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Kesse vs Kamikazee
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-30-05 at 10:14 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Kamikazee has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 09:47 PM.
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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 09:54 PM.
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I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic, U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope, Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope |
'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide
by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic |
loookin for some upppin, UPPP this shit peeeps, cman, UPPP
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Voted For: Kamikazee
v/Kamikazee.....close battle but he gets my vote he came wit more creative punchs an vocab wit personals.....kesse ur verse was ok not really anything new not much diss's an good vocab....no hate juss elavate...... punch=kam structure=kam vocab=kam opner=kam closer=kam overall=kamikazee *RETURN THE FAVOR* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Kamikazee
Aight both y'all lines were hella stretched.. however i felt Kamikazee were bringing more punches.. your opener was a good start for you.. I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator, Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator ^that was a nice way to start out.. your second bar was only decent the part about sonic was not hot....... the first half was pretty good tho.. closer: not too hot for a closer but was fairly decent.. Kesse with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war ^^coulda been worded better to make a better attempt at a punch.. you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic ^^you coulda changed that up a lil'.... to make that effective.. aight i judged a few lines from both y'all... in this case however, Kamikazee took this battle with a few more concepts and punches.. both y'all verses were stretched tho.. BUT my vote goes to Kamikazee. |
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word, thannks for the feed, no hatin......some more upppinnn thou
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uppppppppinn...........hey man, no hate eh, just voted on who i thou dropped harder, nah mean, like you dropped a sweet verse here, against audios didnt really look like you came as hard, but whatever man, hate me if you like....word, uppp this shit bitches
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Voted For: Kesse
kesse-the punches werent very good...okay vocabulary...iight opener...good closer (i see a lot of potential here) opener-5 punches-4 wordplay-2 multies-0 vocab-5 closer-7 kamikazee-verse had usseless lines...terrible punches...bad opener...bad closer...okay vocab opener-3 punches-3 worplay-4 multies-1 vocab-4 closer-2 both-could have used more multies, better punches, and a better vocab...the flows also werent that great Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^rtf, link is in my signature........................................
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Voted For: Kesse
kesse took this one all tha way...better wordplay, better vocab. better structure(no stretched lines like kami)...better personals, better punches...u name it, dude got it, all tha way...i think u got mad skillz. go to 'crews and collaborations', click on 'new crews', go to 'NOK OUT KINGS', and drop in our 'New Talent' thread...drop this verse, imma tha leader, and im recruitin u, cause this verse was hard. u came flawless. i was feelin this...u started off good, and u finished good...keep elevating kami-u had a good verse. but ur verse was lackin good structure. he came at u wit harder personals, that made ur verse look bad. u had some play'd lines in there, and i wasnt feelin ur all around verse. overall-kesse, took this one hands down. just came out on top in this one... plz return tha favor on battle link in sig. and kesse, hit up that NOK thread homie...we want u...and plz RTF, and xplain yall votes, cause i took my time out to vote on this... keep elevating, and NOK is for you fam... ~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Kesse
Checking the polls on this bitch....................izzle.
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Voted For: Kamikazee
kamikazee got this his personals were better his flow hit harder punches were nice everything was jus a step better than kesse but either way good shit both of ya jus go get ur shit critiqued it will help alot good shit kamikazees favorite lines: All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic, U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
kamikazee can u please return
tha favor on my battle against top spit thx |
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Voted For: Kesse
this was a close battle but kesse edged it ill tell you why... kamikazee... I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator, Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator ^^ self gloryfication not good the second line had a lil punch All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic, U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic ^^some creativity in the first line but the second line came weak I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope, Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope ^^ nice closure and a good punch... overall i thought u came weak... i have seen better from you.. your first line was not good but u pulled it back kinda with your other punches... your flow was on point throught the whole verse and your structure was aight... 6/10 kesse... 'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide ^^ decent opener name plat and decent punch with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war ^^ another good personal decent job your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse ^^ alryyt punch could'av been better you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic ^^ haha decent close i liked the sweet diabetic line lol overall u had some decent punches in there and some good personals... your flow stayed srtong and your structure was alryyt ill have to give you this becuz of your harder hitting punches and personals... please return the favour with an honest vote on any baqttle in my sig please explain your votes as they do get d/qued which is not good... pz. |
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Voted For: Kesse
Kesse takes this battle for the overall better flo. kamikaze's punches were senseless. what's the equator got to do with anything and if you're going to reference someone else it's your job to make sure we understand so you should probably use some kinda explanation on who sonic is. kesse's lines were kinda weak but the punch landed. heard better from a mime, it's easy to understand mime's don't speak and the personal on kamikaze's name was decent. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459 me vs. illmatic |
This was feedback posted for Kesse
Kesse won this one easily...........but just checking the polls.
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Voted For: Kesse
u took dis fam..no hate on kamikazee da reason y u lose cuzz ya lines stretch 2 much its no way u can flow dat shit and u still spittin basic punchlines when u gon step ya shit up u got new niggaz merkin u.......changin ya name everyday wont help either opener-kess structure-kess punchlines-kess creativity-kess multis-nun wordplay-nun personals-nun finisher-kess enjoyed-kess ofcourse he was just more consistant with his verse.. RETURN DA VOTE |
uppin dis battle is bullshit ur punk ass went running to strobe to get votes removed i was up 3-2 now im down 3-1.....wut kind of shit is dat
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your fault dumb ass, you had a fuckin crew vote, but even if i didnt report it, you were up 3-2, now its 3-1, i woulda won 5-4 piece of shit, stop fuckin whining |
uppppppin this shit,,,, get some votin happin plz, uppppin
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