Life vs bguns
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-10-05 at 05:18 PM

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Life has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 05:24 PM.

bguns has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 05:31 PM.

6 lines, well, I guess i'll start with a mine
better watch your step, or you'll get blown like columbine
life's a bitch, thats a bad name -you should switch
how bout something that represents you... like jock itch?
damn right i'm down for 6 unlimited lines
thats 6 times for you to think about your weakass rhymes

read your bio,"Music, sports and women..i'll keep it simple", thats your intrests ho
lyrically killing bitches who like the same thing is mine, didnt you know?
yo dog your rhymes are shit, are you blind nigga you cant see me
your a little girl I can see straight through you like nipples in a wet Tee
a girl on her peiod, thats the only way you know about different kind of "flows"
your a bitch, you couldnt "stack" up to me if your name was "Pringles"

upping for some votes.............

Voted For: Life

life........
read your bio,"Music, sports and women..i'll keep it simple", thats your intrests ho
lyrically killing bitches who like the same thing is mine, didnt you know?
hit pretty good....good concept....could have been worded better.....6/10

yo dog your rhymes are shit, are you blind nigga you cant see me
your a little girl I can see straight through you like nipples in a wet Tee
ehh ok.....4/10

a girl on her peiod, thats the only way you know about different kind of "flows"
your a bitch, you couldnt "stack" up to me if your name was "Pringles"
decent.....6/10

overall......16/30


bguns.......
6 lines, well, I guess i'll start with a mine
better watch your step, or you'll get blown like columbine
played out....didnt hit good....2/10

life's a bitch, thats a bad name -you should switch
how bout something that represents you... like jock itch?
set up line was ok....punch was weak....4/10

damn right i'm down for 6 unlimited lines
thats 6 times for you to think about your weakass rhymes
no.......2/10


overall.......10/30


i just felt that life came with harder punches....and was more complex with his verse......bguns punches just didnt hit like lifes did......good battle....but life got this with his punches and complexity......

hey yo life, that was my first battle on here and I didn't put much time into it so i'm gonna come back with a couple more lines for ya...

you're talkin wack like I can't stack like pringles? maybe i'm too busy out layin my mack on on singles
tryin to rhyme flows and pringles? damn man your rhymes look worse than shit on shingles
and way to be creative usin "ho" and "know" your fuckin vocab's about as big as a 9 year old
and fuck periods, i've got more flow than tsunami debris, and when the flood comes you'll be wearin your bitchass capris
B.Guns

Voted For: Life

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read your bio,"Music, sports and women..i'll keep it simple", thats your intrests ho
lyrically killing bitches who like the same thing is mine, didnt you know?
little muti ok opener
yo dog your rhymes are shit, are you blind nigga you cant see me
your a little girl I can see straight through you like nipples in a wet Tee
didnt make much sence but ok

a girl on her peiod, thats the only way you know about different kind of "flows"
your a bitch, you couldnt "stack" up to me if your name was "Pringles"
now then best line had all the punches nice one
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6 lines, well, I guess i'll start with a mine
better watch your step, or you'll get blown like columbine
the 1st line had nuthing werd 2nd was wack
life's a bitch, thats a bad name -you should switch
how bout something that represents you... like jock itch?
no sence realy wack as fuck
damn right i'm down for 6 unlimited lines
thats 6 times for you to think about your weakass rhymes
weak the 1st line was shit like ur 1st open line

easy win for life if he didnt have that last line it wud be hard but that last line saved him

uppin................

uppin..................

uppin..................

hey yo life, that was my first battle on here and I didn't put much time into it so i'm gonna come back with a couple more lines for ya...

you're talkin wack like I can't stack like pringles? maybe i'm too busy out layin my mack on on singles
tryin to rhyme flows and pringles? damn man your rhymes look worse than shit on shingles
and way to be creative usin "ho" and "know" your fuckin vocab's about as big as a 9 year old
and fuck periods, i've got more flow than tsunami debris, and when the flood comes you'll be wearin your bitchass capris
B.Guns

no1 can see that.........................until they vote

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Voted For: Life

6 lines, well, I guess i'll start with a mine
better watch your step, or you'll get blown like columbine
no…weak punch
life's a bitch, thats a bad name -you should switch
how bout something that represents you... like jock itch?
decent multi’s…weak punch
damn right i'm down for 6 unlimited lines
thats 6 times for you to think about your weakass rhymes
punch wasn’t good hea


read your bio,"Music, sports and women..i'll keep it simple", thats your intrests ho
lyrically killing bitches who like the same thing is mine, didnt you know?
decent opener
yo dog your rhymes are shit, are you blind nigga you cant see me
your a little girl I can see straight through you like nipples in a wet Tee
weak punch, didn’t make contact
a girl on her peiod, thats the only way you know about different kind of "flows"
your a bitch, you couldnt "stack" up to me if your name was "Pringles"
weak closer here

Overall even though both drops weren’t that good
Life took this one jus for coming less weak though

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Voted For: Life

Voted for life

Life came harder with his punches in thats what got hime the vote

Guns ya wasted to many of ur lines jus babblin

Babblin line:
6 lines, well, I guess i'll start with a mine

damn right i'm down for 6 unlimited lines
thats 6 times for you to think about your weakass rhymes


Go strait from the gun wit punches man hit him with a hard opener n strong closure ya middle was ight ya had good flow n a deecent structure but the punches were wacked out yo
Elevate

Life ya had a nice flow good punches n a deecent structure some punches were a little weak but since Gun didnt have anything goin u got the vote

weak battle fam, Life come stronger n elevate on punches cuz if you go against harder rappers on this site ya gonna get ko'd man

Life 7/10 on the verse
Gun 4/10 on the verse

weak battle jus elevate


Retunr the Fava Fams n hit me up on my battle (at the bottom of my sig)

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Voted For: bguns

Gonna have to vote for bguns... better overall punches. Life had some good setups... nipples in a wet tee, the period line was hot.... pringles had promise but didnt really rhyme that naturally with "flows".... bguns takes it

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Voted For: Life

ight this was an ok battle but both of y'all need 2 elevate in ur rhymes:
opener: life
vocab: life
structure: life
punches: life
personals: life
multis: n/a
closer: life
life just came harder & hit with more punches then bguns & bgun u need 2 step ur rhyme game up cuz ur lines r 2 basic