J DOT vs .K.onfliktz
 

Battle Rules:

Crew Battle: The Establishment vs Nok Out Kingz

10-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 11:14 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 11:37 AM.

yo listen i aint wastin no time LOL...imma end this foo...

Ya'll got me facin this herb J dot...aiight Listen...


Nok Out Kingz? I'd Say The Names Sexist but 99% of Ya'll is Bitch..
If Money was decided By Wackness, Then This Ma' Fucka is rich..
If You Put him in a wrestlin' Ring Losses is the only thing he grapples..
Slice Ya Throat So Your Vocal "Chord"inates through ya adams apple..
It's been a long time since i battled..Shoulda elevated By Now..
How? when All the people you've beaten, are eatin by cows.. (HERBS!)
Drive By's in the Rova...Imma finish you quickly like nas did Hova..
I'll Have you see'in More Streets then That...Nigga Grover....
It's Over..Break Your Ribs, So you can kiss your ass good Bye..
But You Winnin? We'll Never see Like Tony playin the good guy..

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 12:09 PM.

NOK vs TE

Peep it, I aint even gota speak it, cause RV sees it
Ur a lame, I’ll say it plain, and I aint gota repeat it
Ur already a newb, don’t get this shit twisted G
How many times u gon state it, if u gon leave then leave
I ‘Rip’ more than ‘Hamilton’, you don’t want me to blow that ‘Piston’*
I know that distance, I snap holy, like a Kodak Christian
Feed you ‘banana’ clips, cause you resemble a ‘Ape’
And I’ll stomp ya punk ass like I’m pumpin my brakes
‘Establish’ this loss, and u can get it tha worst way
u on my nuts like an elephant, but N.O.K merk gays
this is yo life, just admit it dawg, u full of shit
I spit sick, split wigs, and I’ll blast ‘four clippz’**
This aint a k.onflict…so just stick to tha script
I’d cut ya, but I kno u aint used to ‘Blood’, aye Crip? ***


*Double punch
Rip Hamilton, guard for the Detroit Pistons…and K.onfliktz from Hamilton
“...I rip Hamilton...”
**he got a wheenie ass crew named four clippz (off tha net I guess)
***this nigga posed to be a crip…lol…who net bangs? lol

Voted For: J DOT

I vote for wat it automatically says

Kon.- nice punches, and the cow and herb line was coo, really feelin it, but J came harder mayne
J- Nice wordplay, sum played, coo personals, really feelin tha last 4 lines; that wat got u my vote

No hate nor beef to neither, coo battle, juss Kon needs to come harder next time

return tha fava

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good lookin out bro....uppin this this shit for more votes...^not tha same people either...these comps got tha same service things...

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Peep it, I aint even gota speak it, cause RV sees it
Ur a lame, I’ll say it plain, and I aint gota repeat it
not a punch here
Ur already a newb, don’t get this shit twisted G
How many times u gon state it, if u gon leave then leave
don’t know if he actually said he was leavin
I ‘Rip’ more than ‘Hamilton’, you don’t want me to blow that ‘Piston’*
I know that distance, I snap holy, like a Kodak Christian
boo
Feed you ‘banana’ clips, cause you resemble a ‘Ape’
And I’ll stomp ya punk ass like I’m pumpin my brakes
good punch here
‘Establish’ this loss, and u can get it tha worst way
u on my nuts like an elephant, but N.O.K merk gays
decent
this is yo life, just admit it dawg, u full of shit
I spit sick, split wigs, and I’ll blast ‘four clippz’**
boo…not even feelin this one
This aint a k.onflict…so just stick to tha script
I’d cut ya, but I kno u aint used to ‘Blood’, aye Crip? ***
wtf?...no


