Battle Rules:

topic- Final Battle
12-24 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-07-05 at 12:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

okay check in.......i dont know about that time...how many hours is that but...this my check...

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Ethnic has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-04-05 01:07 PM.

yo.......is time fight.......final battle........yo....yo.....

guns have loaded,bullets amounted,
orders reorded,mans cross borders,
many have falded,noone care dont even knowed...
mans start final fight,cant back now they have surrounded.......
....full armored soldiers dont scare dead,
enjoy pain of enemy,send them to dead ped...
blacks,whites nomatter of colors,kill them all,
brake the wall bitch why you fighting for,
they not machines, you frightening doll...
they brake you,glift you skirt to your ears and make you........they kill everyone and stole their pictures,
desert eagle play and ak-47 sing for these creatures,
whose make features........
we dont get funeal,not even grave,
look this man he was so brave, noone regonize,
not even know his name........

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mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 10:49 AM.

in 3rd last line that should be funeral...my bad........when she drop her verse.......

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when she gonna drop........or gonna she even drop..........how much she has time left???

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Growin up, at times wasn’t that great, still followed a path so straight
A road so long, feeling he’d always been directed by fate
At twenty five found his soul mate, with his children arriving later
A force greater than imagined, but in life there’s always one hater

Reached middle age, still striving for success, still blessed
Good health, family doing well, neighbors impressed
Mini battles his specialty, though wars was his main game
Fought in many for equality, everyone treated the same

A model citizen in society, till something happened so strange
At close range, guy realized his luck was about to change
Wrong place, wrong time, cops arrive and he’s the one blamed
Witnesses say he did it, he was innocent, or so he claimed

Was he framed, guy stood in front of a jury, telling his story
Enemies wishing for this moment, were looking on with glory
Couldn’t decide so the judges adjourned to discuss it further
Came back later, made an announcement guys guilty of murder

Tears run down his eyes, at the thought of 20 years inside
His pride dented, now a cells the only place he can reside
Been through things in his life, always one to contend
But this battle, was final, and he knew that’d bring his end

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yo.......good.........now votes peoples......................

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uppin, uppin, uppin.......................................

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uppin.................votes....................... ...................

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uppin fo votes...................votes........votes........

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c'mon peeps lets get some votes in here please and thankyou lol...............

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Voted For: mizz fyre

yo damn this flow was tight, I loved the story you told with your rhymes my vote goes here

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