godfather vs J.
 

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Spit by tomorrow at Midnight.
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Aiming for Votes.

G.L.



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-22-05 at 02:14 AM

Must drop verse in 1200 minutes after check in.

godfather has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 02:15 AM.

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Like The 'Metal From Pistols Clickin' U Hear A 'Clink When Im Gunnin'//
Put 'Concrete On My tip' And 'Put It to Ya Brain' So U Could 'Think When Im Cummin'//

My Divine-Scriptures, Interwine-Mixtures Of Mind-Pictures And Sinister-Quotes//
That Wont Administor-Hope, Cuz You 'Fuck'ed When I Drop' Sorta Like 'A Prisoners Soap'//

u soft like rain cant be sick or hot even if u cough out flames//
if your raps fell off a necklace they still wouldnt be off the chain//

After This 'Rappin-Fight' Ima Have The 'Braggin-Rights'//
Like 'Porn Vets In Virgin Roles' Your'e Only 'Actin-Tight'//

i'll Start A 'Circle Cypher' 2 The Beep Of Ya 'Hearse-Reversin'//
While U 'Struggle 2 Write Good Lines' Like 'Muhammed Ali' Tryna 'Write In Cursive'//

Watch me dog this pops, for thinkin' he's ahead'a me... shit,
Fuck'a school bus, but you're still gettin' dropped off...
...the edge of a cliff.
While I'm blazin' a spliff, thinkin' ya better than the kid,
GodFather is pure FULL OF IT...when it comes to filler, that is.
I'm a wickedly worded wiz... you're a victim of me throwin' fist,
If your words were fire...nobody would bother to give you PISS!
Just gimme the win, dont even post, just study my fly style.
While you're busy stitchin' stars...
...representin' ya state of denial!!
So pick up the dial, and get the 411...you've been sidelines for awhile,
Cause kid, nobody feels ya shit... even in a chat room fulla phedophiles.

can u vote on my battle against LA
its in my sig
vote god though
thx

J. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 03:12 AM.

Watch me dog this pops, for thinkin' he's ahead'a me... shit,
Fuck'a school bus, but you're still gettin' dropped off...
...the edge of a cliff.
While I'm blazin' a spliff, thinkin' ya better than the kid,
GodFather is pure FULL OF IT...when it comes to filler, that is.
I'm a wickedly worded wiz... you're a victim of me throwin' fist,
If your words were fire...nobody would bother to give you PISS!
Just gimme the win, dont even post, just study my fly style.
While you're busy stitchin' stars...
...representin' ya state of denial!!
So pick up the dial, and get the 411...you've been sidelines for awhile,
Cause kid, nobody feels ya shit... even in a chat room fulla phedophiles.


Damn yo...this site is ran different.

up yo. leave a link, and Ill check it out.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177333
but u have too explain the vote good
cuz this fool is bitch bout the votes

Voted For: godfather

winner- godfather
flow-tie
multi-godfather
punches-godfather
finisher-godfather
opener-godfather

he killed this battle, no offense J. Keep battlin though


return votes appreciated

Is this a real rap site???

Thats not how you break down a verse...

You gotta be kidding right.

Voted For: J.

WOW....godfather takes this one i don't really have to sit back and explain this one do I. I'm just gonna say he came harder with the punches, his multi was good and ended good, his only weak point in his verse was his opener other then that he's good. J had a bunch of self glory his punches were weak and....no that's it.

v/godfather

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024
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Vote switched

Damn i did it again, my bad godfather get your vote switched

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Voted For: godfather

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out:
opener: godfather
vocab: godfather
structure: j
multis: g.f.
closer: g.f.
g.f. won my vote cuz he hit wit more punches thru out the whole battle & came hard wit each line; j u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & increase ur wordplay no hating
make sure 2 retutn the favor

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Voted For: godfather

both versus werent that great but godfather i think you have more potential just stretched them lines a lil bit J. you were ok some wordplay in there but no real metaz notin hit hard all in all both need elevation but my vote goes to godfather..........drop some feed in songs forum on the track"sick of this" holla

Voted For: godfather

I voted Godfather cuz .J was wack in my opinion. He didn't have much of a structure, punches, wordplay, or vocab. Godfather had a little of them all but the off the chain kind of punches are kinda played now.

Either way good looks @ you both