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khaos_daRenegade vs Golden shellz
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-09-05 at 01:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 02:01 PM.
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ur a fuckin renegade? old like em and jay in da past
get rid of this newbie fast, my bloods'll 1-8-7 ya ass quick to challenge a lethal threat but u have no prominence like a mexican, u could "hop"the fence,smashed by my dominence u got 3 days nigga, i hope u make in time matter fact i should say fuck this verse and see if hes online ur not even woth my lines, better yet worth my rhymes every vote i get is me tellin u 5 times* ur fucked now, i could spare u become a beggar i have ya shirts lookin more red then the tomatoe that hit swartzaneggar *wen u vote for someone ur sayin that their verse is better than the other niggas |
Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 01:22 PM.
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goldenshellz battle me, whoa son is bold....
but he garbage, only hot when my gun explode.... dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug.... cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud... i shoot da nine and put some of u in yaself... den laugh at u, like dummy stop abusin yaself... tell me why dis nigga gotta be so lame... and why khaos spit dope shit like he eat cocaine... and with yo name the whole board knows u silly... like "diarhea" dawg ya fuckin "flows is shitty"... |
Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
good battle to both of you homies Everything was pretty equal but im given dis vote to Khaos Reason for vote: Khaos had good punches a dicient flow n good wordplay his punches were soft yes but they were stonger then Golden Golden ya self glorified ya whole verse n that threw me off man I dont like self glorification i like hard punches or any punches i vote on punches n flow u had the flow but not the punches ya gotta stick it to him fam mot makew ur self look good battle him n go all out Khaos bes line: dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug.... cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud... (ight punch lil soft but ight) Golden Self glorification line : matter fact i should say fuck this verse and see if hes online ur not even woth my lines, better yet worth my rhymes (dont glorify man ya tryin to see u the bes n he isnt drop that style dog) Over all given Khaos a 7/10 on da verse Given Golden a 5/10 on da verse Good battle to both holla Not Hatin, Jus votin |
Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
goldenshellz battle me, whoa son is bold.... but he garbage, only hot when my gun explode.... aight... dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug.... cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud... cool, i shoot da nine and put some of u in yaself... den laugh at u, like dummy stop abusin yaself... ummmm ok.... tell me why dis nigga gotta be so lame... and why khaos spit dope shit like he eat cocaine... mmm ok.... and with yo name the whole board knows u silly... like "diarhea" dawg ya fuckin "flows is shitty"... decent.. now a bad verse flow good, punches aight could of been betetr and more original.... NEXT.... ur a fuckin renegade? old like em and jay in da past get rid of this newbie fast, my bloods'll 1-8-7 ya ass ok fow thats it.... quick to challenge a lethal threat but u have no prominence like a mexican, u could "hop"the fence,smashed by my dominence good vocab, decent... u got 3 days nigga, i hope u make in time matter fact i should say fuck this verse and see if hes online umm no.. ur not even woth my lines, better yet worth my rhymes every vote i get is me tellin u 5 times* WTF??? ur fucked now, i could spare u become a beggar i have ya shirts lookin more red then the tomatoe that hit swartzaneggar WTF?? no weak ending... u had it at one point then fell da fuck off mount everest.... decent flow, punches was lacked, creativeness was ok, vocab aight... but just went weak at the end and started it off kinda weak... next time just go hard from the jump... |
Voted For: Golden shellz
kinda easy one,lol you get ,y vote,for better creativity and punch's.. Golden shellz : nice lyrics,good battle,structure is iight,creativity is cool, Khaos_daRenegade: lol teres a line that made me laugh: dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug.... cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud... lol anyway,dont make two lines witht he same rhyme,that fucked it up,anyway structure is iight,punch's were iight too, i give this vote to goldenshell for better battle....duh lol |
dude u fuckin blind how can u say he won for punches when he didnt have any and he didnt dis me none in his whole fuckin verse if u was gone say he won at least say he won because of something he actually did but wateva dawg
more votes please........ from people who know wat the fuck they talkin bout |
