MC IgGY vs onestepbeyond
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 12:55 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

MC IgGY has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:56 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:57 PM.

Guess who's back?

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**


*- get it? a week is sunday to saturday.. be hes also weak as fuck..
**- im sayin he sucks wether i throw a race card or not, nah mean?

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.

Voted For: MC IgGY

ok, basically iggy killed one step
flow-one step
multies-iggy
punches-iggy
word play-iggy
vocab-iggy
iggy over all

vote fo my battles
me vs godfather
vs datboirog

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

i give myvote to one step beyond he had that one punch in there about the weak/week shit was hot. he coulda got hte battle wit that one right there cuz punches like that KO niggas. but he had better structure n way better punches. good opener n ight closer work on puttin some multies in there for variety
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good...........

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

damm dis was a good i aint gon front..i gotta go with one step tho he came with some cleva shit and he had a good ryhme scheme...datz whuts up iggy ya verse was good fam u just weren't dat creative like he was...nun of u spit any personals but good battle overall....from both ya'll

opener-one even tho it was type played...iggy ya second line was weak

structure- a tie i could read both ya'll shit good

punchlines-one step he had some hott shit i was feelin it..iggy u had a couple but nu n really stood out like dat

multis-one step had like 1...iggy u had nun

creativity-one step takes dis 2...iggy u had some but not more than him

personals-nun from both

enjoyed-onestep....took dis battle..iggy good shit tho just try da be more creative and use personals

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

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My vote fo iggy ok lets try this,
Like some of the lines that i likd bout one step was the sandwitch part n the week part, n i really liked iggys line bout expanding ur mind

one step had betta structure but i liked iggys punches betta, one step had good punches but iggy had it better, i liked iggys flow a lil better, iggys had a lil bit of vocab but one step didnt, iggy had better multies eventtho one step had none
It was a preety good battle, but my vote is fo iggy, i think onestep should have better vocab n multies, n fo iggy should have a lil better structure, but iggy has my vote

Voted For: MC IgGY

ima have to give dis one to..iggy he had betta wordplay so there for i could read his shit betta and made me think he had betta flow and shit...Punches came decent in dis battle..Personals i thought were lackin but that doesnt matta when kats be usin multis...

v/Mc iggy

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

i like diz battle cuz lyrical punches were swung repeatedly by both contenders but it goes:
opener: 1stepbeyond
punches: both
personals: 1step
vocab: both
structure: 1step
closer: 1step
mc iggy u need 2 elevate more in ur rhymes but 1step just came harder so he gets diz 1

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uppin for votes.... keep them comin people........

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

V/onestepbeyond......he gets my vote cause he had creative punchs an good vocab they were original....MC u had a good verse in sum parts it lacked consistent diss's u werent as creative wit ur punchs an u didn't use much vocab a lil basic i seen better from u no hate juss elavate...good battle to both......
punchs=1
structure=tie
vocab=1
opener=1
closer=1
multi's=MC
overall=One stepbeyond....
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
^good opener

So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
^no real punch...

This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
^good but bit self-glorification

On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
^decent

Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
^not feeling it

Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**
^nice closer

Your opener and closer were best things in your verse in fact. Didn't have too many hardhitting and bold punches or personals,you did have some good wordplay in there though.Flow was straight on point,vocab was good and structure was nice to. Just get the punches lil harder...


MC IgGY

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
^self-glorification...

I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
^2nd line was okay

You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
^good bar...liked it...

Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
^decent decent

what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.
^had potential but could've set it up better

You used a lot of self-glorification, always bringing yourself up instead of bringing the other one down (which is the main principal of a battle). Try to focus on your opponent instead of yourself, more hardhitting punches and personals. Wordplay was good, vocab n structure were tigh and I was feelin your flow but get more agressive in the punches and such...No hate...

Voted For: MC IgGY

winner - MC IGGY


Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*

good wordplay

So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,

decent punch, not too strong

This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there

nice line


On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',

pretty strong punch,


Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"

weak punch

Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**

ok finisher


mc iggy's verse

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE

nice punch,

I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN

hot punch, nice multis

You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND

nice wordplay, decent punch

Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS

funny punch

what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.

could of had a stronger finisher but this one was ok



flow-tie
multi- MC
punches-MC
wordplay-ONESTEP
opener-ONESTEP
finisher-MC

uppin for votes...................................

uppin for votes..... keep em' comin people.........

comon peepz, if u vote for me, ill vote for u, fair votes only plz

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Mc IGGY- Alright man, you've elevated much. You got some good punches in there, flow was kinda fucked up......Dont put CAPS at the end of your sentence.....structure needs help.....Had some good wordplays.



