ULTIMATE SPY vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


G-LUCK :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-20-05 at 12:21 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 11:56 PM.

ULTIMATE SPY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 11:58 PM.

how do u do the small print? thing jus wonder'n....

What small prints?........................................... ..

in ya other battle the one i jus voted on ur verse was in smaller print how u do that?

Dont remember fam

i think i download it.............

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Ultimate spy
whoa i dont understand your verse kinda weak but its ight the punches werent hitting you had no real good personals or anything creative about verse the vocab was weak and punches were weak just wasnt feeling your verse try uppin them punches, no hate

Mista
ight lil better then the last time i seen you drop the personals were nice the punches hit like fiya ya knah the vocab wasnt really there but neither was your openents but i just feel your punches hit alot harder, peace

opener: mista
closer: mista
punches: mista
vocab: tie
flow: tie
stucture: mista

Vote: Mista_Authentiq

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

good drop fam.....solid punches..good flow.......nice repping in there aswell

*Holds up jury chain*

^^ Nuff Said!


*holds The Jury Chain*.............

2nd battle man i'm still learn'n this shiz lol i barley even listen to rap ha but yea wasnt this suppose to be a 10 line drop? not 8

i can drop less, but not over-board..............................

o ok hey how do i get into a crew? or m i good enough to get into one?

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

I don't really feel like breaking it down so... i'm going with mista authentik. Ultimates spy's verse was a little weak. A line didn't rhyme, his punches were weak, and some was just played(another mj line). yea anyway mista's punches were pretty good especially the double 07 punch and your own cat bein more gangsta. Overall i think he took this one. No hate to anyone

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Weak battle :(

Mista:
OK you had wordplay..but you rhymed with
only one sound.Which ruined the rhyming,but you
used all personals which you seem to be consistant with.
nice structure,but I don't give two fucks about that.

U.S.
You had no wordplay really.
Just insluts,but you had meta's I'll give you that.
Fx your rhyme scheme and be more complex.
Add some personals in too.

Vote/mista

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

Well, this verse was ok you definetly had some witty lines, some advice would be not to do much self glorification, if anything try not to put any in there.
that's one line from your verse that pretty much had no punch to it at all.

Also, explaining your punches = a no no. It really takes away from your punch a whole lot. If people don't get the wit, they shouldn't be voting.

structure, it was fairly good, and your flow was decent.
Advice on that would be to leave it aligned left, and sort out the structure like that, and maybe enlarge the font a little.

Overall you had a pretty good verse. Good job fam.

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
I'll leave this kid shaking in fear, neckless, and brainless like my avy
Even if you wore a Memphis jersey, you still couldnt be grizzly
pretty good opener
I'll leave your own trademark in your head 2 double "O"s (007 a spy get it?)
I'll throw in 7 bullets, so you know you going to heaven hoe (get it?)
yea I get it, punch was okay
I'm here to give you a beat down, just for picking on little kids (battled young buck)
I got my badge on from the jury and i'm reppin it to the fullest
good flow, punch was decent here
like your sig, I'll leave your 100% punches cutt in half
Who's more gangstah than you? Your own cat
shouldve made ur flow a lil longer, decent persona thoug



ULTIMATE SPY
this cat likes his girls how i like my battles.. easy "K-O's"
his rhymes r jus wrong like MJ in a room with 10 year olds
good
yous rhymes is jus a waste of lines...i blow ya shit up like use step'n on mines
he b like a little kid who drops a popsicle n jus stands der n cries
nah, weak punch
authentiq as coke made from french fries, its as if he still high
slurr'n and caked out may i repeat "jus look at his eyes"
decent here
fuck his skills only reason he so focused is cuz dem ADD pills
my rhymes like the poison enter'n ur kidneys. no one can save thee
1st line was good, 2nd was garbage
he claims to be legit , but even his momma says he was a mistake
my post is like a toothless man eat'n a steak.jus keeps com'n n its hard 2 take
decent

Overall…in my opinion…
Mista took this one, punches were hitting all the way
The flow was aight here, and the vocab was good…
Overall nice drop…ULTIMATE SPY…your drop was aight
The punches were okay except for maybe 1 or 2…but
Elevate a little more…

No hate…& this aint no D/R…if ur thinking that

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

YO YO YO..........HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA SPY UR ASSS GETTIN OWNED,,,,,,,,,,LOLOLOL VOTE HAS TO GO 2 MY HOMIE MISTA MISTA SINISTA..........YO OVALL HAD WAY BETTER FLOW..... PUNCHES WERE FUNNY AS FUKI'll leave this kid shaking in fear, neckless, and brainless like my avy
Even if you wore a Memphis jersey, you still couldnt be grizzly
^^^^^^^^^^^^ HAHAHAHAHAHAHA GOOD SHYT.....SPY ELEVATE......PLZ ......... YO GOOD SHYT HERE MISTA..... RETURN THE FAVOUR IN MY BATTLES BELOW...........AIIGHT ...