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ULTIMATE SPY vs Da Tongue Rapist
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 25 Check in by: 02-24-05 at 08:41 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Da Tongue Rapist has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 08:42 AM.
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got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye
pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches" |
ULTIMATE SPY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 12:27 AM.
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got dayum, can we get a FUCKing voTe in here -smh-
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i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide
"kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme" he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits" he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it *kill'n him softly .."kill'n me softly" lauren hill taco bell shits like you eat to many fake ass burritos and u shit like none other racing stripe like tak'n a shit and not wip'n your ass ha |
upp'n this shit/////i'll return the favor n check out ya battle jus leave a link
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Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY
meh, okay battle here.... DTR >got a SPY kickin' rhymes?...bitch I'll piss in ya eye pull ya arms from the socket like an out-turned pocket -wasnt really feelin this one, coulda worded it better 4/10 >close range bang the bitch, no panties to get twisted be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it -loved this line, best one..haha 7/10 >this chick'll dice ya meat like public school lunches you'll be like 1/2 lunch boxes..."without the cool punches" -okay finiisher.....6/10 not too great, had nice flow, structure was there....just need better wordplay, punches a little played, up the vocab.... overall: 17/30 Ultimate Spy >i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide "kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme" -nice intro, coulda been worded better....6/10 >he couldnt "build a rep" even if he had a carpenters kit this kid like lochness . all the facts, but still ain't legit -this is your best line, i laughed.....7/10 i keep this kid runn'n like the ..."taco bell shits" he's like a "racing stripe"... no body wants it -decent closer....6/10 meh, gotta work on structure a little more...flow was aight.....your punches were a little more thoughout than DTR, but still not that great....okay battle overall: 19/30 v/Ultimate Spy |
uppn i'll return the favor drop me a link so i can check out ur battle
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This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist
LOL......
be the hard DICK to this pussy the way that I'ma hit it ^^^^ Killed it, Owned him lol Nice drop Girl, Just ''Checking The Polls'' |
^ never ever voTe on anything of mine again, LMAO...I had INTERNAL rhyme instead of EXTERNAL rhyme where it wasobvious on the first 2 lines but trust me...my rhyme scheme was there...if you had said it aloud or (OH MY GOSH) red it more carefully, you'd have seen that...but...
2-0 U.S. |
LOL @ 2-0 Up, sorry Spy, you alright in my book, i got nothing against you, but i dont think you deserve ta be 2-0 up............
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This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist
Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
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hahahaha ...but i'm still up so i'm gonna up this shiz......
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Voted For: ULTIMATE SPY
ultimate spy won bacause he had better vocab and punches hit hard...nice flow...structre was good too...metas were ight couldve been better best line-i keep this kid winded like i'm carbon monoxide "kill'n him softly" ...with a hint of "a cyanide rhyme" 8/10 |
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