Gutter Shad vs Judicial
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 02-02-05 at 01:09 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Gutter Shad has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 01:10 PM.

Nigga talk shit then you bout to meet my pistol. If you aint heard nigga I break the Judical system./
You pussy so we know that you softer than a pop tart. Can't rap so join Ms. Spears on the pop charts./
You got a soft heart, that gutter can rip to pieces. Got about as much rank as a fucking dog's phecisis./(Dog Shit)
I'm from the gutter but you the one who sleeping with rats. I'm in the black skull cap, treat you like an alley cat./
I'm in the maybach benz but you pushing your bike. And I'm the one who judging you I give you 20 to life./
And I aint that nice, but my shit be clean. Thinking you beating me guess again like jeans./

Judicial has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 02:05 PM.

opener:
fuck your bullshit rap,filled wit fakenes embroiled attacks
metaphorical slaps,battle hi-jacks and fake comebacks

killa:
see im causin devistation,hurt,pain and elaberation
2 dis kidz mental deformatation, u got no rhyme stabelization
dog wut im really sayin,ur rhymes iz nutttin but lyrical laxitation
ima spirtual-.....more like a godly rap-creation
wit da evilization of satan,now u persperatin, prayin
dat a few pity votes'll get u outta da self-dug grave dat u layin
im polution 2 ya brain,n u still cant spit ill enuf 2get a win
afta dis,u'll still b waitin 4 da left column of ur record 2 begin

Wow good shit alright uppin for votes!

This was feedback posted for Judicial
 

Judicial-MY dawg with them mean multi'z ha, nice job fam. Punches was good, with them multi'z....Punches was "eh" ok. need elevation though....Wordplays was nice. flow was decent. multi'z hit hard fam nice job.



Gutter shad- i see you've took my advice, structure you've elevated nice fam, Punches was good, flow "eh" dont stretch your lines fam. Add multi'z like "Judcial". You need to work on grammer fam.


overall=Close battle, I cant vote cause judicial is in my crew. But this will be a close one

good luck on the polls judicial, wun

thanks......gutter good shit....playin off my name and shit lol...nice....Uppin tho...

Them is some big ass words you was using ...lol... fire man

Voted For: Judicial

This one goes to judicial to me. he killed the vocab (shade spelled feces wrong) and his verse was although none of this is real a little more real. He came wit vocab and punches straight, gutta kind of veered off into his imaginary world talkin bout his maybach bens and all, stick to reality kids. plus his punches weren't really original like the pop chart joke. anyway judicial takes this one.

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by the way no hate on anybody you both had good shit

Thanks still uppin

O alright, judicial got an vote... woot woot......uppin for my nigga judicial and Gutter Shad.

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Uppin for votes people!

yo vote.....act like its election day...get off ya ass and vote.............

yo what the fuck...rv is startin 2 get whack wit da fuckin lack of votin......but ne ways im FUCKIN UPPIN DIS FUCKIN BATTLE

Voted For: Judicial

ITE first of all, Judicial.........i voted for you buh you got my vote just by a LITTLE BIt............i vote Ju because of the multis mainly................i fuk wit all da multis in like every line and thats wa got me and shit..........Gutta..............i like da personals and sum of da punches and multis but sum of da punches was weak and i KNOW you coulda came harder because you not wack as a rapper u feel me..............just cum harder next time and i got u.....but im feelin all da multis and sum of da punches by Ju so My vote goes to him.

Thats 2 for my nigga judicial.


*starts breakdancing*

Thanks I should of came harder Thanks still uppin!

Werd...uppin for my nigga judicial.......holla......................

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Voted For: Judicial

Not a great battle here, but obviously Jud takes it..

Gutter- Verse was arite... shows you a noobie tho... Opener was aiite, nothin great, playin off his anme... 2nd line was prolly ya best, nice ryme, 2nd line was kinda played but decent line here...after that it went downhill.. not really any good pucnhes.. u braggin about a Benz? nigga please, keep that shit outta text battles... Last line was aiite, coulda been worded better.. i liked the guess line but like i said, worded different woulda been better.. Overall, work on complexity and punches, and more personals on ya oponent.. also, change ya struc, its fucked up...

Judicial- Not a bad verse, not good tho.. opener was arite, but jus seemed like random shit put together, tryna make a multi..keep ya opener with the rest of ya verse.. being it ya first line, we know its ay opener, dont gotta tell us... You had some decent lines, ya last 4 lines was ya best.. didn't like the "godly rap creation" line, self glorification.. like i said, last 4 was aiite, but the grave shit is played... so is the "you still not ill" shit.. i liked ya last line, best line in ya battle... hard hittin punch.. Overall, not bad... focus less on multi's and big words, and come wit harder punches...

Overall, jud takes it with harder punches, better structure, and an overall more complex and hard hitting verse...

V/ Judicial

Voted For: Judicial

see im causin devistation,hurt,pain and elaberation
2 dis kidz mental deformatation, u got no rhyme stabelization
buncha big words but no real punch...decent anyway
dog wut im really sayin,ur rhymes iz nutttin but lyrical laxitation
ima spirtual-.....more like a godly rap-creation
wit da evilization of satan,now u persperatin, prayin
dat a few pity votes'll get u outta da self-dug grave dat u layin.........ehhhh decent like the 1st line, and the satan line as well..
im polution 2 ya brain,n u still cant spit ill enuf 2get a win
afta dis,u'll still b waitin 4 da left column of ur record 2 begin
ok decent punch not all that



a fucking dog's phecisis./(Dog Shit)
I'm from the gutter but you the one who sleeping with rats. I'm in the black skull cap, treat you like an alley cat./
"im and your concept" needs some work...decent bar
I'm in the maybach benz but you pushing your bike. And I'm the one who judging you I give you 20 to life./
its not the self glorify thats wack...its the fact dat we know u have no maybach
And I aint that nice, but my shit be clean. Thinking you beating me guess again like jeans./
....noooo thats played since biggie was alive!

overall gutter shit was decent but too familiar
jud didnt really have punches but was fresher to read
vote...jud

now peep this
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1947283

Voted For: Judicial

gutter. u had a good verse, but i think ur structure fucked that up for u. u need to learn how to count barz, cuase it dont seem like u kno how. but u did have some nice punches in there, but i think u worded them poorly. if u came harder with wordplay, and better rhymes for ur punchs, i think u wouldve got this...elevate on that fam...NO HATE...
judicial-i think u took this one cause u came consistent and harder wit punches. but fuck that. YO MULTIES KILLED HIM. yo multies were nice. thats what im learnin to do right now, im focusin on that. but i think u should take that side talent, and gain talent wit ur punches, mettas, and structure if u aint already got it, and mix it all in one, and i garentee u, u will be doper. but this was a nice drop. i was feelin it, and i think u came nice, and i like ur style and originalty...
overall-judicial got this one. hands down. no hate, i just think he came a lil harder, n he threw some personals in there, that were nice..i was feelin this, and gutta., just come harder next time...

plz RTF on battle link in sig...pick a crew battle if u will...and xplain it, cause too many battles gettin slept on....

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