Premanition vs Dialect
 

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Check in by: 01-31-05 at 03:38 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

Dialect has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 03:09 PM.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-31-05 03:15 PM.

B!ah, w/e.
Done.

shit I meant to make this 8 lines.
Hey Prem, you cool with 8?

Sand = His Alias or His Old Name
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Just Tryner Be ‘Ill’, Man You Must Be ‘Sick’ Of Ur ‘Health’…
No Matter Wot I Say, You Just Can’t Get A Grip Of Yourself…(Sand)
Sayin You Skilled? But Elbows All You Bringin To The Table…
Rapper? Im ‘Shocked’, U Only ‘Live’ Wen Bathing Wiv A Cable…
Big Hotshot From Rb, Gonna Beat Me? You And What Army…
I’ll Leave You More Sliced & Diced Than Bark On A Palm Tree…
Dialect Seeked A Vet, That U Bout To Regret But Thx 4 Da Props…(*)
Only Thing I Look For In Ur Verse Is The Significant Full ‘Stops’.’…(**)
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(*) – Called Me Out And Said I Was The Only ‘VET’ Online
(**) – Where Do Full Stops Go? Figure It Out
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pz

Nice verse.
Upping.
Upping.
Upping.
Upping.
Upping.

yeh you to dawg gud luck

uppin

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pz

Upping.
Upping.
Upping.
Upping.
Upping.
Upping.

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wake up people

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This was feedback posted for Dialect
 

cant vote on this 1 but gonna give it to karma..... nice punches. Although full stops was hot when u think about it, hes just waitin for the end.



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uppin this for god sake man not one vote yet

Voted For: Premanition

i think prem took this one with harder punches and wayy better personals. i was also feelin tha structure, but i feel this was a too short drop. if ur oponent wouldve came harder, i think u wouldve lost this one.
Karmabarz- there was no way i was feelin ur verse. i think u should elevate a lot. ur structure was bad, and ur punches didnt land right. i just think ur drop was too simple. i wasnt feelin it, no hate..

overall-i think prem took thsi one....hands down..

plz RTF on battle link in sig against konfliktz, and plz explain it, cause i took my time out to vote on this and explain it...it only takes abouty 2 min...


thanx


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Voted For: Premanition

Karmabarz
Prem, really I could slow down & slice you.
....But your too far behind me.
............So I gotta basically snipe you.
…wack punch, don’t use double ending rhymes
Prem ya should of foreseen, This battle’s over your head..
First mistake you made was registering…
…………........Second was dropping ya verse in this thread..
decent punch
Forecast I wouldn't check in..there goe’s chance’s of victory.
But you could refer to me as a prostitute, the way I'm makin this quick-&-free.
uhh…don’t really get this one
Punches precise, but yours, always miss.
I told this fag I’ll close this deal….
…………& he moved in for the kiss.
nah, wack closer here


Premanition
Just Tryner Be ‘Ill’, Man You Must Be ‘Sick’ Of Ur ‘Health’…
No Matter Wot I Say, You Just Can’t Get A Grip Of Yourself…(Sand)
uhh…decent punch
Sayin You Skilled? But Elbows All You Bringin To The Table…
Rapper? Im ‘Shocked’, U Only ‘Live’ Wen Bathing Wiv A Cable…
good punch line here
Big Hotshot From Rb, Gonna Beat Me? You And What Army…
I’ll Leave You More Sliced & Diced Than Bark On A Palm Tree…
nah, not feelin this one
Dialect Seeked A Vet, That U Bout To Regret But Thx 4 Da Props…(*)
Only Thing I Look For In Ur Verse Is The Significant Full ‘Stops’.’…(**)
decent closer

Overall Premanition came harder in the punches in this one
And had pretty decent personas in his drop

No hate…

finally some votes........


uppin this.............

Voted For: Premanition

Premanition

Just Tryner Be ‘Ill’, Man You Must Be ‘Sick’ Of Ur ‘Health’…
No Matter Wot I Say, You Just Can’t Get A Grip Of Yourself…(Sand)
^nice opener,good wordplay with his name and such, 1st line a bit played

Sayin You Skilled? But Elbows All You Bringin To The Table…
Rapper? Im ‘Shocked’, U Only ‘Live’ Wen Bathing Wiv A Cable…
^good bar

Big Hotshot From Rb, Gonna Beat Me? You And What Army…
I’ll Leave You More Sliced & Diced Than Bark On A Palm Tree…
^not real punch,bit self-glorification but good wordplay

Dialect Seeked A Vet, That U Bout To Regret But Thx 4 Da Props…(*)
Only Thing I Look For In Ur Verse Is The Significant Full ‘Stops’.’…(**)
^hehe,dope ending for sure,funny stuff

Cool battle, found good balance with your vocab, had your flow on lock and the structure was cool. Nice punches and some personals,here and there bit played or self-glorification but overall pretty creative stuff. Liking the wordplay, solid drop!


Karmabarz

Prem, really I could slow down & slice you.
....But your too far behind me.
............So I gotta basically snipe you.
^okay opener but lacking creativity,no real punch in fact

Prem ya should of foreseen, This battle’s over your head..
First mistake you made was registering…
…………........Second was dropping ya verse in this thread..
^nice one,been used before but still good punch

Forecast I wouldn't check in..there goe’s chance’s of victory.
But you could refer to me as a prostitute, the way I'm makin this quick-&-free.
^refer to you as a prostitute?not feeling this one

Punches precise, but yours,:nono: always miss.
I told this fag I’ll close this deal….
…………& he moved in for the kiss.
^hehe,good closer

Had some good punches here and there,no real personals and some of them were mad played. Overall lacked some creativity and nice wordplay but your vocab was okay, flow was good and structure was cool. Just get more hardhitting things next time and try to be more creative...no hate...please return the favor...

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2 more votes to kill this off

pz

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This was feedback posted for Premanition
 

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can i finally get this closed.........................

Voted For: Premanition

Prem- i thought you had a very nice verse. you had alot of good multi's and punches. your personals are nice... you had alot of good vocab .. and you used what u had and proved why your a "Vet".. you had a good structure and your flow was on key. over all a very nice drop

Karm- your structure was off which made the flow sorta off. you had your punches but they werent as strong or witty as prem's. you really need to work on your vocab it was just really to basic...so over all up your vocab and work on your punches...

Vote//Prem- over all i'll go with prem because he really had a much better more organized verse. his vocab and punches were better thats why he is getting my vote

RTF link is in the sig

Voted For: Premanition

Alright Prem clearly won this battle,

Karma come with,,,.. A nice opener but the verse
slipped off after that. Didn't really have any punchs
flowed alright but thats about it.

Best Bar,..
Prem, really I could slow down & slice you.
....But your too far behind me.
^Witty but only that and elbows was at the table^


Prem come with,.. Nice opener with a personal and
a bit of witt,.. Flowed floorlessly.

Best bar,..
Dialect Seeked A Vet, That U Bout To Regret But Thx 4 Da Props…(*)
Only Thing I Look For In Ur Verse Is The Significant Full ‘Stops’.’…(**)
^This bar killed it alone, need I say more. Prem won
this battle easy.

Vote ~ Prem

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