FaMe vs LyricalMa$tamind
 

Battle Rules:

Fame gets up 2 20 lines or less if he choses -Lyrical gets 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
no dickridin
1 verse only

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-19-05 at 09:57 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 10:00 PM.

look ima spit first cuz niggas feed like a lyrical leech/
he's mad cuz he's not taken serious like a figure of speech/
but i aint even gotta prove that this nigga is weak/
cuz he's a pussy so i guess you really are what you eat/
im like damn was 10 2 20 lines to much to handle/
you wanna see a fucked up verse yours will b a perfect example/
played concepts like gun metal, you homos are endless/
make claims of bare'n arms like the second admendment/
you rip me?........................ naw you wont desect shit/
i'll eat this cat like leavin B-n-J (Ben & Jerry) wit a fat depressed bitch/
now my conclusion this niggas losin for not bout ta rap shit/
if you aint no freestyler y the fuck would you wanna blind spit/
bitch you got here by mistake cuz u knew dis battle wuz curtains/
i was ask'd to join this site /you made it here by web surfin/
goes to show that wit mistakes i'll be whitin'em out/
u like a stain on a shirt i get u out wit shout/
Lyrical Ma$tamind had 2 murk u quick/
u got 3 days ta post ur verse/ piece a shit

FaMe has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 03:06 PM.

post fame
dang u takin all day itz already been n hour n 15 min
u got an hour and 15 min left

my 4 bars that i said so here they r...an hurry n post ya shit dont rush me if u aint drop yas homie....


listen...

Lyrical's rhymes are 'fragments', thas y hes been 'sentenced' ta prison
Now hes spittin behind 'bars', so wat does that tell ya?..his shits pre-written!
Homie u need ta git a 'grip', ya 'pencil' cant equip,
Violent attacks, shit..somebody give this cat a 'paper CLIP'!
U needa 'pic' weather u wana stay or not, buh i suggest u go*
Cuz wit that kinda hair u got, yo, all u movin is to and 'fro'!**
So no usin stayin, only time ull git ‘pounds’ is if u ‘weigh in’
Wit that said stop ‘ballin’, cuz u cant bring tha ‘March Madness’..so start prayin

*pic is tha shit u put in afros an stuff
**his avy has that comic book guy wit tha afro lookin hair

if ya dont git it dont vote...

Aint sur if I need a votin link since I only got like 5 posts...

wow....neva seen that much filler in my life...if u win ill b very surprised...uppin this, sorry fa tha freepost

we need votes on dis hot battle yall

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

ehh, weakish battle. but ima give it to LyricalMa$tamind cuz he had better punches. n he had a couple multies. FaMe, not bad, just work on your punches. no hate FaMe.

return tha favor pleeze
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177094

elaborate more solo creepin b/c the vvote will b
dqed if u dont elab more
so please do it

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

V/lyricalMastamind....this was a good battle....lyric came wit punchs that were hard hittin an creative also had good personals an structure...fame u came wit some good lines but i felt u came to lightly u need to work on more creative punchs.....No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=L
closer=L
structure=tie
vocab=l
Punchs=L
personals=Tie
overall=Lyricalmastamind

come on yall post some votes
we need votes w/ good explanation and feedback
so pick da betta battler
vote w/ good feedback
and its done
pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

this was a pretty easy one to decide in my book:

structure: lyrical's structure was on point... i was feelin the flow the whole time... fame's was kinda hit or miss with each bar, some lines were stretched, and some werent long enough... it was aight, but not good enough

punches: this goes to lyrical too... he had good wordplay and creative punches... fame, tho, didnt... opener was poorly worded, but a nice try... pounds line is played... to and fro line was wack... the effort was there, but it wasnt good enough this time...

overall: lyrical gets this one with good structure, flow, and hard hittin punches... no hate jus elevate

return the favor please links in sig

Voted For: FaMe

aii This Is What I feel

Fame Came with a aii opener With The Name Play The Rest of his verse Was Fallin Off Its like he Jus Let his verse Fall Down But He did restore himself Wit Some bars that Were aii ENough for me To Give him the vote ......mastermind You Sort Of messed up you didnt supply n e good punchez that caught my attention But Still You Drop an aii Verse ........Next time work on Punchez instead of jus tryin to make stuff ryme

My vote goes To

Fame


RTF In The Link In my Sig It would be greatly Appreciated

No Hate Mayne thats jus How I Felt I see alot of others feel Different

RTF * Honestly *

DonT Hate Vote mayne

Voted For: FaMe

punches:Fame
flow:Fame
multi's:LM
structure:Fame
vocab:Fame
Originality: Fame

lmao this lines like a compliment
cuz he's a pussy so i guess you really are what you eat/
sayin he gets pussy

Anyway Fame had this one fairly easy because of punches and LM you should have a different rhyming word every punch..

return favor plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182374

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

mastermind win diz\ battle hiz flow wuz iight his punchez culd of been better but it wuz still tight

This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 

yo i heard your first four lines from somewher, you either bit them or you recyled your verse, so you loose, im not gonna go find out where you bit them but i know you did, LOL pitiful

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Not the strongets battle yall..
keep elevating both...

But, Mastamind came harder, few lines were stretched, learn ta get the point across quicker in ya lines LM, Straight stuff tho, somewhat witty, few decent metas n puns, okay wordplay for the most part
learn ta be more creative an consistant LM

Fame, ya had an aight verse also, u prolly had the best line in the battle with that paper clip, such a simple rhymes ta play off yet nobody uses it, an u did, an it hit well an made ya verse from whack ta alright, be more consistant an try n make every line a personal or punch
that goes for both of yall

But RTF In any of my battles ya see floatin around

Peace