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MaD_KnighT vs CA$per
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-05-05 at 10:03 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 09:34 AM.
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MaD_KnighT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 09:34 AM.
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Yo yo yo........
You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/ U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/ Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse// Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse// Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/ All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/ Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran// Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan// |
Spellin mistakes:
1st line:slower 7th line:pulled slugs: 1. insects 2. fired bullets |
Sori about dat ^^^^^
it shud say pulled instead of :P |
ight imma do you like this...........
u think u can win son,?u better step up your game..... imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name.... you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz.... imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen......... its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine... why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies..... and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy... u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill.... u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill...... |
werd uppin this battle.............yall be sleepin on me com on yall voteeeeeeeeeeeee
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT
over all an alright battle Mad_Knight i was surprised by your verse overall i thought you had a better verse your structure was a lil wack but to be honest it wasnt that bad. you had some personals and you played off of his name . you had some personals in there as well. next time just bring out some more metaphors and up your vocab casper- an alright verse but nothing that really hit hard lol the only thing that i really liked was the milk and cookies line otherwise lol i think he had you everywhere else. overall you should work on your vocab and and work on your wordplay no hate man but you shoulda played off his name or his sig also like thug E both of you need work on your structure Mad_Knight takes this because he had better punches and was more creative in his verse.. casp don't go so basic with your verse man .. no hate you both are fam Vote//Mad_Knight |
^^^^^^^^^^^ahahahahahaha r u serious ahahahahahahahaahhahaha
ok wutever uppin this |
Voted For: MaD_KnighT
ou......s.hi...t.............lets see ca$h ight imma do you like this........... u think u can win son,?u better step up your game..... imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name.... you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz.... imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen......... its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine... why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies..... and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy... u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill.... u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill...... lets see.......no hard punches.....flow agh........ not good verse........... mad Yo yo yo........ You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/ U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/ Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse// Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse// Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/ All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/ Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran// Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan// ........wat a fuck......that was worst erse from u what im ever seen................opener no.......closer little better..... vote mad for better punches at the end.........elevate both........but that could be cauze you have only 15 min time........still vote mad Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
rememba dis is 3 tko!!!!!
am i rite ca$per??????? |
no does it say that in tha rules nope it dont you got dikk rider votes anyway
soo fuck that |
hahahaha
calm down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Voted For: CA$per
casper won this one eaisly punchelines harder vocan better the lines were structred alot better then mad knight casper had better metaphors and wordplay my vote=casper best line-----you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz.... imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics 7/10 please return the favor in my battle link in my sig |
more explanation---
caspers punchelines were direct and hit harder then mad knights did mad knight u came pretty weak with ur verse ya had basic vocab and ur ounchelines were used and tired ur verse was really boring to read no hate though keep workin ull get better peace |
Uppin This Battle Yall Make Sure They Aint Dickrider Votes
Like Turban And That Other Kidd |
Voted For: CA$per
Mad, bad verse overall. work on your punches. they were just weak as crap. one didnt make sense, and the rest were statements or just plain weak. personals sucked, you did a wordplay which wasnt that creative, and the casper line is weak. casper, work on your punches as well. your personals were weak, especially the graphics line. you started to diss wordman, but this is a battle betwene you and mad. overall, work on your punches and wordplay. v-casper |
uppin this battle............................................ .
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Voted For: CA$per
MaD_KnighT You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/ U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/ ^1st line's bleh, second was good Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse// Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse// hmmm, decent decent Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/ All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/ hehe,this one was funny Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran// Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan// ^good closer Okay battle here! You started off quite hesitating in my opinion, not that funny or hardhitting punches at the start but afterwards you picked up the pace real well. The flow was good, vocabulary was okay, might be improved a little but nothing too bad though. Structure was okay, personals were nice and punches were good. Not always too creative maybe but you had some funny stuff in there. Overall good verse... CA$per u think u can win son,?u better step up your game..... imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name.... ^hehe,good opener you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz.... imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics okay okay your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen......... its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine... decent why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies..... and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy... funny shit u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill.... u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill...... lmao, dope closer Nice verse, you stayed consistent with the punches which were creative and hardhitting most of the time. I laughed at some of those, personals were okay and the structure was cool. The vocab might be a little better but that didn't affect the content of your verse. I was feeling your flow, just try to get some more personals and higher vocab next time maybe but I definitely enjoyed reading your verse. In the end my vote goes to CA$per because he stayed consistent with the punches, started off with dope stuff right away unlike MaD_KnighT who had to warm up first |
Voted For: CA$per
yo u killed him pretty good shit i like the catholics part that was my fav line...keep it up Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for CA$per
just checkn the polls since he is in my crew
aight |
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lol dickrider? i don't think so... i dropped a honest vote...and since when do newbs have dickriders? |
no but it wasnt an honest vote tha vets say i killed him but u and other dude say i lost com on turban be real u know i won anyway we boiz turban so i aint sayin no more
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Voted For: CA$per
yo.. not the best battle i seen but it was aiight.... this how i saw it... casper... you had some good ideas, a decent flow, nice punches includin the wordman one.. lol thats funny, ur structure was good just work on that a bit more, the complexity was a bit simple. you had good vocabulary and not many mulits.... 7/10 Mad.... your verse was alot more simple, didnt flow as well as caspers, your punches were sorta weak and ur structure needs improvment.. vocab needs to be extended on same with the complexity... no hate.. u want help just ask me :thumbup: opener - mad closer - casper flow - casper structure - casper punches - casper complexity - casper v/ casper... no hate homie.. enjoyment - casper |
Voted For: CA$per
Weak battle overall. Ca$per: Weak, not that creative and played punches. Mom punch, catholic punch, pussy punch. You gotta be more creative man. Your personal was bad, cuz I made him a sig and the graphic personal is just bad overall. All you really did was state things, and many were fake personals. Work on your punches and personals. Also, why did you diss wordman in the last line? Mad Knight: Fake personals, bad punches, bad metas, only decent thing was your flow. Work on real personals, no we came to your block ish. Your metas were weak, and your wording was horrible. Work on getting your wording to where people can actually understand your verse. Overall you need to work on wording, punches, and not using fake personals. Overall both of you need to elevate soon. Your personals were either fake, or weak. Punches were bad as was the vocab. I give this to Ca$per for harder and more consistant punches. v- Ca$per |
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