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C.A.L.I vs Spektikul
Battle Rules:
6-18 Lines... 2 hours to check, drop anytime within a 1 week period... All Rules apply, however CALI said Red Bull may vote... No beef, we homies, battling for old time sake... GL......... Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 03-10-05 at 03:02 AM Must drop verse in 10080 minutes after check in. |
Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 01:02 AM.
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C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 01:04 AM.
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Time to rip up my homie... :hump: This time around your rhyme is bound to hit me where ya wanna Only way youll ever spit 'dope' shit, is in a topical on marijuana This is a one sided rally provided Cali's dickriders dont contribute Thinks he's phat, check all the links this kat needs to distibute Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order This fag brags about how many legs hes opened, something I cant stand Are you sure her name wasnt Palm-a-la, someone also known as your hand How you supposed to offend me, you worked at Wendys and that shits sad Im battling a twenty-four year old wanksta thats old enough to be my dad Your audio is gaudy yo, You aint rapping in ya mic...you just abuse it Have you ever heard of talent? You should look for it so you can use it Once I win you can bet this vets rep will be swept into the trash can Cali's such a fuckin 'pussy', before we battled he got a 'cat-scan' This battle aint a total waste, Ill get excersice once I pound through But I could get more excerice, if I were to actually run around you Rap Verse is ya life, so I will try not to lyrically heat-you-up An keep talkin shit on computer, on the street I could beat-you-up. Explainations
"This time around" = We have battled before "Links this kat needs to distribute" = He always uses links to punch opponents "How many legs he's opened" = Always tellin me what a pimp he is |
Thats not minutes to drop thats steps im beyind um!!
Stay on my dick he a good rapper/wrapper...... too bad hes encasing a condom!! :laugh:
Was never no hate i always thought youd shine in timeBut you aint never elevate even ya avys pen is behind in times One of a kind?.......nope!!trash textcees a dime a dozen :thefinger Ya lyrics is dope......... with more cuts then holloween pumpkins!!{1}
Pardon me munchkin this a tall order you small packageBig things in small sizes....... ya verse holds a immeasurable amount of wackness :nono:
If our words backflipped then youd defintaly winSo trading votes is 'Shady'.......... but without um ya chances is just 'Slim'
Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastardYou just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'...... call me the chessmaster!! :thumbup:[EXPLANATION] 1.TRASH DOPE IS DOPE THAT BEEN STEPPED ON OR CUT TO MUCH BASICALLY A WORDPLAY META THERE SAYING HE CAN SAY HIS SHITS DOPE BUT WE ALL KNOW ITS TRASH :thumbup: |
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
CHekin the polls might vote later
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This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
This battle was garbage.
Everything in both verses was played to shit. This battle was to wack to drop a vote on. God damn try coming witty in at least one punch.. |
^^^Sorry master
*kisses feet* I will try to impress you next time...lol Upping. |
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
Checking the polls..................................
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Upping..........
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ditto ^^^
VOTE BITCHES! |
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Upping. Again. Motha fuckas. Vote. Dammit. Upping.
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222 Views, 0 votes, 1 wack site.
fuckin vote. |
This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
Polls I Can't Vote One Of You Black Listed Me But Cali Took This One Fo Sho!
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
ok...........
c.a.l.i - you had an ok verse....wordplay was coo punches were coo......multies were there too....it wasnt really a good verse...it just seemed ordinary....and your structer sucks....and that rapper/wrapper shit was just dumb.....and so was the slim shady line...but u said shady slim lmao....seamed like u was trying to hard and u steppeed on your own foot........no hate tho.... Spek - your verse was good....nice punches...personals....i like the exercise line....not really any multies...but coo wordplay....ummm....your rhyme scheme was better than cali's......and your structer was way better i didnt have to look hard to read and understand....and none were forced lines they just flowed....good job... vote/spek well thats if i could vote...but i just found out i cant...so i'll leave this as feed |
lol spek have this closed well reopen with a lesser post count and redrop cuz neither of us really even tried for this
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Ill just get strobe to lower post count, sall taken care of.