Nok Out Kingz? I'd Say The Names Sexist but 99% of Ya'll is Bitch..
If Money was decided By Wackness, Then This Ma' Fucka is rich..
decent punch
If You Put him in a wrestlin' Ring Losses is the only thing he grapples..
Slice Ya Throat So Your Vocal "Chord"inates through ya adams apple..
good
It's been a long time since i battled..Shoulda elevated By Now..
How? when All the people you've beaten, are eatin by cows.. (HERBS!)
huh?...lol
Drive By's in the Rova...Imma finish you quickly like nas did Hova..
I'll Have you see'in More Streets then That...Nigga Grover....
nice multi’s punch was okay here
It's Over..Break Your Ribs, So you can kiss your ass good Bye..
But You Winnin? We'll Never see Like Tony playin the good guy..
an okay punch

overall this battle was okay, but I was feelin .K.’s verse though
compared to J’s drop

no hate vote…

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checkin the muthafuckin pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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WORD....................dope drop my man...........dope drop.

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Checking the polls, i aint voting close battle though. J-dot good punches, also kon.


Flowed nice from both heads. All i know this a close one.

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just checkin the polls fam...and konflicts i thought you were finished with text..?

Voted For: J DOT

i liked j's bettter he got personal with it and had some decent multis i didnt like thta gun talk banana clip drive by in the rova cuz ya'll live miles away and aint gona do shit for reals if you would both cut that out of your raps and replaced it with better personals or metas it would be better

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i beleive kon will KO this cat, checkin polls

upnizzle for yall

J Dot stop d/ring i know you are, look at who you got voting for you like whoa a bunch of wack newbs

Hahaha let him dickride...kon will probably still win.

^yo how come everybodys vote got dq'd cept lexikons his is unexplained too

*somebody put sumthing in parallel's mouth, my zippers stuck*

i dont socialize enough on this site to have D/R

uppin, and looks like tha KO business aint happenin....

jea imma get the lexikon vote taken away too................

they already said he explained IT...in tha RV complaints shit..bitch ass red bitched about it, and it didnt work...i got my vote from tilt taken off n that skriptz one...i notcied they werent explained..but lex's shit was....stop bitchin...i always get ALL unexplained votes taken off

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Voted For: J DOT

I gotta go wit k.onflictz on this but this was a close battle to me

Nok Out Kingz? I'd Say The Names Sexist but 99% of Ya'll is Bitch..
If Money was decided By Wackness, Then This Ma' Fucka is rich..
I WAS FEELIN THE SET UP BUT THE PUNCH IS PLAYED
If You Put him in a wrestlin' Ring Losses is the only thing he grapples..
Slice Ya Throat So Your Vocal "Chord"inates through ya adams apple..
GOOD SET UP NICE PUNCH TIGHT WORDPLAY
It's been a long time since i battled..Shoulda elevated By Now..
How? when All the people you've beaten, are eatin by cows.. (HERBS!)
NICE SET UP WIT A SICK PUNCH
Drive By's in the Rova...Imma finish you quickly like nas did Hova..
I'll Have you see'in More Streets then That...Nigga Grover....
PUNCH WASN'T GREAT WASN'T FEELIN SETUP (jay-z won)
It's Over..Break Your Ribs, So you can kiss your ass good Bye..
But You Winnin? We'll Never see Like Tony playin the good guy..
THE MEANIN OF THE SET UP WAS STRETCHED I THINK, WOULD BREAKIN HIS RIBS MAKE HIM MORE FLEXIBLE, PUNCH WAS DECENT : OVERALL DECENT CLOSER

