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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-14-05 at 02:03 PM

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Kal El has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 01:34 PM.

Shotgun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 01:36 PM.

you really fucked up when you accepted this challenge...
ya flow is off point like wheels on a car that ain't balanced...
killer bee was on swarm but you took over his hive...
this line hit you where you see at punchline to the eye...
ya name can't define your useless like a dogs that blind...
shotgun run up on you,you pussy but i won't hit from behind...
buck fifty ya face up you cover the scars with makeup...
buckshots to ya abdomen and you won't wakeup...
shoot at ya feet i wanna see you boogyman...
you won't make it like p.diddys making the band...

Lock n' Load, my spits be sticky like when a cock explodes,
Shotgun's barrels pointin backwards, he was done before he flowed.
He was done when he pulled the trigga, not knowin I buck shots too,
Xcept my shots come bigger, his are slowin, I duck shots foo'.
I don't block punches you aint throwing or counter shots that no ones feeling.
Like the Don King of the rhymin world. You battlin? Then I'm stealing.
I'm robbing you of your dignity, of your dreams and aspirations.
Shotgun dont come with a bang, I ruined esteem and expectations.
Young Gun - You've got a future. I'll take you in and instruct.
Just don't point that gun at yourself, pull that shit, and self destruct.

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lets get some votes people, not tryin to have my first 2 battles end without a result. UPPPPPPPPPPPPP this shit

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Voted For: Kal El

no punches or metaphors, an weak personals, both had flows that were all over the place, but when it comes down to it i was feelin Kal El's verse more.

Voted For: Kal El

this was an ok battle but could have been betta both of y'all need 2 elevate in ur rhymes 4 the next time:
opener: kal el
structure: shotgun
multis: kal el
vocab: kal el
punches: kal el
personals: shotgun
closer: kal el
kal el won my vote 4 the simple fact he came harder then shotgun

Voted For: Kal El

pucnches-kal-el
persenals-kal-el
stuck-----tie
flow------kal-el
vocab----kal-el

kal-el came much harder than shotgun he came weak as kal-el had nice punches vocab flow and all that shotgun elevate u came rly weak

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uppin for votes as soon as i can i will return the favor

worrrrrrrrrrrrrrd fair votin i think, ill return the favor for all those who voted its been a while since i been here though

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Voted For: Kal El

oh yeah...I forgot to return the favour so here...

hmm...this was a close battle...but I give it to u man...I think u had better personals and more hittin punches that were on point...anyway uppin...

oh yeah...return favour again...please

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