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I_Daughter_Hoz vs Black Queen
Battle Rules:
no less than 5 lines/No More than 20 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting NO one syllable rhyming(ha yea right.....if that was the case you'd loose Quicker) No Feeding Check in within 30 minutes Drop your verse within 3 hours. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-20-05 at 12:14 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
I_Daughter_Hoz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 11:45 AM.
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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 11:55 AM.
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Look man. you're uncool but im not here to brag, boast or to assume,
But u should of spent more time writing, so you wouldnt lose too soon. I play 'Mine(Mind) Games" like viets in the cambodian killing Fields Alot of words spit out, more than you take when swallowing a meal U Swim? I'll drown you in the 'deep end', cus your 'ugly' and we're 'shallow Its a fact, you half ass more than anyone else in a fucking battle I'll 'snap' this 'fruit' into 2, like drinking 2 bottles of 'snapple Since your name sounds dead to me, I'll bury it in the gravel do me a favor and die. fuck your bars, but im not here to contest, cuz the only line i liked from you was wrapped around your neck ill leave u battered and bleedin, u aint testin me ur rhymes still elementary, while ive long mastered my phd I daughter hoz a bitch my bullets 'Fabolous' because they just 'so into you' This battle is like a 'free shot' because 'no one' is 'defending you Im steadily devouring emcee your just a mid night snack i neva lack the crunch You could always carry everyones luggage and still couldnt pack a damn punch Your punches are like damn drunken paperboys bitch they just dont DELIVER Face it dog i ripped ya...bussed through ya flow like how your fat ass do your zippers |
Chick's Hard Hittin? No BIGGIE,Cause u Lost to notorious' Verses
ya Flows Shitty,i stay wit punches like Fat chicks wit koolaid packs n Purses- The Dex Can get ripped Too,since he wants to defend bitches Check..ya Crew aint doing shit new,Cause the Government Been Twizted!- When it comes to your writtens,i Dont think i've ever heard or Seen worse N Who woulda Thought We'd witness, Da Queen Elizabeth With 3rd Degree Burns- Folks give u props? shoulda hooked em to Lie Detectors,My Strategies to Defeat fuckers Asked Why ya Crew got Nice Records,Then i Saw you all battlin eachother- k done keystyle a few post now |
is it just me or do the only lines that look like u made up for me were the ones with my name in it? : / ol recycling ass lol
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Voted For: Black Queen
Voted for Black queen Quuen gets this because I was feelin her flow and punches more then Daughters My Fav Line: I'll 'snap' this 'fruit' into 2, like drinking 2 bottles of 'snapple Since your name sounds dead to me, I'll bury it in the gravel (nice) I liked the word play in that punch Daughter uya flow was good no doubt but I look for punches in most of my voting n I jus wasnt feelin nething u threw Not hatin, once again jus votin good battle Queen gets the vote |
^^^man hatin cause my verse betta den yo ol' shit.
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^shhh...your verse was played trash ...who uses the paper boy/delivery lines any more? lol u and i both know if i were to type up a whole page who'd win..and thats all i want you to realize ;)
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shut up u talk to damn much uppin fo some more votes
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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
--------merked her. no contest---------
silly little daughter |
uppin fo votes and dex dis was an easy one bitch cant flow
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This was feedback posted for I_Daughter_Hoz
just checking the polls. so check.
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Voted For: Black Queen
Yo Ok, I judged this battle point for point....and BQ barely edged it out. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Explain ur vote people!
IDH-9.2
BQ- 9.6 Details of how this battle was scored, and how the verses were analyzed, can be been seen in full detail. BQ u got lucky I must say. I don't know what IDH was thinkin. lol Just click here! Nice one girls. Keep elevating! Peace |
[QOUTE=Shi-1]Awkward battle. Ok Queen took this only by percentage points. Do I personally think BQ is a better lyricist than IDH? No. This is one of those unfortunate situations where BQ simply had more chances to strike and earn points! 5 more bars! What the hell is up with the even bar level???
