morse code vs blitz
 

Battle Rules:

Crew Battle: The Establishment vs Nok Out Kingz

10-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 11:16 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

blitz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 11:23 AM.

morse code ur just double hoe,d, crew about down the road
man u got a load of rhymes no hit they just flowed into mode
man ya rhyme are still midcorse so Established u still got divorced
u forced ya rhyme ot but they anit worth nuthing they still of coursed
"dont push me" that becse ur a push over "nightmare" more light care
yo did u tear ur profile to "Established" well dont look it to me newie still unaware
"4-0" it just luck my punch just struck ya verse rly dose suck like a duck going cluck
when ya write ya verse ya stuck stupied and form da wack bruck*
ya have to up ya stuff all thinking yur tough man im taking this battle ruff
get tough enough of this weak cream puff all ya rhyme are bluff weaker than fluff
man ur dead lead by red bull after this ya hanging on thread nok ya worst dread
NOK here ur already fled were always a step ahead so just get in bed** it ya last chance



*from da wack rare family
**it his last chnce cuz after he will be dead from ma rhymes

morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 04:09 PM.

you dont have a top to your jacket(1), cuz your fake like nba *blitz*
as far as droppin hot crap, well, youve never takin a shit
you wack rhymes go over and over again so stick wit country
the arrows never stick in your skin, yet you ask, y dont they love me
your only twelve, hell, that shows through your spelling mistake(2)
this dude, makes a new, alias bout every other day(3)
Nock out kings, well, you will have to knock out me
unlike a tanning *bed*, il neva *lay down* the heat
your old crew didnt make it, and neither will the one your in now(4)
you never lost your skill, but it definitly hasnt been found
have him doubting himself, saying, theres no way he'll lose to ME
cuz the only time youve belonged to a stage is during puberty
you dont fool anybody, i c thru u, as if, your dressed in mesh
and your flow is sleeping, so ima leave you in Peace n' Rest(5)

1. hood=he's not *hood*
2. check his two sigs, one spelled split wrong
3. here's a few...unbeatabel king, devil, street shorty, L~S
4. used to be in charge of lyrical cataclysm (wack ass crew) on his alias
5. get it...rest n' peace.....peace n' rest

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

checkin polls morse got this like whoa

upnizzle you you to wizzles

4. used to be in charge of lyrical cataclysm (wack ass crew) on his alias


fake ass punch

2. check his two sigs, one spelled split wrong
your only twelve, hell, that shows through your spelling mistake

is also fake i didnt make it

^lmao....w/e it wuz you and dex running it...and my crew challenged yours and shit got all fucked up and confusing, remember

^bitch fuck u wit ya wack self...just mad cuz id merk u anytiem,.,,making excuses bitch.....all my punches are real

and understandable

2. check his two sigs, one spelled split wrong
your only twelve, hell, that shows through your spelling mistake

is also fake i didnt make it

vapour made it = thats y the ulr is corb not lyrical_scripts


4. used to be in charge of lyrical cataclysm (wack ass crew) on his alias


fake ass punch

it was called splitter anonimus

^ i couldnt think of the crews name my bad, they were both wack though plus, the actual punch of the battle is still true and valid so dont hate.....and its not my fault you kept a fucked up sig in your sig

Voted For: morse code

Morse code
you dont have a top to your jacket(1), cuz your fake like nba *blitz*
as far as droppin hot crap, well, youve never takin a shit
Nock out kings, well, you will have to knock out me
unlike a tanning *bed*, il neva *lay down* the heat
your old crew didnt make it, and neither will the one your in now(4)
you never lost your skill, but it definitly hasnt been found
have him doubting himself, saying, theres no way he'll lose to ME
cuz the only time youve belonged to a stage is during puberty

VS

Nothing

Tell you the damn thruth…morse code blew u out blitz
his punches were hard all thru his drop except a couple of
them, but his punches were definitely harder than urs tho

no hate, but M.C. took this one

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

Word....should be a KO on your part...good drop man....

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c'mon people this aint that hard to vote on

uppin............................................. ....

This was feedback posted for blitz
 

checkin polls.............................

i dunno bout this one

why skriptz voted against everyone of NOK battles...skriptz is a bitch...just stop voting on our shit...

s'all good

im only letting my unactive crew down

This was feedback posted for blitz
 

check pollz............................................. .................

soz j dot............i tryed.................................