OneStepBeyond- All right nice flow, with some good punches and wordplay was good. Dont stretch your lines that much. Much elevation on punches....Add multi'z......




overall=This battle was close, due to the elevation from both heads.....Mc Iggy nice verse with some good punches, flow was chopped up though, elevate on structure....Wordplay's was good, keep doing it...add some multi'z too.....onestepbeyond...nice verse fam with some good punches..but need elevation.....In my eyes...i think Onestepbeyond..got this...basically he had better effective punches with good flow....Mc iggy nice you've have elevated...but the punches werent hard enough....vote onestepbeyond for some harder punches and with good flow..wun

i shoulda won already................. uppin bitches

i swear if one more of my votes gets dqed ima kill somebody

Voted For: MC IgGY

im gonna vote for you because I thought you were better, word

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checkin battle out....onestepbeyond......WELCOME to NOK if u want in.......good shit...

good drop iggy

Voted For: MC IgGY

had good flow wid good punches and good multies
had good structure needs some work on vocab but
overall i liked it more than onestepbeyond's flow
onestepbeyond had good flow and structure but needs to work on his vocab and multis
best mc iggy lines:
My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN

uppin for more votes,
ill return the favor if u vote
honest votes only plz

comon peeps, uppin for more votes
ill return da favor

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
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ok the PUNCH was corny and older than GOD'S DAD
your multie needed improvement cuz it didn't exsist
OVER ALL STANDING ....NO ON THIS BAR
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So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
*********************************************
C'MON......THERE WAS NO PUNCH,PERSONAL, BUT AT LEAST YA FLOW WAS GOOD
OVER ALL.....NO 4 THIS BAR
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This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
*********************************************
HAHAHAHA....NO!.....THAT WAS WEAK AS FUCK TOO,,,MJ BARS ARE OLD TOO
OVER ALL .....NO 4 THIS BAR
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On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
*********************************************
DO I REALLY HAVE TO EVEN CONSITER STATE'N WHY THIS 1 SUCKS?!
*********************************************
Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
*********************************************
ALMOST A CANIBUS QUOTE,....I THINK YOU NEED TO WORK ON YA SHYT MORE CUZ THIS AINT SHYT BUT TALKIN SHYT....NOOOOOOOO
*********************************************
Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**
*********************************************
UM...NO 4 THIS BAR
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1-10 YOU GET A ,..........2........... FROM ME

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
*********************************************
THANX 4 THA WARNING...NOW THROW SOME PUNCHES
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I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
*********************************************
THE BEST PUNCH,MULTIE'S I'VE SEEN IN THIS BATTLE

OVER ALL........ YES.....
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You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
*********************************************
KEEP IT MOVE'N...YOU DO'N GOOD
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Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
*********************************************
___YOU PLAY'ED THE KILLER IN SCARY MOVIE HUH?!___
THIS WAS OK BUT YOU NEED TO GET MORE PERSONAL AND MORE CREATIVE
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what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.
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AT LEAST ITS BETTER THAN HIS VERSE
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Multies:...........MC
Metaphores:........NONE
PUNCHES:..........MC
PERSONALS:...........NONE
FLOW:............TIE
VOCAB:..........TIE
COMPLEXITY:..........MC
FOLLOW THROUGH:..........MC


OVER ALL VOTE......ME IQGY WINS THIS

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

you got this, iggys drop was nice to but i think you came harder.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

This one goes to one step

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
SET UP WAS GOOD BUT THE PUNCH WAS WEAK(we all know jada will kill 50)
I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
BAD SET UP BUT MULTI EVENS IT OUT, GOOD PUNCH
You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
DECENT SETUP DECENT PUNCH
Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
DECENT SETUP PUNCH WAS WEAK
what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.
BAD SETUP BAD PERSONAL BAD CLOSER

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
DECENT SET UP GOOD PUNCH GOOD OPENER
So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
DECENT SET UP DECENT PUNCH
This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
BAD SET UP BAD PUNCH MJ JOKES ARE THRU
On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
DECENT SETUP GOOD PUNCH
Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
DECENT SET UP LED TO WEAK PUNCH THOUGH
Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**
BAD SET UP, DECENT PUNCH BUT A LIL RACIAL (NOT COOL)

anyway i look for punches in a battle and i gotta give this one to one step

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uppin.............................................

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

i was feelin one steps punches more cuz they were more creative and hit harder. plus his vocab was good.
alot of mc iggy's bars didnt even rhyme hardly at all so thats a big minus, work on that MC

uppin.............................................

comon peeps, keep the votes coming, ill return the favor for sure

Voted For: MC IgGY

MC IgGY I GOT TOGIVE IT TO U BECAUSE THE OTHER NIGGA COUNDNT REALLY RIME SO

VOTE,MC IgGY

haha, oh yeah, i didn't ryhme... faggot... uppin...