So yes I mean, when I judge battles, it’s straight raw, checkin for all the skill one put in their verse. I know most people will be on some shit where they will say, THAT PUNCH won the whole battle. That’s not fair to me. Cuz u disregard all the little consistent things 1 opponent may do. To me, its like a boxing match. In 4 rounds, IDH let her have it! Hitting hard! Scoring damn near as much as BQ did in 9 rounds. But in the end, when the judges tallied up the punches, and blows landed….. BQ just happened to have 0.4% more. BQ I will have to give her props for just throwin up as much as she could. Who could have guessed IDH would give you less than half of the bars you put up? It worked for you apparently. Hell I still give IDH her props cuz lacking 5 bars she damn near won! Ok Lets see how this battle was FAIRLY judged .[/QOUTE] Perfect explination soo uhm .."the dex" ....your comment coulda been kept to yourself..she merked nothing ;) im still better than she is and well..you have yet to attempt to battle me |
^^^you an ass to be str8 up wit ya all you do is beef wit pep shit i woulda gave you props on yo shit but damn u wont appreciate so uppin
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Voted For: I_Daughter_Hoz
ehhh punches-IDH personals-IDH flow-none opener-IDH closer-IDH creativity-ehhhh....none enjoyment-IDH \V/-IDH Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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lol......u swear ur so good.................. |
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-^^^Bullshit^^^^ Nothing but a love vote. Or hate vote to the Queen |
Voted For: Black Queen
alright i peeped both verses I daughter Hoz: you had an ok verse. but the vocab wasnt there. your punches would of been better but you had a bad set up. the structure was bad and the flow was sorta off. overall this verse was decent 6/10 Black Queen: umm your structure is not good. dont make your lines soo big. try and shorten them. you had good use of vocab and punches thats why you won this battle. shit was pretty decent 7/10 vote: bQ |
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i neva said i was so good its how u look at it if u think im good dats u if you dont dats u it really dont matta |
Voted For: I_Daughter_Hoz
omg............ ROFL this battles one-sided mos def.. LMFAO aight i was just gonna post feedback for Black Queen but i might as well vote.. IDH took the punches and personals completely.. Black Queen you were struggling tryna put wordplay in ya verse, you had some nice metas.. you had sum decent lines, seeing that you had more than idh i would think you woulda came harder wit 'em.. you fell off towards the middle.. "do me a favor and die. fuck your bars, but im not here to contest, cuz the only line i liked from you was wrapped around your neck ill leave u battered and bleedin, u aint testin me ur rhymes still elementary, while ive long mastered my phd" ^^those were weak, the first bar was a good attempt @ a personal, but played LK used lines like that against her... come original ma.. ya closer was pretty good.. except for the drunken paperboy don't deliver, hella played.. idh "Chick's Hard Hittin? No BIGGIE,Cause u Lost to notorious' Verses ya Flows Shitty,i stay wit punches like Fat chicks wit koolaid packs n Purses- The Dex Can get ripped Too,since he wants to defend bitches Check..ya Crew aint doing shit new,Cause the Government Been Twizted!-" killed all of her lines, right off.. used some effective punches and got real personal... not bad from either i expected more lines from I Daughter Hoz but she didn't need any.. the closer was just a fatality was unnecessary but finished it off nicely.. ha stay up ladies.. and this is not a d/r vote i never voted fa I D H EVER.. just makin that clear.. :thumbup: v/I Daughter Hoz |
Voted For: Black Queen
well ummm... Theres not much to say other Than .......YOU GOT YO AsS WHOPED I_DAUGHTER_HOz N e ways heres my explanation Black Queen Your opening was a Killah Ima Give it A Perfect 10/10 Look man. you're uncool but im not here to brag, boast or to assume, But u should of spent more time writing, so you wouldnt lose too soon. I play 'Mine(Mind) Games" like viets in the cambodian killing Fields Alot of words spit out, more than you take when swallowing a meal ^^^ NiCE Aii Your best Punchline I daughter hoz a bitch my bullets 'Fabolous' because they just 'so into you' This battle is like a 'free shot' because 'no one' is 'defending you Oohhhh You Grow up so fast LOL im lovin It 9/10 Closing Your punches are like damn drunken paperboys bitch they just dont DELIVER Face it dog i ripped ya...bussed through ya flow like how your fat ass do your zippers LOL I Like dissin FAT PPL hahahahaha !! LOL 10/10 I Daughter Hoz Opening Chick's Hard Hittin? No BIGGIE,Cause u Lost to notorious' Verses ya Flows Shitty,i stay wit punches like Fat chicks wit koolaid packs n Purses Ummmmm It was Good Punch Um so You Take the Opening 10/10 Best Punchline The Dex Can get ripped Too,since he wants to defend bitches Check..ya Crew aint doing shit new,Cause the Government Been Twizted!- BLAH!!! wasnt Nuttin Specail to me 7/10 Closing Folks give u props? shoulda hooked em to Lie Detectors,My Strategies to Defeat fuckers Asked Why ya Crew got Nice Records,Then i Saw you all battlin eachother- Nuttin to really Set off the Votin to me but It was aii 8/10 Aii My Overall vote goes to Black Queen PLEASE RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE |
why da poll not movin..it should be 2-4?................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .......................
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uppppppppin dis shit...............................
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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
lol another loss for the hoe......................................... :)
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Voted For: Black Queen
ima have to to wit black queen on thisbattle. she just came harder wit the punches n creativity in my opinion. IDH had a way better flow n it was easier to read but she didnt have enuff of it. i guess she underestimated black queen but w.e . both need to work on puttin in some multies for ya verses nah mean. they make ya punches just sound better altogether. ight battle tho RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174890 |
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Voted For: Black Queen
black queen on this battle. both had some pretty hot verses tho, black queen just had more ot come wit. so thats what ima have to base my vote on. opener=IDH closer=BQ flow=BQ punches=BQ multies=none really vocab=tied my vote goes to black queen cuz shes just had more in her verse, good battle tho RETURN THE FAVOR!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175294 |
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