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L~S vs dOpEbOi 210
Battle Rules:
8 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 02-05-05 at 06:52 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
dOpEbOi 210 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 06:22 PM.
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his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak
cuz like 14 days...u too-weak nigga u mo' sweet then swishas ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ |
L~S has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 06:23 PM.
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dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy u anit gonna beable to cope boy ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck *merked |
aiight my verse is in playa.....i only got 2 battle creds now.........damn...cant believe i wasyed 5 on a battle u declined
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nigga u pre-write like no othaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....i already had my verse in on tha battle u declined...but its all good...uppin
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i dont pre-write how do i pre-write
or do uu mean cuz i did it so quick |
i dont think u did that verse cuz like u said u only wanted 6 lines n how u suck...n i made a battle wit 6-15 lines but u ducked it...then u change it to an 8 line only battle....n u still spit 9 lines
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i always do 6 lines but i never do more than 8 but so i though id make it fair and give u some crd so i put 8
and my bad about the 9............ |
uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn
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This was feedback posted for L~S
i ain't even gonna vote on this battle cause it too wack to even be a battle.
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uppin.................i didnt even try..................
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Voted For: L~S
i think im gna have to give this to l~s you have elevated alot good job here... dopeboi... his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak cuz like 14 days...u too-weak ^^ nice first line kinda simple but the second line lost the punch nigga u mo' sweet then swishas ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas ^^ not feelin tht line i didnt get it im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle ^^ hmm spose it was an ight punch u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ ^^ he was never on nwa... fake personal... overall i thought u had a coupkle of good lines... your flow was good structure was good but the vocab was too simple ill have to give you 6.10 :thumbup: L~s... dopeboi u gonna need some hope boy u anit gonna beable to cope boy ^^ no punch but good use of multies ya rhymnes are shit man ya cant rap wrap ya rhymes is one slap trap with ya strap ^^ kindoff a punch good use of multies agen homo thinking he hard man the war has only just began ^^ dont know waht was going on there im rhyming from japan rhymes so hard hit him down from there sure u dont wanna edit ya rhymes and repair beware but u in hospital care ^^ decent punch but kinda simple ya wack nuffin to stay on rv for u suck just here to get some RV buck man ya have been took* u just anit worth the hassle so go have ur homo suck ^^ alryt punch i guess alryyt closure... overall i think u have elevated alot well done... you had some decnt multies in there flow was good structure was ight and u had a couple of punches in there... imma give it to you becuz of flow multies and the structure if u had more punches you wouldav won this eazy... 6.3.10 alryyt battle... stay up :thumbup: |
thanx 4 da vote...............uppin...............
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This was feedback posted for L~S
checkin the polls.....
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upin.............................................. ..........
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This was feedback posted for L~S
checking,good battle,just checking polls..........
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This was feedback posted for dOpEbOi 210
yeah, you suck dick. You would be banished from this site in a second. Quit duckin' pussy.
-CJ- |
stop posting feed and vote!!
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Voted For: L~S
i vote for blitz......both were close but dopeboi bit off of diplomatic immunity 2 off of jim jones or 40 cal one of them when he says like 14 days 2 weak |
tell strobe if u have proof........................anuther darobboi lol
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This was feedback posted for dOpEbOi 210
yo I say u make ur verses kinda longer and keep elevatin...no hate...one~~
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i hate going over 8 lines... normal i do 8 but this loser complained
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Voted For: L~S
THIS BATTLE WAS WACK. I WASNT FEELIN TOO MUCH IN THIS ONE... blitz-i think u got this one,wit a better all around verse. yo structure was terrible, and some of ur lines were stretched, but i think u won him wit tha beginin of ur verse, wit them multies and shit. u didnt really have any hard punches in there to pick out, but i was feelin ur verse more. i think u came harder in this one, but i think u got a lot of elevating to do. dope-yo verses structure made this one lose for u. you structure was terrible...nothin more to say about that. yo punches didnt land at all, and i wasnt feelin yo wordplay. i think u gota lot of elevating to do...work on yo structure first, cause thats tha main focus n text battlin..if u got yo structure good, then u are one step closer to being a DOPEBOI...no hate tho, just practice. dont quit... overall--this battle wasnt there for me, i think yall gota a lot of elevating to do, b4 u can get to tha merkin stage. blitz took it, but battle some better people next time. u never get better until u witness a loss...lol and check out tha NOK thread, and drop a tryout... Return tha favor, and place a vote on one of my battle links in tha sig...they aint there 4 decoration. i took my time out to vote on this battle, and leave some good feedback., so show some respect, and go vote on my shit, and EXPLAIN ur vote thoroughly...THANX ~1~ |
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U CANT TALK SON...UR EXTREMELY WACK..I WILL MERK YOU....MATTER OF FACT, ANYONE OF THESE CATS WILL MERK YOU |
^^ lmfao..................ill return the fav
who u tell to check out NOK? (if me then i will if u get good elevation) |
This was feedback posted for dOpEbOi 210
Just chexckin the polls for the little mini-me motherfucker over here, lol
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Voted For: L~S
Blitz Alright Nice Man Punches Was Cool, Personals Had Some Decent Shit, Vocabulary Ey Alright Man, Wordplay Try And Elevate On That Bruh, Punches And Personals Was Cool, Also Try And Elevate On Structure Man Weerd........................................ DopeBoi Okay Your Shit Was Just Plain Out Whack No Need To Explain But Ya Punches Was Terrible I Mean Damn Vocabulary Wa Whacked, So Was Personals You Need Some New Shit Man Best Thing You Had Is Structure Vote-Blitz, RTF Man Link Up In My Sig Me Vs .K.onflitz |
Voted For: dOpEbOi 210
ls- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ blitz - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/ls make sure 2 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183063 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182879 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
damn i ment to vote for l.s holla at strobe still rtf
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Voted For: L~S
this is a horrrrrrible battle ick ..... ok both of you need major work in your punches and structure....overall though blitz you take it because your verse just sucked less than his.. you had nothing special it was just for the simple fact that you actually sorta rhymed and had punches .... his names L~S cuz he ona Losin-Streak cuz like 14 days...u too-weak nigga u mo' sweet then swishas ill hav u mo' distraut den hopeful wishas im gettin da easy W hands down in dis battle ill leave ya head mo' sideways then dolley P on her saddle u couldnt turn tricks even if u was sleezy lay off da NWA nigga...cuz like mista E..u too EZ ^^ just read what you wrote their ummmm your structure was ight .. but your punches were weaker than a a five yearolds punches.... lol i have no clue what to say to both of you except elevate elevate elevate.... ew vote//blitz |
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