Peep it, I aint even gota speak it, cause RV sees it
Ur a lame, I’ll say it plain, and I aint gota repeat it
DECENT MULTI SET UP BUT THE PUNCH WAS WEAK
Ur already a newb, don’t get this shit twisted G
How many times u gon state it, if u gon leave then leave
DECENT SET UP NICE PERSONAL
I ‘Rip’ more than ‘Hamilton’, you don’t want me to blow that 'Piston’*
I know that distance, I snap holy, like a Kodak Christian
TIGHT WORDPLAY ON THE SETUP BUT THE PUNCH WAS WEAK
Feed you ‘banana’ clips, cause you resemble a ‘Ape’
And I’ll stomp ya punk ass like I’m pumpin my brakes
THAT SET UP IS PLAYED THE PUNCH WAS DECENT
‘Establish’ this loss, and u can get it tha worst way
u on my nuts like an elephant, but N.O.K merk gays
DECENT PERSONAL BUT IT'S LIKE YOUR PUNCH WAS INT HE MIDDLE u on my nuts like an elephant WAS GOOD BUT THE PUNCH WASN'T
this is yo life, just admit it dawg, u full of shit
I spit sick, split wigs, and I’ll blast ‘four clippz’**
PERSONAL COULD'VE BEEN DONE BETTER SETUP WAS WEAK
This aint a k.onflict…so just stick to tha script
I’d cut ya, but I kno u aint used to ‘Blood’, aye Crip?
NICE PERSONAL/WORDPLAY YOUR BEST LINE

i gotta go with k.onflctz on this because j dot's personals were better then his punches. some of his setup's were weak and some punches were weak held up only by the wordplay.

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Vote switched

shit yall sorry i meant to copy my vote onto k.onflictz box cause i typed the whole thing up in the wrong box

J Dot if you wanna know what a real explained vote looks like its an explaination for both people then you listen the states

punchlines
opener
closer

and so on

thats a vote and all the votes you got were wack shit
just like how you are a wack shit

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nice drop by both, I can't vote cause I ain't got enough posts...

j dot has gotten better...i underestimated him..fuck it..imma audio head...

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checkin polls.............................................

Interesting how all the other battles are slept on but this one.....

Voted For: J DOT

aight nice battle

JDOT...you win plain and simple..you had multies and your shit wasnt played..you had shit i ahvent heard before and you had my attentioin the whole time......you also made me laugh....also please stop with that explaining your bars.....that shit is erbish..if you have to explain it then dont say it....other than that ...nice shit

KON....you need to eleavte alot..you need to step up the game a lil bit and actaully try to win...i read 2 of yoru batles today and you didnt even attempt to win....im telling you these newbs are coming up yo....they spit nice now......but yo..you know you didnt attempt to try and that is where you messed up...


vote=j dot

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Easy.............................

Checkin polls.

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tight drop.............................................. chekin polls man

good lookin out on all tha honest and explained votes...ima RTF those....uppin this shit...no matter what happens in this battle, ima still respect KON, maybe not his crew, but i respect u fam...u got off...


uppin

Voted For: J DOT

Imma have to give this vote to Jdot... Close battle tho

Kon-Nice opener, liked it but after that you kinda fell off... Didn't understand the adams apple line...I liked the Cows line, shit was nice.. The Hova line was played, set up was off i seen it comin, and the Grover line was wack... Ya closer was nice, liked it hit pretty hard...Overall ya punches wasn't too hard, decent personals... Good struc adn a good flow, just didnt come too hard wit the punches.. decent verse tho

JDot- Nice verse here... Opener was nice, good line... 2nd line wasn't good, bad wordplay.. THe Rip Line was nice, and the Christian shit was nice.. prolly ya best line... The ape line was aiite, kinda EThuggish... Elephant line was nice too, but ya last 2 bars was wack... 4 clips line wasn't good, and ya closer was jus wack didn't make sense... Overally you coulda came harder wit punches, but they was still better than his.. personals was good, and ya struc and flow was on target...

Overall- J Dot takes it wit better punches and personals.. Kon you were inconsistent throughout, and u can use more complexity... JDot you started out real nice, but ya last 4 lines was wack.. still you had enough to be Kon jus with better personals, so you get my vote...

V/J Dot

I guess J DOT didn't read the rule that said No Dickriding.

Battle = Removed from crew battle.

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This was a much better verse, but i'm just checking the polls.........

Voted For: J DOT

j dot....got this.....
meta.... j dot
multis....no one
punches...j dot...close
personals....no one
flow...both........no beef plz return favor \/\/