Ethnic vs mizz fyre
 

Battle Rules:

topic- Final Battle
12-24 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-07-05 at 12:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

okay check in.......i dont know about that time...how many hours is that but...this my check...

Ethnic has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-04-05 01:07 PM.

yo.......is time fight.......final battle........yo....yo.....

guns have loaded,bullets amounted,
orders reorded,mans cross borders,
many have falded,noone care dont even knowed...
mans start final fight,cant back now they have surrounded.......
....full armored soldiers dont scare dead,
enjoy pain of enemy,send them to dead ped...
blacks,whites nomatter of colors,kill them all,
brake the wall bitch why you fighting for,
they not machines, you frightening doll...
they brake you,glift you skirt to your ears and make you........they kill everyone and stole their pictures,
desert eagle play and ak-47 sing for these creatures,
whose make features........
we dont get funeal,not even grave,
look this man he was so brave, noone regonize,
not even know his name........

mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 10:49 AM.

in 3rd last line that should be funeral...my bad........when she drop her verse.......

when she gonna drop........or gonna she even drop..........how much she has time left???

Growin up, at times wasn’t that great, still followed a path so straight
A road so long, feeling he’d always been directed by fate
At twenty five found his soul mate, with his children arriving later
A force greater than imagined, but in life there’s always one hater

Reached middle age, still striving for success, still blessed
Good health, family doing well, neighbors impressed
Mini battles his specialty, though wars was his main game
Fought in many for equality, everyone treated the same

A model citizen in society, till something happened so strange
At close range, guy realized his luck was about to change
Wrong place, wrong time, cops arrive and he’s the one blamed
Witnesses say he did it, he was innocent, or so he claimed

Was he framed, guy stood in front of a jury, telling his story
Enemies wishing for this moment, were looking on with glory
Couldn’t decide so the judges adjourned to discuss it further
Came back later, made an announcement guys guilty of murder

Tears run down his eyes, at the thought of 20 years inside
His pride dented, now a cells the only place he can reside
Been through things in his life, always one to contend
But this battle, was final, and he knew that’d bring his end

yo.......good.........now votes peoples......................

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Voted For: mizz fyre

yo damn this flow was tight, I loved the story you told with your rhymes my vote goes here

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^^^^thanx for votin....uppin for more votes ya'll...

Voted For: Ethnic

Ethnic have pretty good punches in his verse........
mizz fyres verse is too big......
mizz fyre dont have very good punches in my mind.....
Ethnics verse is pretty good long....
Everytime you do not have to get all off lines up...........
MY VOTE:Ethnic

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Voted For: mizz fyre

i think mizz fyre won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
ethnic u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite mizz fyre lines:
Wrong place, wrong time, cops arrive and he’s the one blamed
Witnesses say he did it, he was innocent, or so he claimed

Was he framed, guy stood in front of a jury, telling his story
Enemies wishing for this moment, were looking on with glory
Couldn’t decide so the judges adjourned to discuss it further
Came back later, made an announcement guys guilty of murder

favorite ethnic lines:
everyone and stole their pictures,
desert eagle play and ak-47 sing for these creatures,
whose make features........
we dont get funeal,not even grave,
look this man he was so brave, noone regonize,
not even know his name.....
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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
 

decent drop babygirl
you killin it again shorty

deep stuff, u got this in the bag!

uppin

^^^^thanx............up ya'll..........................

now my last uppin i think..........votes....................

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Voted For: mizz fyre

vote mizz fyre.

emotion myrical content and imagery took it for her in this one.

flow is good because of good bar length. plus it is more on topic than her competitors drop.

one sided really.
good drop.
return the favour in my battle against intesify effect please.

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Voted For: mizz fyre

I'm not going to quote lines...this was fairly one-sided...

mizz fyre- You've got a talent for lead-ins, no doubt about that....your intro connected nicely with the rising actions, nice vocab, but I'm more impressed by your storytelling ability..

Ethnic- Complexity wasn't there, neither was any real kind of story or substance for that matter...even you got to admit you got reamed on this one..

Voted For: mizz fyre

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186592
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Wellt this battle was one-sided.Miss Fyre had this easily.Flow,complexity,..everything.Ethnic,try makin your lines longer cause this style isn't working.U were alseo too simple.U didn't do a good job at all of gettin deep into tha topic.No Hate~1~

Vote-Miss Fyre