Legend vs Assas-Sin
 

Battle Rules:

10-14 Lines
No Crew/hate/D,R Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

g'luck fam

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-29-05 at 09:10 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 09:17 PM.

C'mon fam da *Punches* i spit will leave ya *Black-Out* fella
Cuz my 2 *Fist* be like Jayz and *Rip* lika *Roc-Fella*
And its only *Legend* of me to put ya in place
Thatz in front of ya lil sis when she gettin me sum face
How're ya a legend if ya record is 11-9?There must be a mistake
Maybe you need to be like that *Dick*in your*Hand* and take a *Break*
Shit nigka how you rockin 50?Oh I see he makes ya look *Rich*
Since ya only gettin *Pennies* by bein da Legend of suckin guys *Dicks*
Me merkin you,isnt that so true,Talkin shit get ya body caught up blue
Tek 9's be bustin,Seein you on da block hustlin,NAW!!you da kinda nigka no1 be trustin
Thiz battle mine so take action and run away till dis *Loss Catches Up*
^^And get 50 cents thrown in ya *Cup*
And ya rap skillz will never be *Notorious*so stop lying to ya self
You being a *PIMP* shit do pigs fly?Or are you just dreaming to ya self

*JayZ reps dat Rocafella...and Rip=Rep
**His Record is 11-9
***when i said he needs to take a break like his dick in his hand it meant his dick couldnt last long..get it
****50 cent is in his Sig
*****thrown in his cup im refering to him as a bum
******his alias or old name was Notorious Pimp

Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 05:27 PM.

Honest Votes..........

Uppyn. I'm pretty sure this match is mines. :D. NOW VOTE YOU CUNTS.

Uppyn this muh fucka. Dayum. Ya'll dick suckers. lol.

uppin thiz famz..dont sleep..

uppyn. Dayum. Don't sleep. fuck...................

upp thiz famz...dont sleep nigkaz..

dont sleep on dis famz...uppin for sum votez...

uppin thiz famz...

yo why da fuck you aint uppin dis legend??..you a faggot fam..uppin thiz famz..

Uppyn you fucking slut. I'ma merk you if you don't vote honestly. UPPYNN............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ............

uppin thiz famz.. .

uppin thiz famz..drop votez..

Voted For: Legend

Aight, easily a one-sided batle.

Opener:Legend, best line in your verse to me, i liked that shit.
Closer:Legend, it was decent, but the other guys was complete shit.
Structure: Legend. Other dude, damn have you ever even heard of that word?
Multis: Neither one of you really had any
Punches: Legend's easily, other dudes was whack, or just very poorly worded.
Personals: Assass Assass tried to throw in a few, but they were lost because of horrible delivery. But Legend didn't have any.
Wordplay: Legend easily. really liked the first bar a coupla other ones, Digital camera/finish line bar was madd nice too
Enjoyment: Legend, it flowed and actually looked of hip-hop decent, other dude needs to elevate hard man. No hate, just keep battlin', and check out the tutorials dogg.

Fave Bars: Legend

Lyrically bomb shit, spit twice as nice, as if my tongues' split
Like dollar bills Assas-Sin beating me is definitely non-cents

Other dude, didn't really like any of it.


Vote: Legend
-CJ-

This was feedback posted for Legend
 

it was a good battle from u cuz u did da damn thang but
ass-ass-sin just hit u wit more lyrical puches den u

but in diz battle i have 2 give da win 2 assas-sin
opener: legend
mutlis: nobody really
vocab: both
personals: assas-sin
punches: both
closer: assas-sin
close battle in my eyes but a just drop more lines dat help push him ova

Get the fuck outta hee you dick riding noob. Da Ilest I'm talking to you. Uppyn.

da illest why didnt you vote ...i should slap you for that lol...upppin this famz

This was feedback posted for Legend
 

Ok says I can't vote so here's feedback. Legend definitely came hardest with more consistant word play and metas and multis. I read Assas-sin's rhyme first becuz that's all I saw. Then I scrolled back up and noticed the orange and black writing was a verse! I was like, ahh, at first glance, expecting it to be some weak colorful rhymes, but legend came with a powerful 5 bars. Good battle yall.
Peace

oh hell nah!
 

^^ dog this is bullshit and u know it. Im sorry I just gotta speak out against bullshit cuz Im a true lyricist and we dont play that. I dont know Legend, or Assas-sin from a ADAM.
Dont have ties to either of them, but ANY respectable lyricist will tell you that vote was bullshit. U said "multi's - NOBODY"? Ok do u know what a multi is?
Look at Legends first bar. Bomb-shit, tongue-split, and non-cents.
That is called multiple word/syllable rhyming son.
Boy I swear if I start battling here and I get voters like this....fuck!
Punches, Both? Oh my god...do I have to break down what a punchline is too?

Look homie I aint the one to start beef. I respect everyone's opinion, But dog a bullshit vote is a bullshit vote, and this one here was all too obvious. U need to chill out on that shit dude! Forreal tho!

^^^shut the fuck up you fuckin alias...uppin this famz...

This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
 

you shut the fuck up you lil' herb ass nigga, tryin' to have your homie give you a fake ass vote. You suck ballsack. You should have a your lil' sister ghostwrite for you if she isn't already. That is one of the worst verses i have ever seen in my life. Don't disrepect people with real hip-hop knowledge just because you don't have any. Big-Ups Shi-1 and Legend. Fucka Ass-ass-sin.

-CJ-

And you can shut up to, just cause you pissin' me off. or just can get whored bitch.

-CJ-

Alias? hahahaha dumb ass Im known at this site and many others under the same name! I have audios to prove who I am. Fuck outta here!

Ur shit is wack and u mad @ me for checkin a phony voter?
U gonna be a non elevatin newbie for life son.

wack ass!

:laugh2: COULDNT HAVE SAID IT BETTER MYSELF! :laugh2:

This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
 

Checking Polls....................................

Whoa. What is going on. lol. Uppyn. I need a quckie. I mean I needa hurry up and win this.

Voted For: Legend

this one clearly goes to legend for the flo bein on point because of his structure and the punches were better. i couldn't tell if assas-sin had multis or not but i doubt it. no real word play and as a big jay-z fan the rocafella joke could've been played better. anyway legend takes this one. No hate return the favor.

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^^w.e you're a nobody so lil effect....and multis i had like 2 or 3 in there..and wordplay was betta den dat fool..he was talkin bout dragons and shit c'mon clearly your wack if ya talk about animals...and the rocafella joke prolly could've but thats something you wouldnt come up wit so back down actin like you da shit since ya 4-1..and one of those wins was becuz the win got switch since sum1 said i told him to vote for me...so really you should be 3-2...

anywayz uppin this shit with honest votez..~1~

Uppyn this shyt...................................

Uppyn thys shyt...................................

Uppyn thys shyt. why it geting slept on you hoes..

Uppyn this shyt. dayum you all are fags...........

Uppyn thys shyt...................................

Uppyn one more time...............................

Bump for votes....................................