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TuNiT vs SQUAD-UP
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6 bars max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 02-05-05 at 07:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
TuNiT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:26 PM.
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yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN
you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN'' am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET' |
SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-05 08:06 PM.
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SQUUUUUAAAAD UP!!!!!!!!!
chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY |
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
easy win 4 u fam..ya shit was more creative and hottah than t's shit no personal's but fukk it...t u look like u got potential but dis battle u came real basic nahmean like da last line dat was some shit a nigga would say a few ago opener-squad structure-squad...t ya last line was madd long punchlines-squad datz where he killed creativity-squad multis-squad wordplay-squad had a lil personals-nun finisher-squad enjoyed-squad...nuff said return da favor link in my sig |
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
Squad up took this one for his mad wordplay. his wordplay made up for his lack of personals. His multis were decent and structure was good. he was creative and strayed away from those garbage ass masturbation lines cause when he said on the ball i was sure that's what was comin and that would've lost my vote. Tunit's punches were good but a little too plain and expected like the niptuck line. He also could've did alot more with the name squad up. anyway rtv. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459 me vs. illmatic |
Voted For: TuNiT
winner- tunit close battle though chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY squad's verse had some nice punches, flow was there, inner rhyming was there, lacked vocab though yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN'' am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET' Tunit- punches came stronger than squad's, flow was consistent, finisher was stronger, opener wasn't bad |
hahahah ur joking right? neway uppin for votes holla at me
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hahahah ur joking right? neway uppin for votes holla at me
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
Squad-Up chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's decent opener ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs this was coo t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at coo Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in i kinda wasnt feelin this but it's decent u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben kinda coo shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY this was a nice closer overall...this you had a pretty coo verse...punches hit kinda hard...some multies and a little wordplay...i kinda wasnt feelin one bar...but it was decent...and the rest of your verse was decent...coo verse...8.5/10 TuNit yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN'' decent opener am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT this was kinda weak cuz we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD a little played but decent you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK kinda wasnt feelin this one...and it was a lil' streched ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET' this was kinda weak and basic...i've heard it toooo much overall...your verse was aight...but you had a couple of basic, weak, and decent rhymes and shit...you gotta be a little bit more creative...you had a couple of good punches tho...multies were decent i guess...but work on your structure and punches a bit more...5.5/10 |
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thanks for the honest feedback uppin for votes+++++++++++++
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thanks for the honest feedback uppin for votes+++++++++++++
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thanks for the honest feedback uppin for votes+++++++++++++
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
Squad-Up Nice Battle Both Verses Was Good, Need Some Elevation Though Pretty Decent For Newbies, Anyway, Squad Up Had Some Nice punches Here, That Helped His Flow Out, Also Had An Plethora Of Vocabulary, Found It Decent, Mult's Could Of Bin Upped In This Battle, But It Was Decent Vocab=Squad Punches=Tie Flow=Squad Multi's=Tie Meta's=Tie Vote=Squad Up Return The Favor Man Link In My Siggy |
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy squad and they will b returned wit honest opinions
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c'mon mayn u gotta b kiddin me uppin for votes..........get this shit closed
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Voted For: SQUAD-UP
squad..... chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's nice opener...good wordplay...i liked this.. ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs decent here....hit good t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at ehh ok....nothin special Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in pretty good wordplay...hit ok u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben decent...didnt hit very well though shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY nice closer......hit good Tunit........... yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN'' ehh ok wordplay here....decent opener am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT gunplay not good....not too great of a bar here we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD nice...liked the wordplay...gunplay is ok in this situation you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK decent here..... ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET' not a good closer...set up line was nice...punch was bad overall....squad got this for creativity and his punches hit a lot harder.......wordplay was about even...squad may have had the upper hand there.....but squad definitely got this with his punches and creativity...punches just hit harder.....RTF..link in sig squad |
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