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ULTIMATE SPY 5 100.00%
Da Tongue Rapist 0 0%
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Old 02-21-05, 08:41 AM   #1
L. Veracity
You Cant Handle The Truth
 
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From: in the streets fighting
ULTIMATE SPY vs Da Tongue Rapist

IP: 950F 0FDD

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Old 02-21-05, 08:42 AM   #2
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Old 02-21-05, 08:46 AM   #3
L. Veracity
You Cant Handle The Truth
 
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From: in the streets fighting
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got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye
pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket
close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches
you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches"
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-22-05, 12:27 AM   #4
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Old 02-22-05, 03:44 PM   #5
L. Veracity
You Cant Handle The Truth
 
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got dayum, can we get a FUCKing voTe in here -smh-
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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Originally Posted by PhaseOne
my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-23-05, 03:47 PM   #6
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From: Chicago,IL
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i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"

he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit
this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit

i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits"
he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it


*kill'n him softly .."kill'n me softly" lauren hill

taco bell shits like you eat to many fake ass burritos and u shit like none other

racing stripe like tak'n a shit and not wip'n your ass ha
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Old 02-23-05, 04:28 PM   #7
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upp'n this shit/////i'll return the favor n check out ya battle jus leave a link
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Old 02-23-05, 05:00 PM   #8
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From: Adanac
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Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

meh, okay battle here....

DTR
>got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye
pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket
-wasnt really feelin this one, coulda worded it better 4/10
>close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
-loved this line, best one..haha 7/10
>this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches
you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches"
-okay finiisher.....6/10

not too great, had nice flow, structure was there....just need better wordplay, punches a little played, up the vocab....
overall: 17/30

Ultimate Spy
>i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"
-nice intro, coulda been worded better....6/10
>he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit
this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit
-this is your best line, i laughed.....7/10
i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits"
he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it
-decent closer....6/10

meh, gotta work on structure a little more...flow was aight.....your punches were a little more thoughout than DTR, but still not that great....okay battle
overall: 19/30

v/Ultimate Spy
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Old 02-23-05, 07:00 PM   #9
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uppn i'll return the favor drop me a link so i can check out ur battle
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Old 02-23-05, 07:04 PM   #10
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist

IP: B1A5 868C

LOL......
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it
^^^^
Killed it, Owned him lol

Nice drop Girl, Just ''Checking The Polls''
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Old 02-23-05, 07:04 PM   #11
L. Veracity
You Cant Handle The Truth
 
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From: in the streets fighting
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^ never ever voTe on anything of mine again, LMAO...I had INTERNAL rhyme instead of EXTERNAL rhyme where it wasobvious on the first 2 lines but trust me...my rhyme scheme was there...if you had said it aloud or (OH MY GOSH) red it more carefully, you'd have seen that...but...

2-0 U.S.
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Quote:
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

Quote:
Originally Posted by PhaseOne
my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-23-05, 07:05 PM   #12
Dirty Nigga
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LOL @ 2-0 Up, sorry Spy, you alright in my book, i got nothing against you, but i dont think you deserve ta be 2-0 up............
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Old 02-23-05, 08:10 PM   #13
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This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist

IP: 7163 3A38

Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-24-05, 10:23 AM   #14
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hahahaha ...but i'm still up so i'm gonna up this shiz......
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Old 02-24-05, 10:36 AM   #15
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From: SAN DIEGO,KILLAFORNIA
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Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY

ultimate spy won bacause he had better vocab and punches hit hard...nice flow...structre was good too...metas were ight couldve been better
best line-i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme"
8/10
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