ULTIMATE SPY vs Da Tongue Rapist
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 25

Check in by: 02-24-05 at 08:41 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Da Tongue Rapist has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 08:42 AM.

ULTIMATE SPY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 12:27 AM.

i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"

he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit
this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit

i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits"
he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it


*kill'n him softly .."kill'n me softly" lauren hill

taco bell shits like you eat to many fake ass burritos and u shit like none other

racing stripe like tak'n a shit and not wip'n your ass ha

upp'n this shit/////i'll return the favor n check out ya battle jus leave a link

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

meh, okay battle here....

DTR
>got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye
pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket
-wasnt really feelin this one, coulda worded it better 4/10
>close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
-loved this line, best one..haha 7/10
>this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches
you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches"
-okay finiisher.....6/10

not too great, had nice flow, structure was there....just need better wordplay, punches a little played, up the vocab....
overall: 17/30

Ultimate Spy
>i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"
-nice intro, coulda been worded better....6/10
>he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit
this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit
-this is your best line, i laughed.....7/10
i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits"
he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it
-decent closer....6/10

meh, gotta work on structure a little more...flow was aight.....your punches were a little more thoughout than DTR, but still not that great....okay battle
overall: 19/30

v/Ultimate Spy

uppn i'll return the favor drop me a link so i can check out ur battle

This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist
 

LOL......
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
^^^^
Killed it, Owned him lol

Nice drop Girl, Just ''Checking The Polls''

LOL @ 2-0 Up, sorry Spy, you alright in my book, i got nothing against you, but i dont think you deserve ta be 2-0 up............

This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist
 

Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

hahahaha ...but i'm still up so i'm gonna up this shiz......

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

ultimate spy won bacause he had better vocab and punches hit hard...nice flow...structre was good too...metas were ight couldve been better
best line-i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"
8/10

return the vote in my sig please..................

upp'n can we get this over with please............

vote dammit............................................ ...........drop a line

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

Not that great of a battle.

Da Tongue: Aight your flow and rhyming was weird at first, but I caught on. Your best line was your last one, and that still wasnt that great. try some personals and maybe some wordplay. overall just too simple and lacking of punches.

Ultimate ok verse, but your metaphors were not that good. your punches were ok, but not very hard hitting. no personals, and da tongue is female. overall I think you won this with your punches, because everything else was the same.

Overall too simple for both of you. try some personals and wordplay. put more effort in your verses.

vote- Ultimate Spy

someone close this shit plz.././././././././././././.'/././.'/./'./

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.................................................. ........lmao

Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY



i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"
.....ehhhhh
he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit
this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit
...decently good shit
i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits"
he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it
...nice
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got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye
pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket
...im not digging this
close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
...pretty decent not great
this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches
you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches"

....ehhh, nah

quick votes for a quick battle, i think spy took this one this time, nothing amazing but he took it