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hotshh! vs The Black Plague
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10-12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-18-05 at 03:54 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 07:56 PM.
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U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It..
I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1 Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the tightest Man Living Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins You make me sick so Im feeling ya Name Loud and Clear Liike Flash Rain.. Plagues only drop once then Disappear You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. .................................................. .........And Im Out |
The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 03:25 PM.
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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 03:26 PM.
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Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies
My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first You a faggot, wakin up wit heat condoms in ya ass, but still don’t drop hot shit Claimin to be the medicine man, but got a taste of yaself cuz I know you not sick Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it |
Voted For: hotshh!
i wasnt really feelin dis battle...black u my nigga but yo lines was dragged...shh!, ya verse was iight...seemed forced to me though...i never write good votes cuz im lazy and dont feel like typin all dat shit...so im postin feed for hotshh! cuz...i dont know, f/i Feedback removed |
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oh shit...my bad yall...dat was supposed to be feedback...delete dat one...pz |
This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
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Alias didnt get dropped.. |
uppin dis weak fucking shit
its wack cuz i dont really care,,,,,,,,but black dat verse was worse dan what i expected from you......... |
^^^ Yea, wasn't my best verse but w/e it aint that important
And Mimesis.. i'm sayin he got dropped like the show Alias did |
alias didnt get dropped. i saw it the other day...
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
checkin polls..........................................
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up this man.......................................
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O i see what ya'l sayin i thought they cancelled the show tho.. my bad i guess
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Voted For: The Black Plague
hot, i know u got better skillz than that. i seen u come way harder fam...i wasnt feelin ur drop this time my nig. i think u came way to soft. some of ur punches werent hittin, and i didnt see any creative shit that made me laugh in there. i thought u were guna bring it. yo verse was ight, but i wasnt feelin it...ive seen better homie TBP-u came ight. i really wasnt feelin ur verse that much. i like yo style tho. i think u came off with tha metas in this one. punches were ight, but wordplay was tha highlight in this one for u...shit was nice yo. i think u should work on ur structure. like, u started off wierd in words per line, then u just switched up yo whole style, which made ur verse seem kinda off...but overall, it was nice, and got my vote overall- this was a aight battle, but i think TBP came off, and a lil ahrder, and got tha vote...hot, i seen better fam...keep elevating, and hit up audio. i kno u got gas... yall plz RTF on battle link in sig against Konfliktz...too many battles is gettin slept on, and plz make yo vote explain, cause i took tha time out to explain this n vote on it... good drop from both ya...keep ya head up, and keep elevating... ~1~ |
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Voted For: hotshh!
I gotta go wit hot shhh this battle kinda turned into a best bar battle Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me WOW...NAH I WASN'T FEELIN THIS PUNCH A LIL OUTRAGEOUS When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses DIDN'T QUITE RHYME AND MJ JOKES ARE PLAYED I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first I LIKED THIS LINE NICE PUNCH AND NICE SET UP You a faggot, wakin up wit heat condoms in ya ass, but still don’t drop hot shit Claimin to be the medicine man, but got a taste of yaself cuz I know you not sick SET UP WAS ONCE AGAIN WEIRD BUT THE PUNCH WAS NICE Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc NICE SET UP BUT USING THE SAME LAST WORD TO RHYME...NAH Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it THIS WAS YOUR BEST LINE GOOD CLOSER U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It.. I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit BAD ATTEMPT AT A PERSONAL BUT THE PUNCH LANDED SORTA Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the tightest Man Living NICE PUNCH TECHNICALLY A PERSONAL Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer ????? AT LEAST THE SET UP WAS GOOD To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins YOU 2 REALLY LIKE SHIT...GOOD PUNCH THOUGH You make me sick so Im feeling ya Name Loud and Clear Liike Flash Rain.. Plagues only drop once then Disappear WOW...MIRACOULOUSLY CLOSE TO MY PUNCH IN THE MULTIS LEAGUE AGAINST HIM....GOOD PUNCH THOUGH You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. GREAT CLOSER YOUR BEST LINE Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it VS. You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. V/hotshhhh (thinks to self)wow i did not just bite 9th's voting style....ehh well good battle yall this was close http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459 me vs. illmatic |
thanx...............anyway uppin..................
