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03-01-05, 12:58 PM | #1 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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Tha Heat of tha Moment (Adrenaline & Doe Bagz)...NOK x-clusive!
IP: EAE8 4AFC
*outside of tha bank* d.bagz: ayo adren adren: whats up? d.bagz: im ready for dis shit adren: oh now u ready? d.bagz: hell yeah fam..u got me right? adren: no doubt homie..hold it down d.bagz: duh!..u know tha deal cuzzo..im goin in first *d.bagz walks into the bank, takes out guns...time freezes...* [verse 1: Doe Bagz] nigga i'll blast my way through anythang.. see my tec-9 up close and personal like a nasty bitch da sings makin shit pop off for no reason, it aint no thang.. talk shit back and its gone be some metal pieces to ya brain i got my crew witta nigga, we da new rapverse.. next generation is dis bitch, yeah its flows we disperse see a bitch and i shoot her first.. have a hoe thinkin bout a nigga when she through dat do they say my ryhmes too clever cuz im hot in da streets.. gotta a bunch cock swabbin niggaz comin after me G like BLACK, he was a cool nigga, he rolled wit me.. got demoted and changed his name now he all against me? whatz ya real motive nigga, please let me know.. cuz last i heard u was real excited when u got in my show and dont try to lie bout da fact dat u a fan my man.. cuz everytime i drop a verse dis nigga is after me like da klu-klux-klan [hook] (in the heat of the moment) bitch niggaz actin tuff but dey lame (in the heat of the moment) point blanc- we put da gat to ya brain (in the heat of the moment) Mc's back down if dey aint got no game In the heat of the moment that's when u die,u no longer remain Doe Bagz;Adrenaline, we just Nok Out Kingz man... {repeat 2x} [bridge: a voice sings...] when it comes to the time to prove yourself you lose ur strength and you got nothin else it could all be lost but only time truly knows it it's all up to you in the heat of the moment cuz it's all up to you in the heat of the moment [verse 2: Adrenaline] *walks in..cracks knuckles..unloads* In the heat of the moment aint nobody stoppin me,explode da mic and rock a beat Im a knockout King(yaa boy!)so fuck a gat u know my punchlines pack some heat(ya nigga!) rhymes like a tek and my mind's like a trigger use a HK on a nigga just to write my signature I make brains malfunction quick like old computer systems when I be spittin sick like a virus killin intruder victims If a nigga wanted beef then im sorry I missed him cuz I keep rockin rhymes that kills distilled rhythms(haha) dont mess wit da NOK or u'll surely find ur life at steak I crack spines like kit kat so niggaz learn to take a break dey fake,cuz when it comes to that played shit they make we clown y'all niggaz and spice u up like shake and bake(what?) hot shit dat am givin u, I shatter skulls at da climax my rhymes rearrange and change more insides than midas we ridaz cuz in the heat of the moment we just grind tracks and fine tax on any bitch nigga who want his life back(haha) mothafuckaaaz!! [hook] (in the heat of the moment) bitch niggaz actin tuff but dey lame (in the heat of the moment) point blanc- we put da gat to ya brain (in the heat of the moment) Mc's back down if dey aint got no game In the heat of the moment that's when u die,u no longer remain Doe Bagz;Adrenaline, we just Nok Out Kingz man.....*fades out* {repeat 2x} *shells hit tha ground..time thaws out..police neva find a suspect..but they blame it all on 50 Cent..lmao* [whateva beat u thinkin of, now fades...]
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03-01-05, 01:31 PM | #2 | |||||
unknown legend...
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IP: 0F40 8178
yo DOE...that's fuckin hot maan....NOK REPPIN ay y'all uppin dis shit...u know the business...
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03-01-05, 04:01 PM | #3 | |||||
unknown legend...
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IP: 0F40 8178
put dis back on top.....y'all vote on dis rite now..................
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03-01-05, 04:01 PM | #4 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: EAE8 4AFC
hell yeah...had to change it a bit adren...uppin dis shit!!!
-Doe Bagz
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03-01-05, 04:33 PM | #5 | ||||
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yall dis was gd, gd lines and hot verses holla at me return the favour:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1994128
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03-01-05, 04:39 PM | #6 | ||||||
Lyrics + Crunk = GHOSTE
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good shit here...nice verses both...8/10
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03-01-05, 06:44 PM | #7 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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pretty dope shit, solid verses an the hook was a'right too, reppin the famlay, shit was decent as hell, 7.5/10...keep 'em comin' y'all
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03-01-05, 07:58 PM | #8 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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thanx yall...uppin
-Doe Bagz
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03-02-05, 11:30 AM | #9 | |||||
unknown legend...
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put dis back on top man....upppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.. .i want like 5 pages on dis...
--NOK
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03-02-05, 01:14 PM | #10 | |||||
unknown legend...
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IP: 0F40 8178
put dis back on top y'all............................................. .............
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03-02-05, 01:32 PM | #11 | |||||
in your system
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^not bad of verse, liked the chorus and shit, first verse, flow was a little bad, but lyrics and vocab were, i think that the poor stucture/flow took away alot of the effect thou, just up that shit....second verse, i liked that one...creative and had better flow which was nice to read, and picked up the pace of the drop a little more, but still, in some places....wordplay coulda been better.....7/10
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03-02-05, 03:13 PM | #12 | |||||
unknown legend...
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IP: 928B 1485
thanks yo...^^see dats wat am talkin bout...honest feed.....put dis back on top............................
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03-02-05, 04:20 PM | #13 | |||||
unknown legend...
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IP: 0F40 8178
return the favour when I give my input u damn people...........back to the top......forever uppin.....
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03-02-05, 05:00 PM | #14 | |||||||
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pretty good shit man, record it, get yo' self paid
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03-02-05, 07:54 PM | #15 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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^^^yeah...maybe, lmao
-DB
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