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03-02-05, 07:19 PM
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Corrupt (Freestyle)
IP: 258C A279
Artist: Skriptz
Song: Corrupt (Freestyle) Look, I’m just another person that was born in the 213 These kids trying to act like a rapper, but they just some wannabes Flickin dimes & stay countin lines, cuz I spit some rhymes Comin back in here, and I’m taking what’s mine Skriptz either comin from the left or from the right Haters comin either way, starting fights all damn night Rhymin some words, you know its pretty damn simple Bout to drop in the studio, with some bangin instrumentals You punks are wack, cuz yo rhymes keep gettin colder & colder These punches comin tough, like some thrown down boulders High technical ish here, this is gonna go pretty quick Talkin ish & watch how you gonna get a busted lip Look men, you aint no pimp & you don’t got no hoez Its like you buying a fitted hat, with mix-match clothes Your just an unknown punk, what’s there to know? I could put yo rhymes in a river, and it still couldn’t flow Haters come in this ish, and do what they have to do Cuz I bet these kiddies go & get their shoes from FuBu Just doing my thing, on the stage with a mic in my hand I could throw yo punches in the air, and it wouldn’t land Fucka e-thug kids, and I gonna tell you this, ya’ll aint tough Said you was a crip or blood, fuck em both, all ya’ll do is bluff There’s Roc-A-Fella, DTP, G-Unit & etc. Records You can’t be a rapper, if you stay giving lectures Looka hea kids, this ish is bout to come to an end Until that, in the future, we’ll probably meet again Was bored here...Leave Feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179845
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03-02-05, 07:24 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Structure was off, wordplay was decent, few alright punches, nothin special, seen better from you, 6/10...peace out
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03-03-05, 06:25 PM
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IP: 258C A279
^yea the structure was off, did it at skool..thx anyway
uppin
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03-03-05, 06:35 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yeah, structure was twisted a little, but it was consistent, got the point across, haha, liked the 'hoez' line, i laughed, same with buying fubu shoes, hahaha, nice drop man.........oh yeah, go check mine out "obsession", leave some feed, word
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