Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-05-05 at 10:03 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 09:34 AM.

MaD_KnighT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 09:34 AM.

Yo yo yo........

You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/
U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/
Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse//
Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse//
Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/
All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/
Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran//
Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan//

Spellin mistakes:
1st line:slower
7th lineulled

slugs:
1. insects
2. fired bullets

Sori about dat ^^^^^
it shud say pulled instead of :P

ight imma do you like this...........
u think u can win son,?u better step up your game.....
imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name....
you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz....
imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics
your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen.........
its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine...
why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies.....
and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy...
u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill....
u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill......

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werd uppin this battle.............yall be sleepin on me com on yall voteeeeeeeeeeeee

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Voted For: MaD_KnighT

over all an alright battle

Mad_Knight i was surprised by your verse overall i thought you had a better verse your structure was a lil wack but to be honest it wasnt that bad. you had some personals and you played off of his name . you had some personals in there as well. next time just bring out some more metaphors and up your vocab

casper- an alright verse but nothing that really hit hard lol the only thing that i really liked was the milk and cookies line otherwise lol i think he had you everywhere else. overall you should work on your vocab and and work on your wordplay no hate man but you shoulda played off his name or his sig also like thug E

both of you need work on your structure

Mad_Knight takes this because he had better punches and was more creative in his verse.. casp don't go so basic with your verse man ..
no hate you both are fam

Vote//Mad_Knight

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^^^^^^^^^^^ahahahahahaha r u serious ahahahahahahahaahhahaha
ok wutever uppin this

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Voted For: MaD_KnighT

ou......s.hi...t.............lets see
ca$h
ight imma do you like this...........
u think u can win son,?u better step up your game.....
imma make ya momz go back to her maiden name....
you lookin for a sig,but you even to new for graphicz....
imma leave you mourning,like tha pope with all them catholics
your ryming skillz,aint tha worst ive seen.........
its just too bad you got merked on your daily routine...
why dont u just chill,have sum milk and cookies.....
and i only say that,cause i know u too young for pussy...
u just got squashed,like a pimple on wordmans grill....
u and him should do tha same,invent a suicide pill......

lets see.......no hard punches.....flow agh........
not good verse...........

mad
Yo yo yo........

You spit slow dan slugs, but my slugs cum out 10 times faster/
U even step on dis site was rap verses worst diaster/
Im da bitch dat killed casper, while spittin a verse//
Dat bitch came 2 haunt me but now im his curse//
Wen i cut ur skinny white head off,u'll luk like casper fat n see through/
All ya M.O.B homies will cya n shout 'WHO DA FUK ARE YOU'/
Me n my peeps plled up in ur hood, n we heard u n ur bitches ran//
Now tell me wat da fuk does M.O.B. stand 4 Mob Of Bitches klan//
........wat a fuck......that was worst erse from u what im ever seen................opener no.......closer little better.....

vote mad for better punches at the end.........elevate both........but that could be cauze you have only 15 min time........still vote mad

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rememba dis is 3 tko!!!!!
am i rite ca$per???????

no does it say that in tha rules nope it dont you got dikk rider votes anyway
soo fuck that

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hahahaha
calm down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!