Voted For: morse code

solid drop by both....

morse code.....nice spit man, i was feeling it, not really your finisher though, wording wasnt really that good, but rest of your verse i thought was well played.....structure, coulda been better in some places....for the most part, your flow was consistent and was easy to read....vocab, maybe up that a little but you verse was good enough....punches and personals, thought they hit harder than blitz', maybe coulda worded some a bit better for more effectiveness (ie....3rd and 4th bar, probly the weakest part of your verse).....but overall, you stayed consistent with your punches, a few hit real nice...like the puberty one haha, and the bar just before it.....solid verse man

blitz.....for the most part, your verse was kinda hard to follow...alot of forced lines and multies made it really choppy and threw of the flow and structure, so work on that.....your personals and punches, most of them didnt really come off that great, you had alot of potential on your punches/personals, but poor wording and limited vocab really drowned them out....if you really work on it though, i think you could be a solid rapper, but this just wasnt your battle man, better luck next time.....

v/morse code for harder punches/personals, complexity, vocab....everthing

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

checkin polls....morse owned him.....................

Voted For: morse code

Do i really have to explain this....

morse code ur just double hoe,d, crew about down the road
man u got a load of rhymes no hit they just flowed into mode
IS THAT A PUNCH OR......NO IT'S JUST WEAK
man ya rhyme are still midcorse so Established u still got divorced
u forced ya rhyme ot but they anit worth nuthing they still of coursed
WHAT?....WEAK PUNCH
"dont push me" that becse ur a push over "nightmare" more light care
yo did u tear ur profile to "Established" well dont look it to me newie still unaware
BAD PUNCH COULD BARELY READ IT ATTEMPTED PERSONAL THOUGH
"4-0" it just luck my punch just struck ya verse rly dose suck like a duck going cluck
when ya write ya verse ya stuck stupied and form da wack bruck*
OK....ATTEMPTED A PERSONAL DIDN'T LAND BAD PUNCH
ya have to up ya stuff all thinking yur tough man im taking this battle ruff
get tough enough of this weak cream puff all ya rhyme are bluff weaker than fluff
BAD PUNCH FLUFF ISN'T WEAK IT'S SOFT
man ur dead lead by red bull after this ya hanging on thread nok ya worst dread
NOK here ur already fled were always a step ahead so just get in bed** it ya last chance
PUNCH DIDN'T RHYME BAD PUNCH

dog this isn't a multis contest it's a battle you are aware that there is a multis league right?

you dont have a top to your jacket(1), cuz your fake like nba *blitz*
as far as droppin hot crap, well, youve never takin a shit
DECENT SET UP NICE PUNCH
you wack rhymes go over and over again so stick wit country
the arrows never stick in your skin, yet you ask, y dont they love me
NICE SET UP NICE PUNCH
your only twelve, hell, that shows through your spelling mistake(2)
this dude, makes a new, alias bout every other day(3)
NICE SET UP PUNCH/PERSONAL
Nock out kings, well, you will have to knock out me
unlike a tanning *bed*, il neva *lay down* the heat
NO PUNCH SELF GLORY (weren't you just talkin bout his spelling)
your old crew didnt make it, and neither will the one your in now(4)
you never lost your skill, but it definitly hasnt been found
GOOD SET UP PUNCH/PERSONAL AGAIN
have him doubting himself, saying, theres no way he'll lose to ME
cuz the only time youve belonged to a stage is during puberty
NICE PUNCH ON THAT I ACTUALLY LAUGHED
you dont fool anybody, i c thru u, as if, your dressed in mesh
and your flow is sleeping, so ima leave you in Peace n' Rest(5)
YEAH.....THAT CLOSER WAS KINDA WACK....

Morse code takes this one for the better verse. Punches killed blitz completely. Blitz make sure you get this. I'M NOT HATING. I DON'T HATE. But this isn't a multi's challenge. you only use multis when they can upgrade the value of your punch you don't try to throw as many multis as possible and hope their's a punch in their somewhere. and it couldn't hurt to spell a little better could it. It would make your verse flo better.

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Word, 3-0 for me man....keep it up homie..........

o well stuff NOK they inactive and wack................

^lol.............................................. .

uppin/

uppin goddammit......................................... ..

Voted For: morse code

this was an 1-sided battle the whole way out:
opener: morse code
vocab: morse code
structure: m.c.
multis: m.c.
closer: m.c.
m.c. wins my vote cuz he came harder in the battle & hit wit more punches that were effective; blitz u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on ur wordplay more no hating
make sure 2 return the favor

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Its nuthin tho...i'll merk both yall

^laughs...sure...

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uppin this bizatch.....................................

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Voted For: morse code

blitz you had an ok verse lots of multies but the ended up stretchin your lines and throwin of your structure still you had a decent verse just not enough to win this battle

code took this cuz he had so many personals good job finding that spelling mistake that gave you the uper hand in the battle you could have done better on the tanning booth line though


v/ morse code