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Young Phrophet 02-02-05 02:17 PM

Khaos_daRenegade vs Young Phrophet
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 02:17 PM

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System 02-02-05 02:18 PM

Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 02:18 PM.

System 02-02-05 02:18 PM

Young Phrophet has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 02:18 PM.

Khaos_daRenegade 02-02-05 02:36 PM

by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
like a candle in da wind u will die out quick....
lol, heres da proof dawg ya tryout spit...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=Young+phrophet
and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...


:thumbup: :laugh2:
im da shit :thefinger

Khaos_daRenegade 02-02-05 03:38 PM

damn dawg wat u doin searchin for rhymes on the net

Young Phrophet 02-09-05 12:46 PM

Ya rhymes suck and damn sure are shifty//
Now what the fuck Khaos you ain't got shit me to diss me//Thought you had me in sight, though I was marked to be dead//but in fact the target was aimed at the back of ya head//
Comin in swiftly, move like when vapor is misty//
you lookin back tryin to figure out why ya shadows' shifty//
Let me tell you nice... I'm not ya fuckin shadow, and you shoulda thought twice before accepting the fuckin battle//
Now, i got more ammo, that'll blend you into shit like you was mothafuckin camo//
I may choose the triggaz, but my triggaz neva choose//
Cuz who i choose to pop won't matter cuz the shooter isn't you//
I'll slash ya vest, rip it off, then i'll gash ya chest//
Pussy, have ya momma take you back to rest, just to prove you ain't got skill to question second guess//
Ain't my fault you gettin hung your the one who wove ya rope//
Before you took a shot at me, you shoulda checked to scope//

Young Phrophet 02-09-05 12:48 PM

and just to let you know

False Phrophet! Haha! I laugh~Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khaos_daRenegade 02-09-05 03:03 PM

by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
like a candle in da wind u will die out quick....
lol, heres da proof dawg ya tryout spit...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=Young+phrophet
and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...

intensify effect 02-09-05 03:50 PM

Voted For: Young Phrophet



Ya rhymes suck and damn sure are shifty//
Now what the fuck Khaos you ain't got shit me to diss me//
Thought you had me in sight, though I was marked to be dead//
but in fact the target was aimed at the back of ya head//
Comin in swiftly, move like when vapor is misty//
you lookin back tryin to figure out why ya shadows' shifty//
Let me tell you nice... I'm not ya fuckin shadow, and you shoulda thought twice before accepting the fuckin battle//
Now, i got more ammo, that'll blend you into shit like you was mothafuckin camo//
I may choose the triggaz, but my triggaz neva choose//
Cuz who i choose to pop won't matter cuz the shooter isn't you//
I'll slash ya vest, rip it off, then i'll gash ya chest//
Pussy, have ya momma take you back to rest, just to prove you ain't got skill to question second guess//
Ain't my fault you gettin hung your the one who wove ya rope//
Before you took a shot at me, you shoulda checked to scope//

^^^ i had to quote the whole thing CUZ i aint feelign like brakin it down bar by bar...

ya flow was on-point, but punches u lacked on , this looked more like a open mic verse but still not bad a couple of good lines in there and other wasnt, creativeness was aight but could of been better good try....


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by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
preety good..

like a candle in da wind u will die out quick....
lol, heres da proof dawg ya tryout spit...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=Young+phrophet
ia int see the ink but if its true decent personal...

and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
ok..

usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...
decent ending...

what can i say short and sweet.. a good punch in there, flow good, creativeness slightly better and a personal in there...

^^ so u get the win by a hair u just edge it out...

returnt he favor of a HONEST VOTE::
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174354
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024

Vote switched

Khaos_daRenegade 02-09-05 04:03 PM

yoooooo that vote was for me not young right????????

intensify effect 02-09-05 04:21 PM

OOOOOOOOOO-SHIT my fult dogs.......

yea pm strobe and tell him to switch it word........

Armada Da 187 02-09-05 04:51 PM

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

Khaos got this by a thread

Punches were the factor in this one n khoas brought it better in my mind. Young Ya punches were good but not as to the point ya had sayings that directed sumwhere else khaos when i red his disses i new where aimed at u

flow was good on both
good structure
little personals but still godd for both

Khaos gets the vote due to Punches

Good Battle fams
Holla

godfather 02-11-05 09:17 AM

Voted For: Young Phrophet

i think young phrophet won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
khaos u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were alright

best young prophet lines:
Comin in swiftly, move like when vapor is misty//
you lookin back tryin to figure out why ya shadows' shifty//
Let me tell you nice... I'm not ya fuckin shadow, and you shoulda thought twice before accepting the fuckin battle//
Now, i got more ammo, that'll blend you into shit like you was mothafuckin camo//
I may choose the triggaz, but my triggaz neva choose//
Cuz who i choose to pop won't matter cuz the shooter isn't you//

best khaos lines:
and yea dis false phrophet just preachin and fakin...
but the only truth to ya is the beatin u takin...
usually i kill fast but for u ima slowly slaughter...
and leave dis fake reverend drownin in holy water...

Khaos_daRenegade 02-11-05 10:23 AM

uppin this shit ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ need more votes

Young Phrophet 02-15-05 12:25 PM

uppin............................................. .............................

lilrenegade89 02-16-05 11:56 PM

Voted For: Young Phrophet

damn this boy up here killed him his flow was awsome but most of use the punches were killa my vote goes to ya boy here. now on the down low i mean way low we got this busted ass white boy aka Khaos_daRenegade
his flow was wack shitty toilet punches lil shit like that is gay there so weak a gun taget punch way beats a diss on his shitty lines which anrn't shitty
we all know that im da only tru renegade and i will battle ne bitch that says different so if ya think ya can take ya boi gime me a pm or an im at skatsmart on aol instant messenger
my boi states da facts bitch

Young Phrophet 02-17-05 12:29 PM

Thanks kid big ups i'll return fav! Uppin............................................

Khaos_daRenegade 02-20-05 11:34 AM

ay yo dis is some faggot ass shit his verse isnt even a battle verse and this other renegade is d/r but uppin dis shit

Young Phrophet 02-22-05 12:25 PM

Listen kid don't hate cuz you know where this battle is goin but uppin....................

Young Phrophet 02-23-05 02:00 PM

Uppin..................................don't sleep on this word^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Khaos_daRenegade 02-24-05 10:34 AM

uppin dis shit man we need votes stop sleepin i always vote so if u vote ill return the fav drop the link

The Militant 02-24-05 10:39 AM

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

khaos won this with better punches and better vocab nice flow and structre metas gooda been a lil batter but the worked
best line-by yo rhymes i can tell u da kiddie and lazy type...
cuz all yo lines be about as shitty as baby wipes...
6.5/10

The Militant 02-24-05 10:40 AM

please return the vote in my sig thanks...........

InGage 02-24-05 12:37 PM

Voted For: Young Phrophet

Hot verse Young um Khaos you need to elevate fast.

Everything was hot with Young tho
Keep it gangsta
One. Real.!

Young Phrophet 02-24-05 12:43 PM

Thanks go! i'll return fav fam!~ uppin................................

Khaos_daRenegade 02-25-05 04:03 PM

ingage that simple ass vote dont count and i think phrophet might be pm'n peeps for votes or some shit cuz i killed him and this shit should have been ova uppin this for some decent votes

Compose 02-25-05 04:42 PM

This was feedback posted for Khaos_daRenegade
 
checkin polls......................................

Compose 02-25-05 04:45 PM

yea khaos...prophet voted for himself...same IPs

Khaos_daRenegade PM strobe and tell him to disqualify Young Prophet


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