why did u spit about gunz nobody does that anymore i didnt self glorify i just wanted a good laff
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Voted For: Golden shellz
golden shellz won this battle pretty easy. but yall both need to start comin alot harder. golden shellz had hotter punches and better vocab. chao's verse was way too basic n not well thought out opener-GS closer-GS structure-tied flow-GS vocab-GS punches-GS multies-none ight yall need to work on ya creativity in ya verse RETURN THE FAVOR!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175294 |
Voted For: Golden shellz
gotta go with golden shells - pretty close battle, goldne, you came harder thou, not your best shit eh, but whatever, still took this one --personals were better thought out and hit harder, same with punches, flow was smoother too, vocab easily better than khaos....haha, laughed at the closer, coulda been worded bit better, but still got the job done....overall, you take this from harder punches/personals, better flow and vocab, maybe get some more multis, but good job -khaos man, didnt really come hard on this one, vocab was too plain, punches were there but were pretty weak, not really any good personals, closer wasnt bad, flow was decent....overall, most of your shit has been done before, not really any lines that jump out and really make an impact, keep elevating, up vocab/multis....multi, lol, yeh Vote: Golden Shellz |
uppin this shit for some real votes from some vets these fuckin wack ass
newbs are killin me talkin bout his punches and personals when he didnt have any of either one the only thing he did have was vocab he didnt even dis me uppin this shit |
This was feedback posted for Khaos_daRenegade
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wat the fuck ever uppin this battle nah mean<<>>>>
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Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
ok punches both of you lacked nothing stuck out at all you came played with no good personals i was dissapointed one of the worst battles ive seen on rv do some investigating get some hard hitting punches personals some witty metas structure you other guy wasnt feeling it you have alot of fillers khaos lose the ... vocab neither go onto rhymezone.com it will help with your vocab and flow good battle to both but im giving it to khaos i think he edged it otu both need to elevate though |
thanx for the vote uppin this shit for more votes^^^^^^
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Voted For: Golden shellz
pucnhes- GS had more clear thought out punches personals- that 1-8-7 line did it for me...GS got this wordplay- none of yall really creativity- GS had this....not by much though, cuz that mexican line is played as fuck yo vote- GS cuz of punches....whack battle though |
jea jea jea uppin iight yallz***********************
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lol, this shit is funny. dis nigga's punches huh? what fuckin punches i cant beileive this shit uppin this shit
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ookkk uppin cmon just one more vote and this is done~~~
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Voted For: Golden shellz
Golden........ ur a fuckin renegade? old like em and jay in da past get rid of this newbie fast, my bloods'll 1-8-7 ya ass nice opener.....hit good...6/10 quick to challenge a lethal threat but u have no prominence like a mexican, u could "hop"the fence,smashed by my dominence ok pretty good here...5/10 u got 3 days nigga, i hope u make in time matter fact i should say fuck this verse and see if hes online decent...5/10 ur not even woth my lines, better yet worth my rhymes every vote i get is me tellin u 5 times* ehh ok...4/10 ur fucked now, i could spare u become a beggar i have ya shirts lookin more red then the tomatoe that hit swartzaneggar decent....4/10 overall.....24/50 Khaos...... goldenshellz battle me, whoa son is bold.... but he garbage, only hot when my gun explode.... ehh ok...gunplay not good...4/10 dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug.... cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud... decent hit good...6/10 i shoot da nine and put some of u in yaself... den laugh at u, like dummy stop abusin yaself... ok......5/10 tell me why dis nigga gotta be so lame... and why khaos spit dope shit like he eat cocaine... umm this was self glory...would been dope if it was just a line for audio or somethin...but not good for a battle.....2/10 and with yo name the whole board knows u silly... like "diarhea" dawg ya fuckin "flows is shitty"... ok wordplay....6/10 overall.....23/50 i thought that overall goldens punches hit better....and that self glory line killed khaos...thats not good man...dont use self glory in a battle verse.....good battle though....it was close.....vote goes to golden for harder punches |
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