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Voted For: The Black Plague
this was a very good battle but here's my opinion: opener: both vocab: black plague structure: both multis: black closer: black this battle was a close call but black just came a lil harder & hit wit more punches in the battle; hotshh u step up ur wordplay & elevate a lil more make sure 2 return the favor Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin this shit lets get some votes
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Voted For: hotshh!
Openor=Hotshh Decent Punch And And Personal Personals=Hotshh,Had Better Personals Punches=Tie,Both Ok Punches Vocab=Tpg,Had More Vocab Strukture=Hotshh His Verse Wasnt Stretched Closer=Wow,That Last Line Ko'ed Him Lmfao Hotshh Came Harder And He Put More Effort Into His Verse /V Hotshh! Rtf................ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: hotshh!
Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me ok whats up with the played opener? When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses played follow up, what u think no one thought of that? I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first alias never got droped which negates ya opener, and the punch was weak Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc used the rhyming word twice, weak concept black, ya shit was played half way and the other half stretched, really not a good verse at all U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It.. I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1 Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the t ightest Man Living line kinda wack, but the pic is funny haha Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer no to the punch To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins hahahaha...1st good line in this shit You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. nice closer hotshh was up with this weak shit? you lucky ya boy came played but u had 2 good lines to get the win v/hotshh |
def appreciate that^^.....................fucking marathon battle!
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damn, u had votes dq'd?
so it changed from 3-2 to 2-1? thank you for making this battle another month long |
Voted For: hotshh!
Hotshh i've got inspiration off some of your battles as i am kinda new wit this and my rec aint great...This was anothet good battle, the punchline was very good and the personal using the picture n shit was cool, your flow was good and everything fit, coulda added a multi somehwere in there tho, woulda been tight |
i would also like to mention Plague's opener weren't great and the opener should be good to gtet people reading and some of his lines seemed stretched or didn't fit
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
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Voted For: hotshh!
U from Shut the 'Hell' Up,U ugly bitch, yeah we noticed It.. I tried posting ya pic but da Modem refused to Load Da Shit decent bar, pretty basic http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=172224&page=1 Heres the Link and if U kept it moving.......Smart Decision Cuz if dis was fashion based He'd be the tightest Man Living good Me getting burned by Black Plague? No, dats a Bad Answer Dats like 'Smokie' Fighting forest fires and Catching Cancer decent bar, punch was okay To speak the Truth, I hate U, Asshole get ya shit Pushed In U aint a bitch nigga...U twice the Pussy like the Bush Twins good, good here You make me sick so Im feeling ya Name Loud and Clear Liike Flash Rain.. Plagues only drop once then Disappear uhh…hmm…pretty decent You just bombed and I aint talking bout what Flex'll Do Incredible...... Your Alias just Lost his Respect for You.. nice closer here . . . . . Read my verse and now u got “punches up the ass” like fistin pornographies My last name is “wright”, but even in the phone book u aint listed on top of me good punch… When im rippin you, its no wrong way to “do it” like fuckin a reeses Nigga got you sweatin worse than Michael Jackson at chuckie cheeses okay punch was plain here I don’t fuck around.. Battled me and got dropped like Alias from the fox network Sayin you busy wit bills, but u more worried about which D/R u gonna give head first nice…was feelin this one You a faggot, wakin up wit heat condoms in ya ass, but still don’t drop hot shit Claimin to be the medicine man, but got a taste of yaself cuz I know you not sick nah, this was kinda weak here Ya Shit Not hot enough for 9th degree, the dude burned you alive like Joan of Arc Battlin headin upstream without a paddle, hopin you keep floatin like Noah’s Arc okay, punch was decent Duckin our battle, knew when you lost to me you’d be catchin more shit than a toilet If they made crews for dudes interested in mass suicide, you’d benefit from joinin it closer was ight Overall both had good drops, but hotshh! Had a better drop by a hair Both had good flows, hotshh had the punches though, but overall Both had good drops, just that hotshh! Came a little harder in this 1 No hate to both.... |
Voted For: hotshh!
lol i read this n forgot to vote but yea man u took this one more than easy.. tbp your structi=ure was off n your shit ws really extended try to short'n up ya lines more when u only thing that i thought was better was tbp opener but otherwise hotshh took it cuz he was consistent tbp you woulda took'n it but your shit was all over the place . hotshh took.. closer meta punches structure n appeal tbp took... opener punches Vote//Hotshh! |
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