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Kesse vs onestepbeyond
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Hate Votes etc..... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-04-05 at 12:39 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-01-05 12:39 AM.
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OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-01-05 12:42 AM.
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declined the first battle, wasn't too sure if the second you would respond
shoulda withdrawn, cause when it comes to spitting crap, your one step beyond
your not ahead of the game, i mislead with your name, so i'll tear you apart
rip out my "heart", give you a chance to "beat" me but you wouldn't know how to start
kid says hes from "the bury", but thats just what im goin to do with him
like fat kids going on diets, your chances of winning are looking pretty slim
infectin you like i was bacterial, thoughta gettin d/r but couldn't like you had venereal
you winning? that theory is bull, ive seen better wordplay come outta my alphabits cereal
throwing punches that cant connect..what'd you expect? cant win when you feed routine rhymes
you should post the new york times, give voters something interesting to read between lines*
this is over now, people voting for you have clearly stepped beyond comprehension
cause, with your rhymes, the only chance you winning would be in another dimension |
^explans:
*he had an open mic called "reading between the lines" if you dont know what venereal is, look it up |
This beef i'll treat no different... so lets battle, grab a bar,
your rap style is defined in 4 words... your avatar!!!* me losin, fuck that? you claim to bust gats, your stuffs trash, say im comin to kill you and have you 'sneakin' out ya 'crib' like rugrats, really wanna battle? in a few you'll be hollerin TRUCE TRUCE, how are ya'll so established when you listed under the new crews,** Skill comin from you? WOO! finally i've been greated at last, still lyrically compared to me, your fuckin eatin an ass!! maybe i'll get a loss, i look on the brightside, so let me say again, yeah i'll be 1 and 2... don't hcange the fact your Canadian... *Avatar says That is Bloody Terrible.. chyeah **The Establishment is his crew |
^ haha, nice drop, gl yo....how bout we play a game of puck after???? no, thats what i thought....
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
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lol yeah, its all hood, and hockey is badass... don't stab me in the skate with a skate
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face with a skate... lol... good battle though....
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word....pretty tight i think....just hope we can get some fuckin honest, explained feed....i dont care if i lose, i just have a problem with shit votes.....uppin
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Voted For: Kesse
hmmm...I think this was a close battle but I give it to kesse...I'd say he took this maybe because his bars were more elaborated...(if that's any reason)...and if not that then id say he had better vocab,and punches... close battle btw return the favour y'all... heat of the moment ft. doe bagz ya...im not sure if that's gonna work though but just copy the link... |
u know one thing I dont get...is when people say checkin polls...what the hell?...well who cares...
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
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Voted For: Kesse
Kesse, Had Some Nice Punches Up In Here Man Pretty Good, Personals Was Major Here, I Liked how You Made Em' Into Punches Also Your Vocabulary Damn Cozzin Good Verse Bruh, This Is The Best Vocab I've Seen On RV, Decent, One Thing I Wasn't Digin Is Your Structure Man, Try And Fix That Up A Little, Also Your Word Play Get That Up Man OneStep Nice Verse You Had Some Alright Punches Not Really Hitting Hard Though But It Was Alright, Your Personals You Could Of Done Better Then That Man, Your Structure I'd Have To Saw Was Horrible Man Try And line The Bars Up To Match Each Other Feel Me?? And Your Vocabulary Man Needs Alot Of Help Weerd, Vote=Kesse Return The Favor Man Link In My Sig Me Vs Buck Shot I'm Up 4-0 Make Sure you Return The Favor Coz |
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
checkin polls, pretty good drops from both of yall. onestep had some nice punches and flow. kesse had some good ones too but his flow was off and some punches was a lil over used. good creativity from both tho. Vote removed |
take that off, i meant for it to b feedback my fault
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
nice shit.....keep elevating family.....
*checkin polls* good drop kesse |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
you win becuse you got a mad better structure and your punches where decent i didnt get bored at all, but since Kesse your structure was off which mad it harder to read which made it wack both of you need to eleavte with the punches and metaphores decent battle tho just work on strucuture Kesse can you return the favor on any battle that is in my sig thanks |
i don't think me or kesse even cared about this battle... lol
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haha, no kidding eh.......i'll just upp it here and there hopefully to get it closed lol
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Voted For: Kesse
really really close battle i'll break it down keese.. your structure was wack.. ha. but yea overall i thought you had much better vocab and personals.. you kept your punches coming i liked the cereal line that was funny.. your closer and opener werent to shabby either.. only thing he owned youon was the closer and structure.. but that wasnt enough to get a w one step beyond. i liked ur drop .. its jus that you didnt have the vocab that keese had. he had you in alot of aspects the only thing you owned him on was the closer.. i laughed out loud when i saw that haha nice.. you were really creative but your didnt have the punch vote//keese rtf with only honest votes.. links in the sig |
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