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Psymon Sand vs ?uest Logic
Battle Rules: 6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dickriding Minimum posts to vote: 450 Check in by: 01-29-05 at 05:56 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Psymon Sand has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 05:31 AM.
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You possess nothing appealin I'm Dealing w/ newbie who's High on Hope.
So I'll dish out an L & keep him there while I Supply the Dope. Tarnish ya reputation, Oh wait noone know's ya.. Cuz.. You be making the paper, but I'm the one who fold's ya.. I keep these board's jumping, like skateboarder's on a ramp.. But he can't see the light, cuz Sand just turned off his talent lamp. B!ah, I can't be bothered anymore. |
?uest Logic has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 05:46 AM.
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Hurry up, you bastard. So I can son you with my weak 6 line's.
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You heard right…RAPVERSE we are that much better
You’re from RB, so I’m going to kill your whole demeanor But it’s your fault that you had to play where the grass is greener This kid tried to step up` so I’m going to leave his legs severed Check my intro……RAPVERSE we are that much better You couldn’t cumn clean if you had your penis cleansed So go and take your ass back to the other side of the fence bitch…fuck RB.. next stay on your side of the fence and just watch bitch this was a real weak battle but im tired |
I expect better verse's from kindergarten's...fuck.
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i merked you..your shit was wack as fuck...
only your opener had some type of word play... |
Voted For: Psymon Sand
?UEST: You couldn’t cumn clean if you had your penis cleansed <==== NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that lost you the battle honestly. well, ya whole verse wasnt that good but that was the worst attempt at freshening up some 10 year old w/p ive ever seen. opener was wack sand: your first bar won you the battle didnt have to work hard avter that, just come w/ some non played shit that rhymed v/ sand p.s., link....sig...click...vote |
This was feedback posted for Psymon Sand
Upping this hoe's.....
............................... Upping. |
Voted For: Psymon Sand
You’re from RB, so I’m going to kill your whole demeanor But it’s your fault that you had to play where the grass is greener wtf?, gayest punch This kid tried to step up` so I’m going to leave his legs severed Check my intro……RAPVERSE we are that much better …weak punch You couldn’t cumn clean if you had your penis cleansed So go and take your ass back to the other side of the fence decent closer, prolly ur best You possess nothing appealin I'm Dealing w/ newbie who's High on Hope. So I'll dish out an L & keep him there while I Supply the Dope. decent opener, it landed Tarnish ya reputation, Oh wait noone know's ya.. Cuz.. You be making the paper, but I'm the one who fold's ya.. don’t use the same last words… I keep these board's jumping, like skateboarder's on a ramp.. But he can't see the light, cuz Sand just turned off his talent lamp. decent closer… P. Sand came harder than ?. Logic, in the punches… |
upping this hit..............i was clearly just repping RV..because he is from RB.......
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Upping.
Throw punches next time kid. Just cuz you repping RV in yo verse, dont mean you gon win. |
This was feedback posted for Psymon Sand
Ok Psymon Sand took this one in my opinion with more creativity and punches. I counted only 2 actual disses in Logics verse, but no attempts at punches, or metaphors. So thats why I voted this way.
Peace yall |
You didn't vote, or was it feed?
I won ?uest anyway's b!ah. |
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^^^ U guys stipulated that u need 480 posts to vote. So it forced me to leave it as feedback. |
Voted For: Psymon Sand
Psymond sand- Ok Punches was ok. The first bar was good. The 2nd bar was eh ok...3rd bar was creative but still good. Flow was chopped up in some places, dont stretch your lines that much fam.... ?uest Logic-Nice flow, punches was "eh" ok. Need some wordplays, nothing special nothing really stood out from your verse. overall=This battle is weak, both heads need some serious elevation. Psymon Sand, you had good effective punches, with ok flow still elevate on structure and punches. ?uest Logic, you had some good flow, punches on the otherhand was kinda weak and not very effective, need some elevation. I'mma go with psymon Sand, basically had effective punches and ?ues Logic punches was weak not very effective, mainly talking than throwing |
Voted For: ?uest Logic
clearly took it.... sand you had weak punches.... logic had better punches better flow better structure....he had better vocab... vote:logic return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174786 |
Thats such a explained vote.
I'll let you have it though. Since, you got merked. |
^^fuck you bitch i own you. just fucking wait i will get some votes...
by the way your wack |
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