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Tha Sickness vs mista_auth3ntiq
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting NO D/R VOTES .. happy mista_bitch? topical - last prayers crew battle - LC vs. Jury Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-26-05 at 08:03 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 08:41 PM.
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Tha Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 08:58 PM.
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when i roll out wit tha crew, i know my return may be denied
i dont wanna know that my girl cried, cuz her siolder died so i put my hands together and i look towards tha sky and pray to tha lord that on this day i do not die 'dear lord if you choose to lay my soul to rest on this day i shall accept my fait, but please dont take my life away' 'i need just one more day, to say what i gotta say, to my brother i gotta tell my girl i love her, and show love to my mother' im not afraid of death, you cant take my life if you please im just askin fo a day, before my ashes are blowin in tha breeze this is my final prayer, a plee for life ima need the hand of god... to remove this knife..... |
Tears coming down my eyes, as I quickly change personality My own girlfriend pointing a gun at my head, hand is shaking furiously I’ve broken her heart in pieces, like an rose has lost beautiful pedals I’ve split her heart in 2 like sandals, I treated her dirty not like an gold medal On my knees, my lungs are like an vibrator, shaking. I was in a havoc of fear Thinking, if she pull the trigger, everything I done when I was alive, will disappear Her eyes red, she was angry, furious, like the devil. If I’d talked she would turn into Satan I hit her, more times than Roy Jones, been hitting a boxer. As I rethink, I felt so ashamed I put my hands together, started saying words, I felt like I was talking in foreign language I was praying, telling god to forgive my sins, begging for my life, I didn’t want my brain, a spinach I started saying “sorry”, though that will not help, she has so much hatred on me, deep in her layers She puts the gun in my mouth, like a dick. My lips quivering, she looked me in the eye, Your last prayers? |
Lmao..................uppin For Some Fucking Votes Holla At Cha Boi...........
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
uve locked dis up nicely fam...:thumbup:...........uppin 2 get dis sorted
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Voted For: Tha Sickness
aiii yall im jus checkin up on this battle that they said was closed but i see its not Removed |
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Nooooooooooooooo Im so sorry thats suppose to be a Feedback im sorry itll cancel itself bcuz its to short n e way
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Anyway, uppin. I'll pm strobe......................
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
checking the polls
goodjob mista............... |
Thanks Valor........................................
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Voted For: Tha Sickness
you got this one man one sided multis the gfather hits gfather vocabulary gfather structure gfather yo mista you could work on all ya shit aight good job god fatha Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
by god father i mean the sickness aight my niggas keep respectin the game mutha fuckas
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The Fuck Hahah Vote Dq'd..............................nice Try Phive But That Wont Work. Just Accept That You Lose In Damian Battle, Hahaha. Wun.
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Yo Uppin For Some Votes Holla At Cha Boi.............
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upppiin.... someone vote on this pleeeeaaaaase ...
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Uppin for some god damn votes holla at cha boi.......blah......
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Voted For: Tha Sickness
This one goes to the godfatha. his was just so much deeper. His was a real last prayer for the dying. the other one didnt really seem too on topic to me it was more of the last regrets of a man who made one too many mistakes and he never actually prayed he just mentioned the fact that he was praying in one line. |
by the way return the favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. MAFIA http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare |
thanks man ......... still uppin for votes .................
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This was feedback posted for Tha Sickness
checkin pollz............................................. .
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This was feedback posted for Tha Sickness
just checking pollz.....
decent battle here..... |
Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ: Oooo...nice story here MiSta...I pretty much liked your story, your flow was pretty good, vocab was nice & not messed up, and...but overall the ur story had emotion up in there & I was feelin ya topic-drop tho... Tha Godfatha: you had a nice drop too, story was good, and the flow + vocab was good here also, & the structure was in place, but overall the emotion to it, wasn't like MiSta's though, but overall you had an aight drop too... |
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
Tears coming down my eyes, as I quickly change personality My own girlfriend pointing a gun at my head, hand is shaking furiously I’ve broken her heart in pieces, like an rose has lost beautiful pedals I’ve split her heart in 2 like sandals, I treated her dirty not like an gold medal On my knees, my lungs are like an vibrator, shaking. I was in a havoc of fear Thinking, if she pull the trigger, everything I done when I was alive, will disappear Her eyes red, she was angry, furious, like the devil. If I’d talked she would turn into Satan I hit her, more times than Roy Jones, been hitting a boxer. As I rethink, I felt so ashamed I put my hands together, started saying words, I felt like I was talking in foreign language I was praying, telling god to forgive my sins, begging for my life, I didn’t want my brain, a spinach I started saying “sorry”, though that will not help, she has so much hatred on me, deep in her layers She puts the gun in my mouth, like a dick. My lips quivering, she looked me in the eye, Your last prayers? . . .thats a nice fucking verse mista...really feeling the vivd picture you painted on this, and i dont do topicals so thats really saying something your last line was felt man, bout to say RIP mista authentiq! . . when i roll out wit tha crew, i know my return may be denied i dont wanna know that my girl cried, cuz her siolder died so i put my hands together and i look towards tha sky and pray to tha lord that on this day i do not die 'dear lord if you choose to lay my soul to rest on this day i shall accept my fait, but please dont take my life away' 'i need just one more day, to say what i gotta say, to my brother i gotta tell my girl i love her, and show love to my mother' im not afraid of death, you cant take my life if you please im just askin fo a day, before my ashes are blowin in tha breeze this is my final prayer, a plee for life ima need the hand of god... to remove this knife..... . . this was good too, but in a more direct and simply put way nice verse with this but compared to the above it lacks real emotion . .gotta v/ mista authentiq . http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177392 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=178800 please return the favor |
still uppin........................................
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Voted For: Tha Sickness
close battle ...ya know even though you can't spell i liked your a lil more than mista in the aspect of last prayer i thought you actually stuck with it .. it was pretty ill and i jus thought yours had more heart in it...' rhyme style//Tg heart//TG structure//mista wordplay//mista overall end effect//tg close but i gotta go with Tha Godfatha nice drop on both sides |
Voted For: Tha Sickness
Not the best topical battle i ever saw, both need some elevation... Godfather, work on ya vocab, an creativity, but you had more emotion in this peice...than mistah did Voab let u down, an you could have been a little more creative, but your emotion shined over all of that, an gets u my vote Mistah, your peice was aight, expected better from you, an some of your stuff was way too strecthed, ya was more creative with your ideas, just gotta word them better No hate, an return the fave Peace out |
Wow! You Dont Know Shit About Topicals Do You?
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well well well it looks like im winning .... uppin
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Shut You Ass Up......................"i'm Winning" Yes You Are By D/r'z.........
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
mista took this one imo.......he basically took this one because his imagery was a lot better than sicks..... mista-your verse had nice vocab u can tell meanin was put into dis....u needed to stay on topic a lil more but you still made up for it in other areas.....it had more religion to it then just a prayer which i liked...... sickness-yours was kinda boring..didnt catch my eyes a lot....u need to put some more vocab into your verse....it looked like you just keyed that wit out thinkin what u waz doin....i couldnt really picture what u was sayin like i could mistas.......1 |
why is it everytime i get a vote you bitch and moan about it bein a d/r .. just accept the fact that people actually feel what im spittin.. peace out bi-atch
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