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LexiKon vs Skriptz
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting No D/R No Cheating No Punkin out again Aight this time actually battle me instead of makin me waste battle credits you have 60 minutes after you check in to drop your verse I'm gona go start on mine Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-01-05 at 02:45 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
LexiKon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 02:47 PM.
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My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1] You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2] You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets" Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3] And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4] First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5] And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6] So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7] [1] May sound like self glorification but "emcee" and "$ik with it" are his old aliases [2] He's got D/R's and when i say oops thats ...Xplizit... I'm refering to himits his old aliase it's also refering to his character sayin he's the type of dude to pm for votes [3] Under the video in his sig he's got 1 acomplishment and he acts harder then he is [4] Keep's droppin O.M.'s and calls them freestyles you cant freestyle with text because when you write you got time to think, i don consider text freestyle only audio [5] First time he talked to me he tryed actin hard and also yet another aliase "Metaskriptz" [6] This punk always changin his aliase [7] He's know to pre write from what i hear Don't hate cuz i explained my verse |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 06:06 PM.
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mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me*
You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth Blah…w/e… *mcskitlz = his aim |
Voted For: Skriptz
Lex um first of all your personals were good but the ducking shit no, i dont beleive it, if skriptz ducked you its becuz he has no time for someone like you. horrible. anyway the overal verse was weak your wordplay was weak and the only thing you really had good was flow syllable counts and nice personals the rest was weak. 1 Skriptz prety good. not so many personals but blah your stucutre was greator and your wordplay (finishing lines) were just overal better then his by far. the stucute was greator the vocabulary was greator. you just got this, this was a one sided battle peace. RTF in my battle vs. Hammer links in the sig |
This was feedback posted for LexiKon
Its funny how i cant vote on this one
But if i could i would give it to lexikon.Not coz hes in my crew, but for the fact that his personals were direct and good as hell |
^half of them shits aint even true...
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Skriptz i actually expected something more hard hitting from a guy like you guess your more hyped up then your battling lets to believe thanks for the feedback and upin
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Voted For: LexiKon
aight this is how i see it. Lexikon: you had a nice hard verse, all the way through. The thing i like is that every line was a personal, coming right @ skriptz. Personals were all on point, structure was nice, easy to follow and read, your vocab was average. skriptz: i feel you didnt really put any effort into this verse, your last line had the same word ending, so thats a minus. You didnt have any personals except punches that didnt really connect. So i'm voting for Lexikon, rtf in my sig, getting mad slept on. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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heh...not really into text anymore...so it doesnt matter settin my audio shit up...so who cares |
ohhh i see so I'm your last text battle lol honored lmao anyway upin
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yeah upin this ish people dont sleep vote on it |
nah not really...haha...
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....Man this battle is gettin slepped on upin folks.... |
Voted For: Skriptz
This was a pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to skriptz... Skriptz. mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me* You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family Decent opener, could have been better I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak nope He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC Decent Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth Okay closer...could have been alot better LexiKon My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1] You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2] 1st lines was good died at the end You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets" Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3] Nice And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4] First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5] nope And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6] So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7] He prewrite? ...not feelin it overall vote- Skriptz |
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Voted For: Skriptz
close battle.... He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC I really liked this... I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak this was petty good... over all i liked yours better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
.....upin This Battle..... |
Voted For: LexiKon
Flow: Blah its text Punches: Lex Personals: Lex Wordplay: Lex Metas: Tie Multis: Neither Enjoyment: Eh iono Vote: LexiKon Explanation :Lexikon was way more personal thats why he gets my vote .. also he was more complex which makes a big difference .. only thing i dont like is dont explain ur verse so much if people dont get it fully then u did a bad job wit it and right here u didnt need all those explanations .. stay up 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
......thanks, upin........ |
Voted For: LexiKon
i think lex took this one. skriptz-ok verse, but i think u need to work on a lot of stuff. yo verse was ight, but i seen no creativitie in it. some of the punches and personals were ight, but i just wasnt feelin it. sry. lex-i gave u tha vote, cause i felt you came harder on wordplay, and personals. yo verse was dope to me, and creative. tha explainin shit was kinda unneccessary, and the links were too, but thats just a small bump in this, i dont think it hurt you in this battle. i stil think you took this one. better structure, and your verse looked more organized. overall-one sided battle, and my vote goes to Lexikon. v/lex Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
what the fuck why do my votes keep gettin fuckin disqualified this is major bullshit some off those votes had nothin wrong fuckin bull :cussing: |
Voted For: LexiKon
lmfao dis nigga strait killed skriptz yo man he did da same shit 2 me made me waste credits den dont chekk in lexikon verse was mean threw da whole thing he had sum fire ass punches dat realli hit him hard he had dem nice ass personals and dey played off hiz name da explanatins 2 follow each line lmao dis nigga took it wit eaze if otha niggaz voted against him its kuzz dey on hiz dikk skriptz ya shit was simple da first bar aint even rhyme hurt/family?da fukk iz u on u aint have no personalz shit stayed basic da whole verse dem punches was horrible on sum real shit u kept ya whole verse basic i wasnt feelin it so u dont get da win 4 dat v-lexikon got dis by eaze |
Voted For: LexiKon
mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me* You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family ^^wasnt feeling the punch homie I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak ^^flow fell off n kinda simple..... He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC ^^??...srry man really not feeling this bar either Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth ^^this was funny....not a bad closer..... . it seemed you either didnt try or didnt care...or just aint good...but you had 1 bar that was decent(closer) other then that i felt ya verse was just lacking in punches n personals... if the personals were there(i didnt see them or get em) . . My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1] You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2] ^^decent opener............but simple You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets" Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3] ^^2nd line was koo..... And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4] First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5] ^^decent name play And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6] So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7] ^^weak closer..but i got the jist//... . . well imma go with lex, 2nd bar was koo n it was the most creative outta both verses..you both need to try harder or elevate ya verses n punches...to much simplicity from what ive read in this battle.... .. RTF .in the sig.........if ya want |
Voted For: Skriptz
ok, first thing I gotta say as I was reading both verses. FAKE PERSONALS=WACK, and take away from yo verse, especially when the voters knows it's fake. He wasn't metaskriptz. Meta still here. But w/e to the verses: Yours: 1. SARs lines are played 2. ok, concept been used before, but it's iight -Frozen juice punch was nice 3. umm... ok? not really hard hitting. 4. big deal, but yea, it's ok, I guess 5. not him, false. so wack 6. didn't need explanation for it 7. ok.... blah.. yo verse was aiight. Not really anything hard hitting. Don't jus state stuff you usin' as a personal. Actually put it into a punch. Not that great of a verse, but eh. And you said not to hate on yo explanations, but fo reel, when your explanations bigger than yo verse... you kno you got a problem. lol now to skriptz: didn't really get what the skittles line about. -second one is ok -third punch -um, too simple but it's aiight. -closer is what won you this nbattle. Cuz I was gonna say he won, till I saw this shit. lool tight shit. Sayin' his body pink, from the rug burns. I liked this. Actually only decent punch in whole battle. very wack battle, but skriptz got it wit the closer. pc |
Man this battle is gettin slept on come on I need some votes i wana close this and Skriptz did go as metaskriptz so your vote should be DQ'ed cuz you judged my verse thinkin it wasn't true but it is type in Skriptz under advanced search and select search all threads created by Skriptz then look trough his posts you will see that he created threads under the aliase Metaskriptz yeah so upin this battle been open longer then Paris Hiltons legs!!! And thats a long time!!! |
Voted For: LexiKon
Skriptz's middle bars were alright, but everything flanking them was weak.. Lex had personals galore, punches were heavy....only thing is you didn't need to explain most of those, it was pretty easy to connect the dots..wordplay on the Solid Punches bit was nice...that's why I threw my vote to Lex |
...This battle has been up for while please vote people... |
Upin This Battle Been Slet On For To Long
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Voted For: Skriptz
My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1] You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2] 7...hot opener, hittin on his aliases!! You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets" Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3] 7...WHOA!! decent!! crackin me up!!! LMAO!!! And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4] First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5] 7...spittin fire here!!! nice personals!! And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6] So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7] 0...BOOOO!!!! pre writ lines are gay!!! i no longer give any points for pre-writ lines!!!!! OVERALL: 21/40 mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me* You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family 6...aight punch here, not really feelin the 2nd line!! I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak 5...kind of self-glorifyin here, but u get away with it cuz it aint direct self glorifyin!! He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC 6...pretty basic punches here, but you consistent!! Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth 5...nah, not feelin it!! OVERALL: 22/40 right this was a potentially gud battle!!! Lexikon was spittin fire hittin Skriptz with mad personals but then he went and fucked up dropping that retarded pre-writ balls which i hate!!! know that when i vote you get no points for pre-writ lines cuz i think they are the biggest bunch of horse shit on RV!!!! skriptz was consistently average, like he aint tryin or sum shit but he still gets it cuz of Lex droppin that pre-writ shit!!! V/ - Skriptz Don't complain about my vote!!! :thumbup: Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
This was feedback posted for LexiKon
stop fuckin wit links nigga....nah, j/p ...and you in Livin' Legendz...go unite wit us...lol...good battle
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This battle is bullshit, Over half of them votes for lex shouldnt have been taking off.
I smell a sore looser, and some of them cats always vote for skriptz. |
Man personally i think thats bullshit to tell me my whole battle ripped the fuck out him and to tell him his bars were so so and just cuz of 1 baR i lose it fuck that for real if i ripped him i ripped him and one bar shouldnt make a difference thats fucked up if i'm spittin fire and he's not how the fuck is he gona win this and i would have this shit already if all my votes could stop gettin DQ'ed :thefinger |
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Voted For: LexiKon
V/LexiKon...this was a good battle in my opinion both came wit good punchs...But my vote goes to lex he came wit good original punchs an alot of personals an good structure the opener was hot...Skriptz u had a good verse to but i felt sum ur punchs werent that hard hittin u came wit a not that many personals ur structure was good but it seemed like u came to lightly........No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR............. Opener=L Closer=Tie Structure=Tie Punchs=L Personals=L Vocab=Tie Multi's=tie(none really) Wordplay=Tie Overall=LexiKon Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for LexiKon
Very Dificult.......................................... .... good verses both, couldn't vote on this........ keep up
Lexikon - no flow Skriptz - no vocab |
Voted For: LexiKon
mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me* You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth ^^^ wow that was bad Lex- My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1] You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2] You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets" ^^^ decent lines... that punches lines played but u put a lil flip on it... and u used wordplay, i dont hardly even see any in skiptz verse. ya verse bar is good wordplay and personal and punch... nice line there... .. no hate, skiptz u know u came weak. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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