Epic vs Life
 

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Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 06:11 PM.

Life has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 04:39 PM.

dog you cant "see" me, like blind men
like nintendo, you bout to meet your end
if your name was Pringles you still couldnt "stack" up to me
herb, you could have over 8,000 post and still have no respect like C.A.L.I.
your not real, fake ass bitch, I fry fags for fun
vet???,yeah right,your rhymes are more out of date than fucking reruns
you should have known better than to step up to your pimp ho
your biography(profile) is empty like your punchlines, your a fucking "lyrical doe"
youll get burned over and over like you was fucking charcol
the only thing thats "Epic" is your number of loses, your whack
Its not that hard, come on bitch lets face the fact
I fucking fried you bitch and that is that

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Voted For: Epic

a little soft as far as battles go but -I'll Have This Kid Shivering And Shaking Like He's Julius Having A Seizure
lines like that are what one it

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This was feedback posted for Epic
 

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This was feedback posted for Life
 

+++++++++++++++++++Life++++++++++++++++++
dog you cant "see" me, like blind men
like nintendo, you bout to meet your end
ONLY AND I MEAN ONLY REASON WHY THIS WAS FUCK'N SICK TO ME IS CUZ ...ITS TRUE ABOUT THAT NINTENDO SHYT LOL...AND I BELIEVE SO FAR YOU MAY WIN THIS
if your name was Pringles you still couldnt "stack" up to me
herb, you could have over 8,000 post and still have no respect like C.A.L.I.

your not real, fake ass bitch, I fry fags for fun
vet???,yeah right,your rhymes are more out of date than fucking reruns
LOL...ITS OK...KINDA PLAYED CONCEPT BUT ITS A NICE JAB
you should have known better than to step up to your pimp ho
your biography(profile) is empty like your punchlines, your a fucking "lyrical doe"
THIS WAS MORE OR LESS FUNNY THAT IT WAS A PUNCH
youll get burned over and over like you was fucking charcol
the only thing thats "Epic" is your number of loses,
LOL...THATS A NICE PERSONAL PUNCH ,...GETTIN KINDA RIGGED AROUND THE RHYME SCHEME

your whack Its not that hard, come on bitch lets face the fact
I fucking fried you bitch and that is that
**HEARS THE MUSIC TO MARIO BROTHERS AFTER A GAME OVER** YOU FUCKED UP

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+++++++++++++++++Epic++++++++++++++++++++
Kid I'll Abuse-Your-Brain, And Bruise-You-Mayn
I Refuse-To-Refrain, Untill I Amuze-You-Mayn
LOL..NICE MULTIES BUT DONT RHYME MAYN WITH MAYN AGAIN,....EVER
Kid Go Back To "Wrapping" Your Sandwitches
Punches Is Softer Then A Slap With Hand-Mittens
1ST LINE PLAYED CONCEPT, SECOND LINE WAS GOOD...IM FEEL'N THE PUNCH ON THAT ONE
Like Walt Disney Your Chances Of Beating Me Is Only Imaginating
Contiplating Kid Couldn't "Cum" Hard If He Started Masterbating
**BLOW'S HIS FUCKIN LID**...YOU REALLY PISSED ME OFF WITH THAT "CUMHARD" CRAP..ALL YALL NIGGAS DO IS BIT OFF PEOPLE AND RECYCLE MORE THAN PEPSI....
It's A Disaster I'll Damige This Kid Faster Then Title Waves In Indonesia
I'll Have This Kid Shivering And Shaking Like He's Julius Having A Seizure(Julius Caesar)
**BOUGHT A NEW MONITOR AFTER SHOOTIN THE OLD ONE**
Your Life Spand Will Change Quickly As Your Career Starts To Finish
Little Infant in Form Of Empire, This Shit Is Diminished
*YAWNS*

MY VOTE MOSTLY GOES TO LIFE..CUZ HE AIMED HIS SHYT AT YOU

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This was feedback posted for Epic
 

Epic takes it.... Indonesia/Julius Seizure is a hot line. Hand mittens aint bad either.

Life was ok.... used the pringle line in a battle against bgun a little while ago though, cant be doin that.



