lyrical scripts vs Blac-Out
 

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lyrical scripts has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 01:09 PM.

black out i will take your face a clout his trout
i will leave your rhymes cry thoughout you will need to shout
"lookin4crew" ya anit getting jack im just going to black*
cut the aslack u must be high on crack still cudnt rhyme if i gave u a stack*
your not worth the shit your rhymes worth not a bit they so dipromatical shit
you've got ya verser no ur gonna lose scared to click submit,commit this transmit

*black him out
*stack of rhymes

Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 03:34 PM.

Huh? You wanna battle? Fukin noob, Lyrical Scripts//
Cum on Chris, your 12 years old, and da typical bitch//
Don’t fukin talk or clips get to ya wig//
Fa sho its splitting dat shit, don’t duck, bitch its still hitting dat shit//
you aint gonna survive once im blastin da tec//
you bastard, you said u aint, buh u "taking a chance" at death//

"unda his name it says TAKING NO MORE CHANCES"

Uppin............................................. ..............................

uupn.............................................. .........

Can we got some votes in here yall............Uppin

Voted For: Blac-Out

vote blac-out....lyrical ur punches was kinda basic u had a personal but it was a lil weak...blac-out ur punches hit a lil harder and ur personal was a lil better...
vote blac-out
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thanks i got u, uppin.......................................

Fuck Sake...................... :(

Imma Never Get 3 ext Wins

Voted For: lyrical scripts

this battle was kinda weak. didnt really see any killer punches or mettas that made me wunna drop my jaw. i think if these were audio, i wouldve prolly been more excited. but this was kinda weak.
i dunno why im gunna do this. but ima give this one to LS, even tho his verse was kinda softer, but i dunno. i was feelin his more. he had more personals in there, and better personals that made me wnna give him my vote. i think u should elevate a lot tho, cuase i wasnt feelin it that much, and it was kinda weak. ur lines were stretched. so i think u should work on that. and ur structure was off. but overall, i tink u came out on top in this one. i dunno, just my opinion.
BO-u had a nice verse, but i think yo verse was kinda played out. most of ur barz were played. i didnt see too muche creativitie in ur verse. but i was feelin tha structure. thats one up for u, but i think that wasnt good enough. i think u should elevate more on creativness and harder punches. ur punches were kidna soft, and didnt really land in tha right places.
overall-this battle wasnt all that to me, i think yall should work on a couple of things. yall not weak, but ur verses werent that hard. not too many punches landed in tha right areas in this one. but i still think LS came out on top, and snuck thru tha door with tha win....good shit LS

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but good battle, close one, but i think yall should elevate...NO HATE BO, just come a lil harder next time, thats all....its just one vote

^i wouldnt return that vote, or i'd get it taken off, cause it wasnt really that explained. but thats just me.....

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Bullshit *cough cough*...........Oh ite thanks though for da honest feedback though lol
UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ill return i no i need elevatioon but no1 will help me eleavate
thanx any way
pz

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Voted For: Blac-Out

overall, i think it was pretty close, but couple reasons just made me vote for blac-out
-lyrical, you were a little lackin in all departments, flow was very choppy, butchered, had good orginality and multis were in there, but structure was bad, punches were weak, personals werent hittin, just overall, you came out too soft i think, gotta make those punches do some damage, finisher was prolly the best line in there, nice try, elevate man

-blac-out, didnt really come hard either, but thats okay, he didnt at all, nice finisher, probs your best line too, little unflowing in the middle, but other than that, nice ring to it, good structure, punches and personals, work on those some more, but other than that, solid drop, keep elevatin man,

->takin blac-out, harder punches, better flow, came harder, word

Voted For: Blac-Out

V/Blac-out ....he gets my vote cause of his creative punchs they were to the point an simple.....no hate juss elavate....
punchs=blac
vocab=blac
structure=tie
opener=tie
closer=blac
overall=blac-out
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

i got u thanks for da vote Uppin i think i need 2 or 1 more

GRRRR..........................u need 2 more but u win

Uppin yal............................................... ...

Voted For: Blac-Out

wtf was LS doing? Big words do not get you a win homie. BO, flow/multis do not get you a win. BO gets the win though because he actually resembled punches while LS was just throwing words together. Both need to elevate severely and read more battles. And lose the ///'s. And actually the closer from BO was pretty good in my eyes. So both keep at it but

v-Black Out

Voted For: Blac-Out

Lyrical scripts- Your grammer was wrong...Flow was was choopy. lines was stretchY.......dONT stretch your lines that much........Punches was played and not very effective, still need some elevation.........Personal you use was ok........The only thing that was weak in your verse was flow and on the balance "punches" .......




Blac-out- You had some flow, and some effective punches, still need some elevation in process of that.....You need to add multi'z...and deep personals too.......Either way, you need elevation on punches and dont stectch your lines that much........




Overall=both in need of serious elevation. Punches was played in Lyrical scripts verse......FLow was fucked as the same.......Blac-out verse had some potential threw some punches but wasnt very good but was effective though...Lyrical came played and weak.......While blac-out came a little effective with his punches........Vote blac-out cause of harder punches and mostly harder flow