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Old 01-30-05, 01:09 PM   #1
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Gutter Shad vs Judicial

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Old 01-30-05, 01:10 PM   #2
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Old 01-30-05, 01:20 PM   #3
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Nigga talk shit then you bout to meet my pistol. If you aint heard nigga I break the Judical system./
You pussy so we know that you softer than a pop tart. Can't rap so join Ms. Spears on the pop charts./
You got a soft heart, that gutter can rip to pieces. Got about as much rank as a fucking dog's phecisis./(Dog Shit)
I'm from the gutter but you the one who sleeping with rats. I'm in the black skull cap, treat you like an alley cat./
I'm in the maybach benz but you pushing your bike. And I'm the one who judging you I give you 20 to life./
And I aint that nice, but my shit be clean. Thinking you beating me guess again like jeans./
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Old 01-30-05, 02:05 PM   #4
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Old 01-30-05, 02:17 PM   #5
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opener:
fuck your bullshit rap,filled wit fakenes embroiled attacks
metaphorical slaps,battle hi-jacks and fake comebacks

killa:
see im causin devistation,hurt,pain and elaberation
2 dis kidz mental deformatation, u got no rhyme stabelization
dog wut im really sayin,ur rhymes iz nutttin but lyrical laxitation
ima spirtual-.....more like a godly rap-creation
wit da evilization of satan,now u persperatin, prayin
dat a few pity votes'll get u outta da self-dug grave dat u layin
im polution 2 ya brain,n u still cant spit ill enuf 2get a win
afta dis,u'll still b waitin 4 da left column of ur record 2 begin
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Old 01-30-05, 02:22 PM   #6
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Wow good shit alright uppin for votes!
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Old 01-30-05, 02:27 PM   #7
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Judicial-MY dawg with them mean multi'z ha, nice job fam. Punches was good, with them multi'z....Punches was "eh" ok. need elevation though....Wordplays was nice. flow was decent. multi'z hit hard fam nice job.



Gutter shad- i see you've took my advice, structure you've elevated nice fam, Punches was good, flow "eh" dont stretch your lines fam. Add multi'z like "Judcial". You need to work on grammer fam.


overall=Close battle, I cant vote cause judicial is in my crew. But this will be a close one

good luck on the polls judicial, wun
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Old 01-30-05, 02:30 PM   #8
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thanks......gutter good shit....playin off my name and shit lol...nice....Uppin tho...
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Old 01-30-05, 02:35 PM   #9
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Them is some big ass words you was using ...lol... fire man
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Old 01-30-05, 04:01 PM   #10
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Voted For: Judicial

This one goes to judicial to me. he killed the vocab (shade spelled feces wrong) and his verse was although none of this is real a little more real. He came wit vocab and punches straight, gutta kind of veered off into his imaginary world talkin bout his maybach bens and all, stick to reality kids. plus his punches weren't really original like the pop chart joke. anyway judicial takes this one.

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Old 01-30-05, 04:02 PM   #11
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by the way no hate on anybody you both had good shit
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Old 01-30-05, 04:46 PM   #12
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Thanks still uppin
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Old 01-30-05, 04:47 PM   #13
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O alright, judicial got an vote... woot woot......uppin for my nigga judicial and Gutter Shad.
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Old 01-30-05, 05:35 PM   #14
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upppin dis battle....4-real.................................
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Old 01-30-05, 06:01 PM   #15
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UPPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN dis battle ya'll
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