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This was feedback posted for Life
 

He Used That Disney Line In Like 4 Other Battles Shit Is Wacc

Sandwich Lines He Used Already

Sticky Bandit Vs Kordozar
Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches"

Disney Line Used Plenty Times

Sticky Bandit Vs Kordozar
You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures

Usin Tha Same Wacc As Lines Damn Shame

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Voted For: Epic

aight yo this was an aight battle.. not to spectacular but it was good and here is my break down

Epic- shit was aight man. structure needs work tho brow cause it was kinda all over the place... didnt hurt ya flow to badly here but could in the future... punches were TIGHT i liked the walt disney line the best and you also had some tight personals in t here to man. Lmao "Julius having a Seizure" lol i liked that yo... good metas... vocab was aight... would have liked more multis but it was aight... overall 6.5/10

Life- not bad... like epic work on that structure man... lines are kinda stretched and all over the place... flow was ok tho through out the verse as a whole... punches lacked the hard hitting shit that is needed to win battles.. they werent consistant... personals were aight.. vocab was good... overall 5/10

no hate to either...elevate...

VOTE- EPIC.......................

Voted For: Epic

dog you cant "see" me, like blind men
like nintendo, you bout to meet your end
^^^
Not a strong opener or punch

if your name was Pringles you still couldnt "stack" up to me
herb, you could have over 8,000 post and still have no respect like C.A.L.I.
^^^
What does C.A.L.I have ta do with anything?

your not real, fake ass bitch, I fry fags for fun
vet???,yeah right,your rhymes are more out of date than fucking reruns
you should have known better than to step up to your pimp ho
your biography(profile) is empty like your punchlines, your a fucking "lyrical doe"
^^^
Flow was pretty weak in the first 2 bars, an the punches didnt really connect, they are too played homie..

youll get burned over and over like you was fucking charcol
the only thing thats "Epic" is your number of loses, your whack
^^^
Weak Personal

Its not that hard, come on bitch lets face the fact
I fucking fried you bitch and that is that
^^^
Not even the decency ta have a punch for a closer.....

Ya overrall content in the verse was weak homeboy, no real punches, no real flow, an i wasnt feeling the whole rhyme scheme.....

T, i wasnt feeling your opening 4 lines, didnt really connect...

Closer wasnt up too much, it was okay tho'...

But the walt disney line an Julius line killed the whole battle, ya had alot more creativity in your verse an punches that hit...

You got my vote 4sho, Life, step ya game up kid....

No hate, just telling it like it is

Return the fave

Peace

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This was feedback posted for Life
 

come & holla at me fam & i'll work on ur structure & gettin' u a betta delivery of flows cuz u just stretch ur rhymes in this 1 but it takes time

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This was feedback posted for Epic
 

Voted For: Epic

Normal Punches-Traumatic, nice punches. Some creative ish in there, but some not. Masturbation? You are better then that. life, not that great punches. Unoriginal and not that strong.

Personal Punches-Life, you had em, but not that good ones. Traumatic, try some more personals.

Metaphors- Traumatic, less of them, but better. Life, pringles? Damn.

Multiple Rhymes-Neither

Structure-Traumatic, better structure, but not by much, Keep working on it man. Life, lotta stretched lines and ish.

Flow-Decent flow, punches kept it going. Life, decent flow, fell off sometimes.

Word Play-Nice wordplay, LIFE was good, but try to avoid other MC's names. Life, not a lot of wordplay. Work on having more wordplay and wittier at that.

Traumatic, not bad man. Punches were nice, but you need to try some personals.

Life, ok verse. Try some better punches, word play, and personals.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Traumatic

One Vote. One Battle. One Win

Voted For: Epic

K I vote for u cus u had better punches and way better scheme then life but as far as rhymes and shit u guys kep up with each other but Life man No offense but u suck u need to elevate and practice a lot but this was a Ok battle u really need to work on ur Punches oh shit what am I sayin u need to work on everything so my vote goes to..........

vote goes to Traumatize for better punches in this one.

Voted For: Epic

damn....
dis battle went one way really....i dont really think it was even close...

life=
man weak opener....
you need suttin that makes your reader go "oooohh" right out of the gate...
kinda a weak core as well....
flow was all over the place, i couldnt really stay with it, especially towards da end....
you had one or two decent punches, but they werent even that great...
overall, i jus wasnt feelin your verse at all, nuttin i really liked about it...

trauma-
trauma on the other hand...
i loved this verse...
hard hittin punches all da way through
your flow was on point da whole way as well...
but the punches were madd nice, and you kept em going which is what i like to see....

trauma came wit some crazy stuff...
life came wit some weak stuff...
not very close in my book
trauma takes this...
v/trauma