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ling posted feedback his vote dont count spek otheriwse th other kids vote should count
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Voted For: Spektikul
CALI: Thats not minutes to drop thats steps im beyind um!! Stay on my dick he a good rapper/wrapper...... too bad hes encasing a condom!! ^^rapper/wrapper lines are wack but decent attempt 4/10 Was never no hate i always thought youd shine in time But you aint never elevate even ya avys pen is behind in times ^^good personal 8/10 One of a kind?.......nope!!trash textcees a dime a dozen Ya lyrics is dope......... with more cuts then holloween pumpkins!!{1} ^^hot metaphors in this bar 8/10 Pardon me munchkin this a tall order you small package Big things in small sizes....... ya verse holds a immeasurable amount of wackness ^^decent 6/10 If our words backflipped then youd defintaly win So trading votes is 'Shady'.......... but without um ya chances is just 'Slim' ^^good punch and meta 7/10 Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'...... call me the chessmaster!! ^^decent closer nice meta 7/10 overall: 40/70 (57%) Spektikul: This time around your rhyme is bound to hit me where ya wanna Only way youll ever spit 'dope' shit, is in a topical on marijuana ^^played concept 4/10 This is a one sided rally provided Cali's dickriders dont contribute Thinks he's phat, check all the links this kat needs to distibute ^^decent punch, but not a personal cuz that could be used on anoyone who uses links 5/10 Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order ^^good punch 7/10 This fag brags about how many legs hes opened, something I cant stand Are you sure her name wasnt Palm-a-la, someone also known as your hand ^^wack 3/10 How you supposed to offend me, you worked at Wendys and that shits sad Im battling a twenty-four year old wanksta thats old enough to be my dad ^^decent 5/10 Your audio is gaudy yo, You aint rapping in ya mic...you just abuse it Have you ever heard of talent? You should look for it so you can use it ^^dope 9/10 Once I win you can bet this vets rep will be swept into the trash can Cali's such a fuckin 'pussy', before we battled he got a 'cat-scan' ^^dope punch dope meta 9/10 This battle aint a total waste, Ill get excersice once I pound through But I could get more excerice, if I were to actually run around you ^^lmfao dope shit again 8/10 Rap Verse is ya life, so I will try not to lyrically heat-you-up An keep talkin shit on computer, on the street I could beat-you-up. ^^wack lol 3/10 overall: 53/90 (59%) Vote: Spektikul C.A.L.I you shoulda used 1 more decent line and you would have won, probably the wackest i have seen you come... Return the favor with an honest vote on this battle... no one votes anymore so it will be appreciated, dont rtf i wont vote on anymore of youre battles and i vote more than anyone :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182367 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^omg that dont count i outscored him percentage wise like crazy foo i got 12 lines he has 18 i crazy outscored him according to you i won my averge is way higher omg count the fucking lines wtf dumb kids
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Voted For: Spektikul
DOPE BATTLE!! Spektikul- good flow, really nice punches and personals...lol at that shit about Palm-a-la...nice wordplay..i like how u attacked his "pimp" claims and his size, and his employment...overall, that verse didnt really have any holes...nice job, nuthin to recommend C.A.L.I - your verse was real dope too....your punches were dope..and i liked your wordplay...especially the trash weed shit....i just felt that his personals out did yours...but you are a dope text battler..nice job..keep spitin |
Voted For: Spektikul
ooooooooooooo shit, this iz a close ass battle. but i gotta give it 2 spek. u both had really good punches, but spek had mo of them. spek had betta strucutre. u both had good flow. spek had a betta opener i thought. this wuz a hard battle 2 vote on, cuz both of u guyz had dope verses. but cali, i dont really like how u got tha ........'s half way thru a line, then tha rest of tha line iz below it, i dunno, it dont really matta that much. but good battle. no hate cali. werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
im pretty sure spek won this.......... checkin polls
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Voted For: Spektikul
wow this was a good ass battle but spektikul took this jawn . cali put up a good fight n erething but damn spek's punches was hard in this one. he had better flow, structure, and word-play. both had good vocab that wasnt an issue, but what really did it on this one was the wordplay on speks punches. opener- cali had the better opener for this one closer- cali also had a better closer multies- spek had multies that really made his verse more flud if u feel on that. it helped the punches hit better calis' best bar=Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'...... call me the chessmaster!! ^^^this was hot, nicec wordplay good delivery, shoulda had mroe of these in the verse nah mean speks best bar=Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order ^^^haha that joint won it for me, nice punch n personal overall-good battle but spek's punches got him this W.. return the favor, links in the sig ....1.... |
wtf...
Uppin I guess... |
^^ lol..... its funny cuz Flow got the percentages RIGHT Cali.... u didnt make it outa high school did u????
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Voted For: C.A.L.I
i THINK CALI TOOK THIS ONE............................................... ................................ |
Ight, didnt wanna waist my time, so i think cali took this one wit harder punches, and more preparation in this battle. I felt cali came more conistent, and harder overall., but i think you should work on ur personals. they were all landin right, and some were just plain dumb, also all those similies took yo flow off, and made ur verse kidna herbish. but other than that, i was feelin yo verse.
spek. i dont think you made it a close battle. i htink you shuld work on wordplay and better vocab, and harder landin punches. I was feelin tha whole flow of ur verse, but thats about it. shit was just aight to me, but i think cali got u.,.., overall vote goes to cali Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
word to both verses.....should be close....cali gets punches.....spek gets personals......
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