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Life vs The Late Show
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Due tomarrow night 11:00pm LOSER CANT RAP HERE FOR A MONTH 3 vote KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-31-05 at 05:19 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
The Late Show has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 05:20 PM.
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Life has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 05:22 PM.
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work ho's, though this first line is a filler
The Late Show aka Life serial killer unlike Life, i'm still ghetto, rhyme and run a knife got his dime out her "stillettos", he been everywhere "but her fly" im sick at rappin like when Em puked before the battle patiently waitin, Late dont move before he half to speak fast, i rap like some don "i'l beat yo ass" and this fag thought it was a come-on stay away from rap, get back to rock and roll fuck this battle, i'll let you rap topical |
i made an exception this time, cuz i dont battle a dude thats openly gay
i will spit your head in half with an a.k anyday you cant see me dog,i spit hot shit, thats it nigga riding Jay Lenos dick this dude named should be charcole cuz all he do is get fried you should have retired the same day Johnny Carson died(no hate) |
Voted For: The Late Show
yay your first ever battle you might win, lalalalalla who cares you have my vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Life
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Voted For: The Late Show
i made an exception this time, cuz i dont battle a dude thats openly gay i will spit your head in half with an a.k anyday weak..... you cant see me dog,i spit hot shit, thats it nigga riding Jay Lenos dick WEAK....... this dude named should be charcole cuz all he do is get fried you should have retired the same day Johnny Carson died(no hate) WTF that was foul and it wasnt even good.... weak verse un-strcture, weak punches, no effort no flow, no noting was working for u * and thats the truth no hate * dont ever go weak like that again...... .5/10 yes that is a 0.5 outta 10.0 work ho's, though this first line is a filler The Late Show aka Life serial killer come on now u dont need much to win.... weak start unlike Life, i'm still ghetto, rhyme and run a knife got his dime out her "stillettos", he been everywhere "but her fly" haha yup that did it GAME OVA U WON.... im sick at rappin like when Em puked before the battle patiently waitin, Late dont move before he half to ok.. speak fast, i rap like some don "i'l beat yo ass" and this fag thought it was a come-on wow..gay and wasnt good... stay away from rap, get back to rock and roll fuck this battle, i'll let you rap topical decent ending..... better verse, more focus, better strcture, flow aight, and not a bad verse from a noob... 6.0 outta 10 return the favor of a vote.... |
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Voted For: The Late Show
didnt really know where to go wit dis battle....but i give it to The Late Show even tho his structure was a lil fucked...he still had a better overall verse...life i aint really like ur closer....ur verse was a lil too simple... vote/late show RETURN THE FAVOR!!!!!!!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175096 |
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This was feedback posted for The Late Show
checkin pollz.....................................
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Voted For: The Late Show
The Late Show: Weak verse overall, almost no personals, barely any wordplay, and punches were weak. Work on better personals and on better punches. Wordplay comes later, so elevate in the basics before you try advance stuff. Life: Basically no punches, I think a personal (not sure if it counts), no wordplay, basically nothing. You need to take advantage of no line limit. Don't take the minimum. Work on making punches and personals. No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/The Late Show One Vote, One Battle, One Win.----Px |
Voted For: The Late Show
no hate but life lost this one the verse can explain itself harder metas punches vocab structure erything goes to the late show no hate but my vote goes to the late sho |
This was feedback posted for The Late Show
really...how bout Both you guys dont rap...PERIOD
no hate but...who would really notice? |
i take it back my fault.............late show wins this with ease
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Voted For: The Late Show
the late show won thi sbattle. yall both need to up ya game alot tho. especially when yall got high stakes like u do in this battle. but late show had better punches n flow but most of them were played. Life was not hot at all nuttin really to vote on for him. u shoulda came alot harder . so the late show takes this wit better flow punches n overall creativity. RETURN THE FAVOR http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175294 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350 |
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