wass Decent All Togetha
Personals=Hip Hop Aint Have None So Skriptz
Closer=Skriptz Decent Punch Good Closer

Hip Hop Yours Wass Trash Structure Wass Weak
Tha Punches Didn't Make Sence That Picture And Disney Skripturez Line Iss Played You Used It B4.....

/V Skriptz................

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Voted For: Skriptz

skriptz show them how u do my man lol u killed this hiphop dude u killed him bettrer flow punches and personals that matters alot so u killed him elavate hiphop show him how u dos ome other day caus ehe killed u good battle skriptz took this

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Voted For: Hip Hop

Hip Hop took this easy.....nice punches.....everything was good except structure.....horrible structure man work on that
but you too this easy over all.....i think i nevery catecgory except structure

Skriptz you need to elevate.....that was a bad verse....it was good in a beginner way......no hate

v/ Hip Hop

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Voted For: Skriptz

Hip Hop......................
Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes
Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes*
ehh decent....ok opener...didnt hit too well in my opinion

Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses**
Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access
decent.....hit pretty hard......pretty good bar here

Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis
Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious
decent personal here........

Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures
Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures***
pretty good play off of name......good closer


Skriptz...........
Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat
It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back
lol nice personal...good opener

I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking
Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking
decent...kind of self glory.......

This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back
This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec...
............................................but it still means your wack*
good personal...............hit good

Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat…
......................got a 0 chance of having me beat
No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown...
.................................................w ith no heat
good concept....ok closer...


opener-skriptz
personals- skriptz
closer-pretty close...i think hip hop got it though
punches- skriptz
overall better verse- skriptz

skriptz just had the more consistent verse

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Voted For: Skriptz

Ehhhh nobody had any quotables to me. Skriptz I swear to God listen to me...You need to flip your lines into punches. They are weak as fuck. Example:
This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back
This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec...
............................................but it still means your wack

That was gay. All you did was call him whack very simply. Say something like....

First he said he's retired, then all of a sudden hes back
Making new names for high records...and they're all WHACK

Eh that was quick but you get the idea. Get more complex and stop being so straight forward. Hip you need to read more battles and just elvate completely cuz that shit was garbo.

v-skriptz

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Voted For: Hip Hop

Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat
It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back
Umm..Not that GOod of An Opener, But good for a start
I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking
Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking
Pretty Good, Decent Punch and alright for a hit
This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back
This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec...
Kindof Played But still Useable I suppose
............................................but it still means your wack*
Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat…
......................got a 0 chance of having me beat
No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown...
.................................................w ith no heat
Its a good Punch But Not Decent for a closure



Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes
Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes*
Nice punch But still Not useful for an opener
Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses**
Decent and Nice..Me Like
Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access
Hmm.. Not To Bad.. Could have used better
Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis
Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious
Decent..Would be Better if yall was acctually Battlin in Real Life
Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures
Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures***
Nice..Good Balance

Both Was kindof Alright But I have to Say Hip Hop Took this one. Sorry Meta But you was close to him but he fitted in with last minute punches and it came in to doing fine.

I say Both Did good and Close Battle

v/Hip Hop

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Voted For: Skriptz

hmmmmmm... close battle, both of your had good structure and flow... but in my opinion meta had better punches...

opener: hip hop: great opener and a hard punch
closure: meta: that was some funny shizzle
metas: hip hop
multes: meta
punches meta
personals: meta

and that pretty much sums it up...

return the favour links in the sig... no hate

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