Gansta Shit
 

Young Mix is back mothafuckas(12x)

Im one of da elite,yall niggaz just decievin ta rap
and think dat you can buck wit da Mix,you'll be recievin a slap
I got dese rap niggaz on they knees wit a dat
Im da illest in dis fuckin rapgame, just leave it at dat
Im gettin krunk wit some trees in da back
and dese lyrics'll delete yo ass til all dats left of ya is a sleeve and a hat
And I leave dese niggas petrified
man I squeeze guns fa exercise,yall lil niggas betta recognize
And fuck wit my clique,Ill explode bombs all around ya ways
cause dat 4 pound'll straight leave you on da ground fa days
Yo,dese niggas is wrong fa thinkin they label rocks
cause dem niggas be rockin more wires than a cable box
So nigga,ya neva had a chance but my record made it
and fuck wit da champ,Ill have yo head and body separated
And dese niggas holdin they breath,yall need ta inhale truly
cause in dis rapgame,Ima Man On Fire like dat Denzel movie

(Hook)
Look,nigga,dis is gansta shit
I gotta ak50 ta thank ya wit
Dese cats dat rap be spittin wanksta shit
yall niggas need ta get outta here cause dis aint ya shit(wwwhhhhooooaaaa)

Yall cant fuck wit me,get ya mothafuckin headright


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yo Mix u r hot come to A.T.R. and try out for the crew

Ayo thanx and Ill get back at ya wit dat
More feedback on dis please

Young Mix

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um you need better vocab an complexity.......it was basic......

that shit sucked fuckin' ballsack, and you didn't even spell gansta right. So generic and just fuckin' retarded. Everyone who has read it now is that much shittier of an m.c. just for having been exposed to it.

-CJ-

Hope this was a joke, cause that shit is funny man.

-CJ-

Nigga,dis was some ill shit,betta than anything you can come up wit
Speakin of come up wit,where yo song at
You'se a fuckin hater,I can tell yo shit is wack from yo name bitch
so you can suck my dick you garbage ass hater
You wouldnt be sayin all dat hard shit if you seen me,so you gotta talk hard on da fuckin Internet,nigga ,fuck you wack ass bitch
Dats real shit

I just left honest feedback. Besides i could just drop a terd on my keyboard and just hit enter after whatever jibberish came up and it would still be better than your shit.

-CJ-

You know what,its ok.I feel sorry for you.You 21 still rappin on a website plus you ridin one of da most wackest rappers Talib Kweli's dick.So drop sumthin
since you said it,back it up,cause I just wrote shit dat rhymed,so you do sumthin.Lets see how wack yo trick ass is.

that was incredibly simple....need 2 up that shit man

links??

first of all,this is tooo simple. Your topic is played b/s. your onm about the same shit the next man is.This would of gone better in self glorification cypher.4 real.

You have alot of room to elevate.'

man I squeeze guns fa exercise,yall lil niggas betta recognize
this line is stupid, you havent showen any lyrical skill, or any imagination.

anyone can write. im a shoot you i got gun play for miles im this im that your wak im good.
but it doesnt actually prove shit


feel me?
i am in noway hating on you. but if the truth hurts than so be it.

oh yeh return the feed.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174342

Man, I dont give a fuck what anybody say,dis shit is sick
and if you dont think so,you just a wack emcee on dis site
So if ya call me garbage,I really dont give a fuck cause chances are you worse than me.But I respect everybody dat bring dis feedback ta me real.
Big ups

if you cant handle real crit,then why post your shit.
if your allready better than us, leave. go to dr dre or kanye west and tell them how good you are.

If you want to elevate then come to new breed and we will help you, but you have gotta understand we will speak the truth.
Why would I lie and say your shit is played? what would i get out of that, I said it so you relised"hey maybe i should try some original topic's", blah.
if you cant hack constructive critism then dont drop. if you can then come to new breed, and we will help you elevate.

Man,da reason why I dont talk bout topics is cause Im in my prime
Im only 13 and still killin most rappers on here,so I just have fun spttin,I dont give a fuck bout speakin da truth,I keep shit krunk
But speakin da truth is more mature than just spittin sumthin,but Im a pre-teen.Ima start speakin da truth when Im in my late 20's.I rap at school,I dont even listen to da teacher,I just write shit,and when I get home,sometimes I post it ta see what yall think of it.Dats all

yeh, and we tell you what we think, but you get mad at our "opinions"

why wait till your 20 to speak the truth? why not start now,then by the time you 20 you will be so truthfull you might actually be dope.
Oh yeh, listen to the teacher. take it from some1 who didnt.know struggles to get work,cause i dotn have that bit of paper that says "pass"

Oh,Im passin,and ta be truthful,nobody today really wanna hear truthful shit all da time.You can be ill without bein truthful,like me.I just get mad when a emcee tries ta diss me during his critique.Just say Im wack,I can take dat.
And Im only here ta practice on my bars and metas ta get betta so if I get signed,I wont be just another average emcee like some of dese signed rappers,feel me.

More feedback on dis please

I kno u aint talkin bout me bein wack
cuz u kno got damn well thats a Myth
2nd i wasent dissin i was jus lettin u kno up ya game
cuz tha shit was simple as fuck

*Nuff Said*

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Your shit sux dude, if you think you so much nicer than everyone else that posted feedback, we can easily take it to the frontlines, and i'll show you a thing or two lil' nigga.

-Cj-

Lets go I dont back down fa nobody,especially some washed up wannabe rapper like yaself,lil nigga

am i the only one that caught this? did this kid just say talib was wack? ahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahha :laugh: hahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahhahaha :laugh: hahahahhahahhahahahahahahhaha :laugh: hahahhahahaha :laugh: .................................that comment speaks for itself....it just lets everybody know that you suck........if u have a problem with that....fuck off.......and take this criticism and run with it and be willing to elevate.....it was too basic...just like everyone is saying....dont use so much gunplay....nobody likes that...pick a topic to write about....you used decent multis....but seriously....thats not all that a verse consists of.....if you used those multis and there was a topic behind it....it could have been a nice piece......but unfortunately is was all about your gun and yourself.....so take this and make something good out of it....if u think im trying to diss you.....i dont care....but if you cant take these people opinions...you will never do anything with your music

Ok then,vote on my other one then,if dats wack,then I wont say nothin but thank you,even if you do diss me

You are wack, log out and run with scissor's.

i aint go hate but go stright to da point
it was decent,but it was elementry,you needs to elevate
i'd say get involved,and ah countree J is not a hata
he der to to critize to make you wanna get better,but
dats wit er'body,
holla
5/10

Vote on Lifes on the Line Remix and Ill return da favor if you currently made sumthin,tahnx alla yall.No hate CountreeJay

Take that fictional statement outta ya sig.
You are Not great.

Im da great of hip hop.Dat shit sounds nice to my name too
But a sig aint got nothin ta do wit rapskillz.
So I could change it,but dat wont change da greatness in my rap skillz,get it

I gotta say that shit right there was hella wack fam...i wouldnt even upp this shit nigka unless ya want katz clownin you bout being wack...Ya vocab was alright sumthin a rookie would spit...Structure was aight lil sloppy at points but aight...Flow was weak and wack to da fullest nigka..ya seriously need to elavate and come abck to open mic later in ya RV career...i give dis 5/10..no hate just speakin da truth..

Vote on Lifes on the Line Remix I made
If dats wack,then Ill say Im wack straight up fa real
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